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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: drishti_sajan

OMG lipsi u started a FF and u dedicated it to me and r other frnds!!! OMG i still can't believe it!!

luved the intro yaar!!! continue wid the 1st part soon....dieing to read itand add me to ur PM list!!

Lolz drish dont say so many Omgs ok!!

Thanksdear
I'm glad to have dedicated it to you all!!

Okie..I'm posting it in 10 min ok?

Ur added drish even if hadn't told me I could have added it!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks all!!i'm surprised at the response I got with 2-3 hrs even when I posted such a short intro..So I am posting this prior to my real intention to post it!!Thanks again guys and here's the second part...


Secrets unvieled

Part 1

A calm breeze was blowing a displacing a girl's hair..which slowly comes and crowds her face.She is continuously trying to blow the strand away but is unsuccessful.Just then a boy comes & brushes the strand off.the girl is shocked but then sweetly smiles

Girl: Thank you bhaiyya

Boy:hey gunjan!! mein tumko kitni baar kaho ke tum yahaan beach par mat aaya karo !! Ab to maa bhi delhi mein choot gayi..Ab tumhe kaun yeh sab sikayega?? Tum to goa ki beach ko to jaanti ho na??

Gunjan:sorry mayank,par mujhe wo hotel room mein ghutan si ho rahi thi so mein yahan aa gayi.Yeh job mujhe goa lekar aa tapka..Koi paas jagaha par interview ya office nahi ho sakta tha kya?.Iski waje se tumhe bhi apne boss ko kehkar Yahan transfer hona pada…😊

Mayank:Par meri pyari behna acchi reporter ka toh yahi kaam hota hai ghoom ghoom ke story likhna aur apne boss ko submit karna aur is kaam mein tumhara bhai kab kaam ayega!!wese wo ghutan wali problem tum chinta mat karo kal to tumhare oops..I mean hamare flat mein rehno ko mil jayega

Gunjan(laughs):thik he bhaiyya!!lekin mujhe abhi tak samajh nahi aa raha kit um jaisa sadu or what you say "dedicated to work" mere saath aaya aur wo bhi goa.Majra kya he?

Mayank(in a pretend angry tone):Tum bhi kam nahi ho!!!Gunjan!!! bade bhai se aise baat karte hein??

Gunjan-accha ji !!ulta chor kotwal ko date!

Both laugh at this.mayank looks fondly at his innocent sister…
Dressed in a off white pink salwar,she looked exceptionally like an angel come down from the sky.He pats her head and they both head off to the hotel room

On the way:

Gunjan suddenly remembers one thing

Gunjan : Par kal hi flat mein shift ho jayenge??? Kal to mera interview he 10:30 baje!!

Mayank :Don't worry meri gudiya..mein hoon na mein sab sambhal lunga..Chinta mat karo!! Tum pehle 9:30 baje hotel room se nikal jaan aur mein 8:00 baje hamare Flat mein pahunch jaunga..tum akele to jaa paogi ya a phir first mere saath flat dekhogi??

Gunjan-flat ka kya he kal to wahan hi shift ho rahe he..Waise mujhe decorative flat dekhna he...kabada nahi

Mayank:Thik he..Sab kaam mein karu aur phal tumhe mile right??

Gunjan:obviously mayu!!

Then mayank says with a slight grin "Gunjan!!" In such a way that they both begin to laugh & laugh and in such a way that all the people In the hotel thought that 2 mad people have come to stay in the hotel.
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Oof, "samrat,tum kab sudroge",A girls voice sounds😆

"OOFO NUPUR!!! Tumhe kaun keh raha he ke mere kapade yahan wahan rakhe ke liye!!,samrat answers back.

Nupur says with a slight angry n irritated mood, "Oye mister!!yahan waha nahin thik jagahe par rakh rahi hoon wo jo tum kabhi nahi karte.waise shukra karo yeh kapde jake tumhare par nahi pad rahe he!! Aur tum bhi na samrat mujhe kitna pareshan karte ho!
Pata nahi sir ne tumhe office flats mein mera partner kyun bana diya,By god!!
Samrat says with a grin "accha!! Wo kaun thi jo sir se bol rahi thi ,*Clears his throat and Says in a nupur kinda tone*,"Sir please please mujhe samrat ke saath flat share karna he"

Nupur exclaims in a teasing kind of tone,"Samrat!!!"

And they both begin to laugh!!

Nupur,gasps and tries to imitate her boss between the laughter, "Mohadaya,Kripaya thodi der pratikshya kijiye,mein abhi dekh kar apko suchit karta hoon" and that last line is followed by a wave of her hand..

Samrat,Just about to burst into peals of laughter at last is able to say this,"Aur wo jo maine kaha tha, "sir yeh pratikshya kaun he.is she hot?.Aur agar he to yeh suchit uska boyfriend hua na to mein toh uski…. & then sir would say 'budbak'..

Nupur answers back holding her stomach, "Samrat,please aur nahi mera pait dukh raha he"

Samrat says with a smirk.."waise bhi wo shukla khud to kuch kaam nahi karta..sab kam uske chote bhai deodhar par chod deta hai"

Nupur answers laughing,"Yeh tumne sach saha by god"😆

And the sound of laughter was probably heard by the whole building!!
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Anjalika Khanna thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey Lipsa nice part,...............
conyinue soon/.........................
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@Priya-thanks

@anjalika-thanks..soo glad you like it!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome
looks interesting
do continue
update soooooooooooooooooooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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superb lipsi
itz really very nice
loved it so much
do cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dear nice update... please add me to pm list.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@Tehzeeb-Thanks!!

@Natz-Okies adding you to the pm list okies?

@preethis-Okie dear!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyyy lipsi !!! Sorry for the late comment, but I didnt wanna rush it !! so took my time !!! 😆

congratulations on starting ur FF !! and I must say what a start !!! 😉 First of all you chose my second most fav city of india, that is Goa to base ur FF !! Wow !! its such a beautiful and romantic place !!! I have been there once and I could so imagine Gunji at the beach !!! 😳 Loved ManJan's convo !! what adorable sibling relationship !!! very sweet !!! i loved how Gunji always calls him Bhaiya, but calls him Mayu when she wants to tease him !!!! lol !! 😆
Now coming to SaNu scene !!! oh Man they always rock !! they are flat roomies !!!!!!! lol !! 😆 and their bosses are Deodhar and Shukla !!! OMG !!! poor them !! 😆 I could actually imagine them imitating shukla !!! lol !!! shoo cute !!! ok why do I get the feeling that ManJan will be moving into the same apartment bulding as SaNu ??? Am I right ? 😉
Seriously lipsi !!! I love it so much !! i have read it 5 times and then commented !!! I can't wait for the next chapter sweetie !! U better update soon !!! Awesum work kiddo !!! 👏 Take care.
love,
Naveen
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Posted: 16 years ago
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A Sneak peek

Sayank meeting in next part *winks*

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