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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: miiroxxsweet

just finished reading all the parts so far!!!!!!!!!!

plz cont soooooooon

hello welcome ...
thanks glad you liked alkl the part ...
well my name is Heaven G....
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Posted: 15 years ago

Sorry double post

Edited by HeAvEnS - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

PART11

GUYS I WILL ONLY SEND PM TO THE PERSON WHO WILL COMMENT BECAUSE THEIR IS ALOT ...TO PM..........

In the morning.....At 4:45 AM....all were ready to leave for Mumbai...they had fun treating the people.......Now all are standing near the bus...

And anjali looking at the bus was really shocked to see such a beauty ...but didn't show ...attitude problem......

Okay ready guys...asked armaan...while putting the suitcase inside the bus with rahul's help.....and we will reach their in 5 hours...come 'on now get in the bus...said armaan

Now they rest for a bit and stop to eat...then after 5 hours they reach sanjeevani...All get off ...now all are standing while driver bringing their bags....

Okay so guys...report tomorrow at 7:00 morning at nurse station...don't be late...said armaan looking at them...kreeti came...

Hello doctors ...hope your trip was good...Asked kreeti..

Yes madam said rahul while all nodded...

Anjali left as she saw the driver came...

And now all were standing there ...armaan was talking to the driver.And angel and ridhima was talking about how the trip was fun...

Kya abhi bi app sanjeevani aayo gi...asked ridhima...

Yes we are actually funding some programs...You'll know about tomorrow so ...said angel..oh said ridhima..And Rahul and Muskaan ... were in their own world...rahul pulled her hand i n his hands..

Keh de na Muskaan..Said rahul ..

kya..Asked muski..Teasing him...

please ...said with puppy look..

okay ...rahul i ...but before any one could say anything the ward boy came with three car keys and handed to Rah, An, A ... and the all three cars were in the parking lot ..Looking beauties ...Muskaan and ridhima .mouth hang up looking at the car's direction...

The cars were washed and Muskaan looked at rahul to armaan...........

Why do you have the same cars...asked Muskaan looking at trio..

I don't know...Said rahul... why do you have the same car as me sir asked in faked tone rahul...

Armaan shrugged his shoulder ...and angel...looking here and there...

Kreeti came back...

Okay so you guys get going...As you have to report early...said kreeti...

Now the question was forgotten ...and all went...home..

At the apartment...

Muskaan and ridhima kept ...their bags..

Muskaan yawned...So tired...par mazza bahot aya na ...camp par...bahot hi khoobsurat jagzh thin a..

Ha muski...badhi hi shanty thi waha.... agreed ridhima...

Chal toh bi shower lele...main toh sone ja rahi ho...bahot tired hoon...raat ko uthana okay dinner ke time.. Said muski leaving to her room...and ridhima also went to shower later she went to sleep too as all were tired

************

Malik HOUSE...

Things were totally different or could be unexpected there was silence but suddenly...

Aryana...ki bachi ruk ja said rahul running behind angel who was running in front of him and stuck her tongue out

Pakdo ....awed rahul baby ko mujhe pakdna hai...smirked angel at him who was standing in front of her looking daggers at her ....and love seat was between then and now they both were running round around the furniture

Angel mujhe teas karne main bara majja atta hai na abhi majja chakhata hoon tujhe sayd rahul...who almost caught her but ran into armaan who came out of the study after hearing all the noise ...before rahul could hit the carpet armaan hold him from shoulder and made her stand on his feet and both turned around her angel's giggling.............

What's so funny and why are you making all the noises...said armaan little irritated because he was doing some important hospital's work...

Voh Bhai ...tried angel but only to cut it out from rahul who started his story before she get away as usual

Well Bhai she was teasing ...said rahul who looked proud to complaint about his enemy to the teacher

No i was not...Angel tried to defend herself.

Yes you were over ruled rahul.

No

Yes

No

Yes...

Stop yelled armaan who was waiting for an explanation but all he got more headache...

No more noise said armaan loud and clear to both of them rahul nodded and armaan looked at angel who was standing...

You got it said armaan pointing his figure to angel who nodded immediately

Good said armaan and left to the study back.... and rahul and angel looked at each other and start running again....

*************

IN Anjali's house she was sitting on her bed and thinking of armaan and was planning to tell her dad hurries up....

************

Man whose back was faced toward us in black...

Mera kaam kal se hi shurru karna hai nahi toh acha nahi hogga ...main sab karloo ga par tum paise leke mujhe baar hi milna ...said man on the phone roiling the bottle in his hand on the table

***********

Mere pyaare bache mujhe miss kiya ...main bi tum sab ko miss kiya...said atul sitting to the level of his plant and talking to them

********

Vivek got home and freshened up and was drinking...and thinking of ridhima....

Bus thodi der aur phir main tumhe apna banloo ga ... aur phir tum kabhi bi mujhse gabroougi ...ah can't wait...And went to sleep as they have to leave sanjeevani

DONE..... NEXT IN SANJEEVANI....

SORRY FOR THESHORT PART BUTT WAS HAVING HETRIC PRACTING AFTER SCHOOL WHICH GOES FOR MORE THAN 4 HOURS ...SO GET HOME LATE AND HAD TO STUDY SO COULDN"T UPDATED

CCOMMENT HEAVEN

LOVE YOU ALL ...

Edited by HeAvEnS - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh jannat
what is this so small?
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz upload soon
i so love this ff and want some AR scenes
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do soon
i cant wait
Edited by armaankashridz - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyy heaven
lovely part
i hope u r planning to get AR together soon
n the teasing should be more
cont soon
n also pm me whenevr u update
bii
tc
luv dhruvika
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Posted: 15 years ago
that was lovely!! waiting for AR to get together!! Thanks for the PM!!


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Posted: 15 years ago
y was a small part........ n no AR today.😭...........................................

thanks for the pm dear

Edited by ishwariya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey heaven!!
loved the part!
it was kinda shrt..but its okay.. atleast yu updated =)
anyways..
i liked angel n rahul's fight.. lol
just like me n my bro.. haha
=P
do cont soon =)
<3
HinaL
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved the part
although it was short
but the vivek part was interesting, i hoping to see armaan and riddhima's love from next part
do update the next part soon

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