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Posted: 15 years ago

#171

shrina, chapter 3 was awesome!! Ridz is hilarious,

and Armaan is.. such a guy!! lol, nuff said!

thanks for continuing and for the PM, girlie!

<3 Sab

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kd_luv

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Posted: 15 years ago

#172

awsome man .....it was so sweet the way u hav described thier emotions.....its really nice ...way to go grl ..keep it up !!

ps: i love the sped by which u update ..plz keep tht up (fr sure)....gr8 goinn ...

already waiting fr the next updt !!!

hahahahah....!!😊

ASAP....

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sanjana25

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Posted: 15 years ago

#173

it was really good contd soon
thanx for the pm

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sweetaddiction

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Posted: 15 years ago

#174

lovedd it !!
esp the fact that u added every1s (armaan and ridz's) thots -- and the way u wrote it in was soo cute-- them thinking sumthin and then their internal turmoil--
my fav part-- armaan typing in and deleting the contact name for his ''ms woman driver''
gr8 part !!
pls update sooN !!! =)

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princess52

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Posted: 15 years ago

#175

did u reallly had to end this here????

gosshhh i m soo lovingg ittttt

the part was super cooool

i wanted to read more n more but well ..i guess u got tired writng all these

soo whn u gonna update next?????cant wait anymore....plzzzzz update sooooonnnnnn

love habs

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keya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#176

hi shrina

nice update.........really liked the ridz ammy convo...and the thoughts were funny n cool............the last part of ammy saving her cell the names werelol!!!!!.............g8

thx 4 d pm
update soon

luv
kj

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Shelina

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Posted: 15 years ago

#177

Hey dear:

Brilliant.......awesome update......

Loved the meeting btwn AR.......

The sparks are starting to fly......lol

Continue really soon pls...

Thnks for the PM

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rav

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Posted: 15 years ago

#178

heylooo shrinzzyy.. (this name's copyrighted!!) hehe... okay back to the update.. i didn't think i would ever say this but you even outdid yourself with this part.. you go gurliee.... i totally loved the first meetings.. the portrayel of the strong physical attraction between AR was very well dun... and you kno what.. seeing it in the light of the story... i am glad that you made no attempt to sugar coat the first meeting attraction.. it was a pleasure to read.. :P i love armaan n ridzy in this one... fab going... you do some brilliant foreshadowing.. i particularly loved the one where armaan added ridz as 'riddhima' in his phone... mwwaahhhhzz.... so cont soon n love you shrizzyy.. P:S m right pissed off with the stupid code thingies as well... lolz.... tc... rav..x

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...Aphrodite...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#179

Wow!! I'm so overwhelmed with all the awesome replies!! Holy crap! Thank you so much guys and sorry for the late replies that are coming up. Needless to say my IF has been an absolute *insert inappropriate word here* today. How? Erm how about when I try to get to page 24 or any other page it instantly redirects me to the first page again?? Yes the replies might take a while! lol

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...Aphrodite...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#180

@ Aakriti - I know an Aussie desi chick?! That's crazy. I can't believe I've never visited your profile to know that. Wow I'm honored! lol 4.30am?! That's roughly the time I was writing it here in the UK...haha! Oooh that 2000 word essay does NOT sound fun! Good luck with it and I hope my little update didn't distract you too much 😉 haha. I'm so glad you liked it!! Seriously!

@ Sab - Heyy lovely!! Yay you enjoyed it! I love Riddhima's wit and yup Armaan sure is a guy. *shakes head* You're more than welcome for the PM, but you know that!

@ kd_luv - I do try to make an effort to depict their emotions well so thanks for appreciating lovely!! All the effort becomes more than worth it! Ahhh speedy updates might be not so speedy in the next few weeks! But let's not think about that yet! Thanksa for commenting!!

@ sanjana25 - Thanks for liking it lovely. You're welcome for the PM!

@ sweetaddiction - Aww I'm glad you liked the thoughts. I love writing about thoughts! Haha! That's probably because I'm a nosy girl though! I loved the last part too but I wish these darned codes didn't ruin the layout! Neverthless I love your support! Mwah!

@ princess52 - it had to end because Armaan, Riddhima and Shrina all wanted to head off in to dreamland! Lol I love you for your enthusiasm, I can't believe you wanted to keep reading. I'm flattered. If this is the reaction I'll get my parts are going to HUGEEEE haha...be careful what you wish for right?? *sings that Pussycat Doll song* Next part?? I have no cluee!!

@ Krazy4kash - I'm glad you appreciated the humour! After 18 years of my life being told "Shrina are you retarded? You are SO not funny" this is a refreshing change! lol Glad you loved Armaan's perverted mind!

@Sheldev - heyyy lovely!! The sparks sure are flying for are lovely couple!! Many more to come though so stay tuned! You're always welcome for the PM and I'll try my best to continue soon so we get to see what happens next! Thanks!!

@ Ravvy - Hey girlie!! Haha to the copyright!!! Outdid? *holds on to her desk and hyperventilates* Really?! I know people just think I'm fishing for compliments when I say that the update could've been better but I really honestly do mean it. So you telling me I outdid my self is a huge compliment! Yeh I didn't want to turn it in to a "Love at first sight" saga. More like lust because love comes afterwards.They've just met and they're really attracted to each other but I refuse to have soppy music and violins playing in the background! lol I'm so happy that everyone liked that last part especially. I was expecting comments like "Oh my god Shrina you're such a perve!" Which I won't dispute but hey! LOL Love you right back Ravvy!

Side note - Hey Mr *nsbp or rspca or 911 or nspcc or abcd* Please go back to strange alphabet land and leave me alone! It's just that you're driving me crazy!