Childhood Prem (RM/AR/AA MIni FF) - Part 2

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Hey guys here's part 2 of my story. I hope u really enjoyed reading part 1. And Im sure U will enjoy Part 2 too.😊

Part 2

Recap

All the friends Muskaan, Riddhima and Anjali met after a long bombastic summer vacation on the way they usually walk to the school...

In the midst, Muskaan saw a blind lady who needed to go to the saibaba mandir but had to cross the road...So Muskaan with Riddhima and Anjali helped her through Saibaba mandir...

In this way they all got only 5 minutes to reach to the school...They were all scared of Mrs. Gracy who was very punctual about her timings...So if they got late, they are in huge trouble.


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Ab aage...

The 3 girls babaji ki meherbani se reached 2 minutes earlier before their prayer started'They went straight towards their classroom running'.threw their backpacks and quickly ran outside towards their class for the prayer'

Since the day was beautiful'Pretty hot and sunny, the prayer was outside'All the students stood in a straight line'Each class had their own monitor who had to take care of the mischievous students''.Some teachers stood right in front of their class students while some in back'Few students from 8th grade stood right in the middle to sing the prayer out loudly on the mike so that the little children in 1st or 2nd grade will get to hear the prayer properly in the crowd.

Prayer Lyrics:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I9HWJxr4vqg

Soon the prayer was over and all the students were moving towards their classes one by one' Muskaan was waiting for their class to go inside and suddenly in that silence she heard a guy whispering'

Guy: arey Muskaan yaar- (whispering)

Muskaan got scared and she put her hand on her chest with her huge black eye balls popping out and mouth open'She turned around and saw Atul smiling and waving at her'

Atul, a very sweet and plant loving guy. He gets really angry when someone tears a leaf from a plant. Once he saw a 3-year old peeing on the plant. He quickly ran towards that plant, pulled that kid away. He didn't care about the kid but he took that plant home and washed it with soap. And then named that plant Sweety.

Atul: haan to main kya keh raha tha ki- (still whispering)

Muskaan interrupted in the middle and said:

Muskaan: toh who kameena tut tha jo meri jaan lene pe atka tha'?

Atul: Muskaan tum aise kyon bol rahi ho main kyon tumhari jaan loonga'main to bas yahi puchna chata tha ki aaj pehli baar tum late kaiseho gayi ? tumhe pata hai naa late hona buri baat hai'

Muskaan: oye chup kar, koomkaran ki chatti aulaad'abhi woh moti Mrs. Gracy tujhe sunlegi na toh tere saath saath mujhe bhi iss dhup mein knee down karke apna pasina bahana padega'(whispering)

Atul: Okay.Sorry. (made a puppy face) I'll ask you later'!!

Muskaan: aww atul. Ur shoo sweet. (Pinching his cheeks politely)

Atul: Thank you !

Finally it was their turn to go into their class. Everyone was maintaining discipline. As soon as they entered their class, all the students started talking as Mrs. Gracy wasn't there in the classroom. Suddenly everyone's eyes were stuck at a guy who was carefully peeping out of the door.

As soon as Muskaan saw him, she yelled:

Muskaan: Oye Armaan, kya kar raha hain?

Armaan: shhhh. Chup. (finger on his lips) Mein Mrs. Gracy ko baat karte hue dekh raha hoon. Aur jaise hi woh ayegi tum logo ko ishara karoonga.

Riddhima: How sweet of you Armaan!

Armaan: (fake smiling) Oh Thank you Miss Basket. Pehli baar kuch acha moo se nikla.

Riddhima: Basket ? Why did u call me basket? And for your kind information there is no name like B-A-S-K-E-T !!

He walked towards her with a fake angry face.

Armaan: Miss Basket for your kind information, I am the smartest person in this class. Oh and weird logo ke weird naam hi hote hain. Do you get that ? (snapping on her face)

Riddhima: Mein weird nahi hoon. Aur tum, Tum, tum apni smartness apne paaaaaaaaasss (she saw Mrs. Gracy standing right in front of the door with a red tomato face.)

Armaan: haan haan kya hua? The Armaan Mallik ke samne bolti bandh ho gayi naa.

Riddhima tried to tell Armaan that Mrs. Gracy is standing right behind him.

Armaan: ab ye hoon hoon kya kar rahi ho?

Riddhima: hoon hoon piche dekho

Armaan: Kya hoon hooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnn (He turned around saying the last hoon)

Mrs. Gracy: Hoon (she said nodding her face)

Armaan: Oh hi Mrs. Gracy. (a big smile that showed his teeth)

Mrs. Gracy: What was all that, huuuuhhhhh. (ANGRY) 😡 😡

Armaan: Oh Mrs. Gracy, I was just monitoring the class. Remember when we were outside for the prayer you told me to stand in front of our class and then I had to report you if anyone misbehaved.

Mrs. Gracy: Oh Oh Oh I see. Ahh really nice kid. Thank You so much Mr. wats ur name?

Armaan: Armaan. Armaan Mallik.

Mrs. Gracy: Oh Armaan Mallik. But what was happening over here?

Armaan: aaaa Riddhimaaaa. (said without looking at her) And then quickly looked at her one eyebrow up. So Mrs. Gracy what happened was.

He was about to start saying the truth and then he felt a pinch on the back of his right thigh.

Armaan: ouch!! ( closed his eyes making them look wrinkly from top)

He turned around and saw Atul speaking

Atul: arey Armaan, ridzie ko punishment se bacha le yaar. Meh tere liye ek patta todke laoonga.

Armaan: arey lekin main us patte ka kya karoonga?

Atul: tu mera bhai hain naa. Tu apne bhai ki baat nahi manega. Please Armaan who Anjali ki best friend hain naa yaar.

Armaan: theek hai theek hai (said irritating from atul)

He turned around to Mrs. Gracy and lied: Mrs. Gracy Riddhima was just asking me a general knowledge math question. So that's wat we were talking abt.

Mrs. Gracy: Oh great Good Job Mr. Armaan. Im sure now everything's clear. So please take your seats.

Everyone took a deep breath as finally the conversation was over. But Riddhima was confused why Armaan saved her. She decided to ask him later.

In this way after 15-minute conversation, Mrs. Gracy started taking attendance. She called everyone's name one by one.

Anjali. And Anjali went yes ma'am.

Muskaan. Yes ma'am.

Riddhima. Yes ma'am.

Sumit. Yes ma'am

Parth. Yes ma'am

Siddhi. Yes ma'am.

Anisha. Yes ma'am.

Armaan. Yes ma'am.

Siddhi. Yes ma'am.

Viviksha. Yes ma'am.

Rahul. (no answer) Rahul. (again no answer) Rahul Garewal. (she got angry now)

Suddenly everyone saw a neat and clean guy entering in the classroom. He was wearing up-to-date uniform. Hair brushed very neatly and spikes in front shined very nicely in the daylight. His eyes showed his calmness, his innocence and his kindness. The eyeballs seemed like they were changing colors from blue to green to grey.

Muskaan was trying her best to see him. At first, as soon as he entered her eraser fell on the ground so she went to pick it up. When she looked up, he already reached till Mrs. Gracy and his back was facing everyone. Then, Atul sitting in front of her was blocking the most amazing sight. She then gave up and started taking her books out. And then she heard:

Rahul: Hello Mrs. Gracy. Good Morning. I am Rahul Garewal. I am a new student in this class.


Okay guys part 2 ends here. I hope you had fun reading it. PLease leve some sweet sweet coments. And tell me if its good not not. I tried to add pics but unfortunately I couldn't. Sorry for that. 😊Thank You soo much for reading it. 😊


Luv Vikshu...😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Great part!!!
Thanks for the PM..
I was really waitting for it,, please continue soon!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Great part!!!

Thanks for the PM..
I was really waitting for it,, please continue soon!!!!!!!



Heyy congrats ur the first one to comment....yay...Thnk u soo much....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Viviksha

Jo Bole So Nihal______________?
well amazing update
loved it to the core!
And argh..you put my name in your story..SOOO SWEET!
i loved this update becasue it was so funny! Lol..Atul will break a leaf! haha! and that poor kid going to the bathroom!
Lol..he washed the plant with soap! Lol
loved it to the core..
but oye..remember i am Riddhima :)
Lol and you and siddhu are Muskaan..okay :)
Luv Anu
Edited by peacewithin - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Jo Bolo So Nihaal!___________

I loved it Vikshu. It was adorable. I loved how you put my name in it. Thanks. I hope i continue to come in the story more often..lol😆

I loved how Armaan saved Riddhima. Too cute yaar. And i love how you described Rahul. The convo between Muskaan and Atul was adorable! I love Atul!
Well, can't wait for the next part. Thanks for the pm and update soon hun, this ff is really interesting.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice part!!
thanks for the pm!!
do continue soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: peacewithin

Hey Viviksha

Jo Bole So Nihal______________?
well amazing update
loved it to the core!
And argh..you put my name in your story..SOOO SWEET!
i loved this update becasue it was so funny! Lol..Atul will break a leaf! haha! and that poor kid going to the bathroom!
Lol..he washed the plant with soap! Lol
loved it to the core..
but oye..remember i am Riddhima :)
Lol and you and siddhu are Muskaan..okay :)
Luv Anu




Heyy Anu, Satsriakal
Jo bole Sonihaal____!!
Thank u soo much...Luved ur comment...very colorful...lol....
I put ur ad siddhu's brother's name too...haha...!! 😆

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: MuskaanGarewal1

Jo Bolo So Nihaal!___________

I loved it Vikshu. It was adorable. I loved how you put my name in it. Thanks. I hope i continue to come in the story more often..lol😆

I loved how Armaan saved Riddhima. Too cute yaar. And i love how you described Rahul. The convo between Muskaan and Atul was adorable! I love Atul!
Well, can't wait for the next part. Thanks for the pm and update soon hun, this ff is really interesting.



Siddhuuuu....Luv u....Thank u soo much...And I put ur and Anu's brother's name too....And u will come back in the story again...😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovebapu18

nice part!!

thanks for the pm!!
do continue soon!!



Heyy...Thnk u sooo much....will surely continue soon 😊
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Awesome update!
Loving the concept
Continue Soon...

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