Yaadein-Memories Forever! New thread link: Pg 152 - Page 11

Sounds good...waiting for the update.

u need to continue ma dear... write more... its a interesting concept.. would love to read more...

Originally posted by: little_dragon

Zoah meri jaan...

i jus read the intro and promo today... BTW appologies for delay...

Intro - u had hit me wit a googly... intro was jus mind-blowing as well as heart breaking... Started with a death... buh Y u made mayu marry dia and hav a baby !!!!!

mayu & dia !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

now will mayu fall for nupz and they marry ????? hope it goes tat way... i wud love to see mayur together....

neways ur story... lets c how u take it....

hope its not HAHK types.,...

Promo - dashing promo.... now very eagerly waiting for the updates...

P.S. do add me to ur PM list... wud love to read the further part of ur FF to knw wat the end is all abt... curiosity kills ma dear.... thanks for the promo PM...

thanks a ton priya! will efo pm u and will be updating tomorow night hopefully!

Originally posted by: ch0c0lates

Sounds good...waiting for the update.

thanks huni! update will be tomorow night!

Originally posted by: little_dragon

u need to continue ma dear... write more... its a interesting concept.. would love to read more...

so write more ....

thanks priya! will defo write more!

nice one plz update soon ....... nd plz plz pm me coz i am not an active member so cant add u in buddy list dear ......

Originally posted by: stuti123

nice one plz update soon ....... nd plz plz pm me coz i am not an active member so cant add u in buddy list dear ......

thanks huni! will surely pm u!

Hey dear! Sorry for late reply! Interestng promo! Thanx for the pm!

heyy i am shafia i love your intro and promo plzzz contuied soon u can add me in your pm list

thank u sooooooooooooo much guyz, for ur support and lovely comments! it really encoureged me! here is the first part! plz do comment/critisize!

Part 1

as she reaches mayank's room, she pushes the door inside,which was already open. as the door open she glance through the entire room, which was as perfect as mayank and dia aslways wanted. everything placed correctly on its place.

then suddenly, something caught her attention as she looked at the bed, placed in the middle of the door with white and cream bedsheet placed neatly and 2 pillows with the same designs kept on the correct place!

she walks towards the bed and finds beautiful baby sleeping looking like some fairy staright came from heaven, on the bed with light yello blenket covered her body! the baby looks as white as milk and as gorgeous as an Angel! yes, she is Dia and mayank's daughter!

Nupur sits beside her on the bed and keeps staring at the little angel with red teary eyes. the baby looked exactly like dia! all her features reminded of dia, the same sharp eyes, the same nose, the same pinkish lips, everything exactly the same! Nupur bends down to kiss her forehead! suddenly, she remembers y she came here? to look for mayank? she gets up from the bed wiping her tears with back of her hands and walks in the direction of balcony!

As she reaches there shee sees someone standing near the balcony wall,facing his back to nupur ans leaning his right arm towards the wall! nupur goes near him and place his right hand on his left side shoulder thinking he will responce by looking back at her, but she failed. he did not looked at her or even reacted! he was still in the same position! nupur moves forward to face him. the face of the man reveals! it was mayank Sharma standing there wearing while kurta pajama with no expression in his face and complete black eyes as if some statue standing there instead! nupur looks at him with all red teary eyes!

nupur (cried infront of him): mayank r u ok?
mayank (black eyes does not reply):...........................
nupur (this time with concern): mayank r u ok?
mayank still does not react or reply to her questions! he is stills to the moment when dia took her last breaths in front of him! from then, mayank has not said anything or react to anything, not even to his own daughter! he did not even see her! seeing mayank like this nupur thought mayank could not take the fact that dia left him and is suffering from trauma, a mental shock! she breaks down in front of him!

nupur (screams in pain) MAYANK SHE IS GONE! DI IS NO MORE!
still no responce from mayank! she again screams!

nupur: Mayank, say something god damn it! (says this while shaking him) she is DEAD! did u hear me? she is DEAD! (emphasize on the word DEAD)

saying this she shatters in tears and falls down on her knees with her face buried in her hands! for a while, there was nothing in the room but deathly silence! suddenly, nupur thought of something! she gets up from the floor while wiping her tears! she looks at mayank helplessly who is still in the very same position!
she thought to herself: ab ek hi rasta hai, tumhe is sadme se bahar nikalne ka!

She walks inside the room, towards mayank's cupboard! she opens the door and takes the red dupatta out from the very first drawer! this dupatta is the mayank and dia's love momento! she takes the dupatta out and again walks towards mayank! she goes in front of him!she brings his left hand out and places the dupatta on it! he feels something on his hand! he looks down and finds the red dupatta on his hand! it was the dupatta which mayank gifted dia when he proposed her on the last day of college!
seeing the dupatta, the only word came out of his mouth was Dia...................