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topsyturvy23

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hey really nice one shot i really liked coz it was a long one....thanks for pm plz do keep writing stuff like this

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Very very sweet....loved it! there is a potential to continue writing more!

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write more wen u gt time pls............ we all want more!!!
gr8 work....... kindly continue pls

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Thanks guys!! 🤗

I'd surely continue it. 😃

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really superb one yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thanx a tonn for d pm.........
luved it !!!!

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hey kanky it was soooooooooo sweet one shot dear......i felt nice to see apologising nups.....soooo sweet...

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preksha07

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hey yaar i m really sorry 4 such a late reply....u know i m not keeping well......nyways........it was just awesome.......u can surely cont. it......

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aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

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hey Jiah..nice OS..

Nupur started crying?!..aww..n Mayank melted?!..tats so sweet..n m sure he loves her a lot..Nupur shud trust him at times!

n the SG scene was cute too where Samrat tries to cheer her up!..lol..

do write more

-Aish

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Kavya_geethika

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Superb..!👏
Loved it Kanky..! 🤗

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Hello everyone, the weekend's on and I have no other work to do, plus I love writing OS's on the spot. 😆 Here is another OS on MayUr, this my Diwali gift for all my IF mates. I hope u guys like it. 😳

Nupur finally forgave Mayank. They returned to Mumbai a day before Diwali. Samrat had also confessed his love to Gunjan. There was a slight change in Benjy's feelings towards Dia, same was the case with Dia. And in such a romantic environment, Uday . . . the poor, lonely bachelor was all by himself. 😆

This time for a change, Mayank had planned a get together on the day of Diwali. He was indeed changing. 😊

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In the evening, at Mayank's home:

U to M - Hey Mayank! Hum aagaye!!

M - Hum? Tum akele ho Uday.

U - Tumhe mere haath mein ye burger aur pastries k dabbe nahi dikh rahe kya!!

Mayank glared at him. 😡

U - Wo . . . umm, Gunjan ne bola tha tumhe bata k liye, ki wo aayegi Samrat k saath aur Nupur thodi der se aayegi.

M - Oh accha. (In a sad tone, he really missed Nupur. )

U - Kaise boyfriend ho tum Mayank. Meri behen ki life barbaad ho gayi.

M - Kya? 😡😡 (Mayank caught hold of his collar)

U - Aur nahi toh kya! Maine socha ki Nupur k der se aane ki baat sunke tum udass ho jaoge aur reason puchoge but tumhe toh koi farak hi nahi pada! Aaj main nahi darne wala, main toh bass test kar raha tha ki tum actually Nupur k Rajma, sorry Raj ho k nahi. 😕

M - Whatever! Tum mujhe test karoge? 😡

U - Haan! Nupur neeche hai, Gunjan baad mein aayegi. Jao, maine jhut bola tha! Uski help karo bahut saman hai upar lane ko. 😕

M - UDAY!!!! 😡😡😡

******

Mayank went downstairs, he saw Nupur taking things out of Dia's car, Dia had already gone up with some other things along with Benjy. Mayank kept on staring at her for a long time, he couldn't take his eyes off her! She was wearing a beautiful bottle green lehnga with not much make up, for a change. He always loved her non make up look. She looked like and angel, his angel. 😳

N - MAYANK! Mujhe ghorna band karo aur ye saman uthao! (While giving him a packet full of crackers)

M - Ye kya hai?

N - Inhe patake kehte hain.

M - I know that Nupur but I hate them! 😕

N - Tabhi toh layi hun, tumhe acche lagenge, dekh lena!

M - Nahi lagenge.

N - Lagenge.

M - Nahi.

N - Haan.

M - Nahi.

Just then, Samrat came up to em. He and Gunjan came there on his bike and the momemnt he reaced their they saw em fighting! 😆

S - Bass karo guys! Bass.

G - Haan Di, tum log toh abhi bhi itna jhagad te ho. 😕

N - Kya Gunjan, is Samrat k saath hote hi toh iski tarafdari karni shuru kardegi, muhe nahi pata tha! 😉

G - Di. 😳😳

******

The party took place. It went on smoothly, Nupur and Gunjan spent some time with Shilpa. Shilpa loved both of em and considered em as her own daughters. Dia also liked her company since her mother had also left her long back. While the guys had fun, teasing Samrat and Mayank. For a change, both Uday and Benjy weren't scared of Mayank cause he could do nothing when Nupur and his mom were ariund. 😆 Samrat was enjoying all that. After some time, they all had their dinner and then did the Arti -

MM - Nupur beta, Mayank . . . idhar aao.

M - Jhi Maa!

N - Kya baat hai Aunty?

MM - Har diwali Mayank akele hi Diwali Poojan mein Arti karta hai . . . aaj se har baar tum bhi uske saath Arti karogi.

N- Wo kyun Aunty? 😳

MM - Kyunki, finally my son has found a gal for himself who can handle him very well. Isse sambhalna koi asaan baat nahi hai.

Nupur could hardly say anything. 😳 Even Mayank felt awkward but the condition was worse for Nupur. 😳

S - Guys, pooja karo bhi, shakalien kyun dekh raho ek dusre ki. Hume crackers burst karne bhi jaana hai. 😆

Mayank and Nupur did the Arti together. 😳 After that, Samrat and Gunjan did that. 😳 And one after another everyone was done with it and all of them went out for bursting crackers. 1 hr passed and Mayank had actually started enjoying. 😆

N - Dekha Mayu! Maine kaha tha na you'd enjoy! 😉

M - Mayu? 😕

N - Kyun? Main tumhe Mayu nahi bula sakti? Kitna cute sa nickname hai.

Mayank held her hand and kissed it. 😳

M - Haan, bola sakti ho! Ab ek ek karke tumhe aur bahut se hak milenge. 😉

N - Mayank!! 😳😳

M - Correction - Mayu! 😆

Nupur ran away. 😳

*****

At last, everyone had left except Nupur and Gunjan, They decided to stay back and help Shilpa clean up everything. 😊 When they were done, Mayank asked his Mom for her car so that he could drop both the gals home.

MN - Bye gals!! Thank you!!

G - Thanks mat boliyo Aunty, hume aake bahut accha laga! Aur waise bhi ab toh life long aana jana laga rahega, haina Di? 😉😆

Mayank and Nupur both were extremely amazed her statement. What had happened to the shy and introvert Gunjan they knew. 😲 Mayank could see Nupur's awkwardness 😳 -

M - Gunjan, tum par aaj tak Nupur ki company ka asar toh nahi pada, Samrat ka itni jaldi kaise?

Gunjan blushed.

MM - Bass kar Mayu . . . koi apni saali . . . mera matlab itni sweet si friend se aise baat karta hai kya? 😆

Mayank glared at his Mom. Nupur blushed while Gunjan simply grinned. 😆

****

Nupur and Gunjan went downstairs. Just then, someone pulled Nupur inside the store room on the ground floor.

N - Aah!

M - Nupur, main hun!!

N - Hah, tum! Aise kyun kheecha mujhe! Apne hi ghar mein chor bane phir rahe ho! 😆

M - Shut up! Tumhare saath bilkul bhi time spend nahi kiya aaj, bass isliye. (while putting her hair at the back of her ear. 😳)

N - Haan toh aise karoge kya time spend. 😳😳

M- Nupur ek time pe ek hi kaam karte hain warna dono kharab ho jate hain. 😆 Isliye, either blush or speak.

N - Shut up. 😡

M - Okay fine, chalo!

N - Better!

M - Ek sec . . .

M - Kya?

Mayank gave her a slow and lingering peck on the cheek. Nupur blushed hard. 😳

M - Ab chalo!!

*****

Mayank dropped both the gals home. The whole gang enjoyed that Diwali very much but it was the best Diwali for Mayank and Nupur. Their reltionship had now got a new meaning and their bond had grown stronger! That Diwali brought sheer happiness and joy to their lives. 😳

~ The End ~

This is a gift from my side to all my IF mates on the auspicious occasion of Diwali. I hope u guys liked it. Please hit the like tab and do comment. Thanks! 😊

Love,
Jiah (Kanky) 😳

Edited by Jiah.Angel - 15 years ago

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