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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: little_dragon
this is truely interesting. Any time u write a ff include me to ur pm list. I love readin them. So do include me here too...

Priya di

come on

u are also the first in all my ff's pm lists

and cho cweet of u to say this.

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never have forgotton u,

and never will.

love Lina.

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Komal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#52

hey this was the best ff i read plez continue and pm me.

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#53

Originally posted by: SanaHeartMayur
hey this was the best ff i read plez continue and pm me.

Thank u

so much

I will add you as soon as possible.

Which means right now

hehhehehe😆

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Ally

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Part 4

It was a book. Nupur holded it and it looked very old. A voice came from behind her.

G:Di jaldi se aao. Bahar akele kya kar rahi ho?

N:Ayi, Gunjan.

She putted the book in her bag and went inside. They all looked around the place. Then heard someone coming. It was the servant. He was really scary looking.

Servant: Gi?

S:Ummmm, woh humari baher garri karab ho chuki hai, so please can we stay here for tonight?

M:Humara matlab hai ke kya hum yahan aaj raat betah suckte hai?

The servant looked at everyone, then at Nupur and Gunjan.

Servant:Gi, yahan ayi e.

The gang followed him into a big room. They all went inside.

Servant: App sab ko bahat bhook laag rahi hogi, toh mein abhi neeche khana laaga ta hoon.

He looked at Gunjan and Nupur again. With his scary eyes. And went away.

D:Kitna ajeeb nukar hai.

U:I know deeds.

B:Ugh I don't want anything. He is so scary looking.

D:I know dodo.

Everyone takes turn to get fresh, but they weren't planing to eat anything. They all went outside the room. Except Gunjan. She was the last one to go to the bathroom to get fresh. Gunjan wash he face with hot water. But she doesn't notice a women in white behind her, her face was cutted in half. Then Gunjan feels someone behind her. So she looks back. No one. She was about to go with the gang, then she heard the water tipping from the tub. The tub was covered with plastic curtains. She wanted to know what it was so she remove the curtains.

G:Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Samrat heard her scream and went to the room.

Hope you like it, everyone, and I know long time I haven't update it. So here, tell me how you think of it?

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Ally

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#55

Promo

Uday: Ahhhhhh

Servant: Kya hua?

Benji: Yeh kya hai?

Servant: Insaan ka cutta wa haath?Hahahaha

Samrat:Hahahahah, lets eat it fast.

Nupur hugs Mayank,

N:Koi hai wahan, parde ke pichhe.

M:Koi nahi hai.

S:Shhhhhhh

G:Mujhe choor na matt, or I will die.

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Komal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#56

I just read the promo

why is Samrat saying that?

So excited to know whats going to happen next.

And plez pm me next time.

XOX Sana XOX

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Ally

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Posted: 15 years ago

#57

Thanks so much Maria

Sorry Sani

will add you right now.

And don't worry

you will know whats going on in my next update.

😊

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zoya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#58

creepy yaar

but loved it

plzzz continue soon

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#59

lina...............vry nice update & promo dear........plzzzz continue soon

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Priyanka

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Posted: 15 years ago

#60

OMG .😲.....poor gunjan.....i think nupur should'nt have kept the book....i hope everything is fine.......... oh...sammy run!!.....😲awesome part lina.......please update soon.pm me

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