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Posted: 15 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

i know.......its hard for me too.......but i have no other option.....
actually he gave me a letter telling me his reviews abt my story "for ur happiness"
i mean yeh story sirf simmi aur usne padhi hai.........and this was the first story i wrote abt mayur.....
infact the first story i wrote when i became 16......
and he read that and gave me his reviews in the form of a letter.....and that letter told me how much he knows me.....
his comments + his words touched me a lot!

i wonder if only i am the onw whom he praises so much!

awwwww how sweet of him!!

realli i neva knew that

that is sooo sweet/cute that he wrote a letter

mahi i think ur the onli one...

cuz th time and effort he takes to write and tell u this

stuff

i think he is serious about u!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
well i got back with my this time short comments........

meri observations ke liye tyaar ho jao........

pata nahi kyun but i feel like killing ajay......itna kuch karne ke baad bhi he wants to see nupur? and that too she is kidnapped!

did i told u that i hate rv? love doesn't mean that the person shud be urs.....love means to simply let it be free.....u cant keep the person trapped........then its not love! its only attraction......i hate rv......how dare he touched her? i am feeling so sad for nupur......aaj hi use itne dukh dene the? well but mayank tumhe bacha lega nupur..........and rv is a psycho.......

so nupur called mayank.......thank god! everyone else was so worried......nupur hits rv??? he deserved that! thank god mayank saved her........actually she saved her herself.....but mayank rescued her......she wanted a space change........she needed that.....

awesome AR scenes.....SANAM!!!!!!! i am gonna kill u! yeh song maine decide kiya tha use karne ke liye......but u used it! chalo phir bhi main ise use karoongi......... 😃 but do i need to tell that i LOVE this song? hamari frd ne itna aacha song jo likha hia........who wont love it?and besides it perfectly suits the situation......

i am happy that now mayur are talking......nupur tumhari manzil toh mayank hai......what? mayank did proposed her! i loved that! but i know that situations are making her think else wise......i knew that why she refused! but mayank has to do something.....and she hugged her father?? that's really love......

dont say no nupur...........dont......he really loves u.......shefali has no problem with sanaya and gunjan? is she mad? i cant understand! she is like a devi in shows........gunjan ki bidai ho gayi? comeon! nupur ki problem bhi sahi hai......she thinks that he only is sympathetic towards her.....while he really loves her!

AR ek ho gaye........what abt my mayur? awesome part! loved it to bits......but i really am waiting for the next part......and i hope that its not the end of it.....


tremendously excellent update.......

do continue soon....

and can i ask for a favour? yaar i too wannabe a character in this ff.....i wud miss this ff.......

but i guess that not's possible.....

but do continue soon........
Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

well i got back with my this time short comments........

meri observations ke liye tyaar ho jao........

pata nahi kyun but i feel like killing ajay......itna kuch karne ke baad bhi he wants to see nupur? and that too she is kidnapped!

did i told u that i hate rv? love doesn't mean that the person shud be urs.....love means to simply let it be free.....u cant keep the person trapped........then its not love! its only attraction......i hate rv......how dare he touched her? i am feeling so sad for nupur......aaj hi use itne dukh dene the? well but mayank tumhe bacha lega nupur..........and rv is a psycho.......

so nupur called mayank.......thank god! everyone else was so worried......nupur hits rv??? he deserved that! thank god mayank saved her........actually she saved her herself.....but mayank rescued her......she wanted a space change........she needed that.....

awesome AR scenes.....SANAM!!!!!!! i am gonna kill u! yeh song maine decide kiya tha use karne ke liye......but u used it! chalo phir bhi main ise use karoongi......... 😃 but do i need to tell that i LOVE this song? hamari frd ne itna aacha song jo likha hia........who wont love it?and besides it perfectly suits the situation......

i am happy that now mayur are talking......nupur tumhari manzil toh mayank hai......what? mayank did proposed her! i loved that! but i know that situations are making her think else wise......i knew that why she refused! but mayank has to do something.....and she hugged her father?? that's really love......

dont say no nupur...........dont......he really loves u.......shefali has no problem with sanaya and gunjan? is she mad? i cant understand! she is like a devi in shows........gunjan ki bidai ho gayi? comeon! nupur ki problem bhi sahi hai......she thinks that he only is sympathetic towards her.....while he really loves her!

AR ek ho gaye........what abt my mayur? awesome part! loved it to bits......but i really am waiting for the next part......and i hope that its not the end of it.....


tremendously excellent update.......

do continue soon....

and can i ask for a favour? yaar i too wannabe a character in this ff.....i wud miss this ff.......

but i guess that not's possible.....

but do continue soon........

again mahi this is not short😆😆

par its okayy!!

tu na seriously mere bhahi ki magazine forum mein critic banja

she would someone like you

who critques everthing because

she is xactly like u abt everything she has a comment!

yes dear next part is the end of ot it

dun wrry don't u knwo the saying

every end is a start of something new😉

-sanam-

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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
heyyy dear,
awesome FF


do writte more FF


love
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45

hey hun, wow you started another ff, amazing , i love the conept it seems different can't wait for the first part, i'm soo excited, but don't forget to update your other ff, okay cause that one is my fave till now, anywass congrats on the new ff, start soon and pm me ookay!!!!!!!!

luv priya

CONTINUE SOON!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by kelly789 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
hi cool intro
please add me 2 ur pm list
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47
cool character sktch cnt wait to read it
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
awesome! The characters seem really cool! Update all of ffs soon! lol
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49
hey
that was gr8 intro
loved it
thnxs for the PM
nruti
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50
i likd the intro..........plzzzz continue sooon....n add me in ur pm list for this ff also.....😃

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