Michi FF: An Order From A Gentleman-Lady Epilogue - Page 15

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: prem_fan

hey kuku. thx for pm'ing me no need to thank me yaar. sry i was out of town and no need to say sorry😃 glad tht u read and commented😛. i loved the last 2 updates. so glad u liked it hun and how milind realises he is in love with his shaw and that he is her rakhi sawant. it was soo cute. hahaha yeah finally Milind woke up😆😆😆 why are you ending it so fast? you are ending all of your ffs so suddenly. not cool at all hun :-0 not all yaar.. just a few, though i am trying to end it without dragging it much😊 but i will definitely be looking forward to your epilogue. take care. hugs u too... will update in a few mins😃🤗

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mehanandita

another great update thank you so much hun😃
loved ayesha quiz to milsi hahaha the math?😉😆
so both confessed their love with a romantic kiss😳hehehe they did☺️
thnks a lot for sharing dude don't say thanx yaar😡😆
pls try to do epi dear will post the epi in a few mins hun😃

keep on rocking 🤗thank you🤗

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: bidnai

Oh my god captain u had me on the floor.......This was truly very shockin n the most interestin ff ever..........Loved every bit of it thank you so so much mate😃😃😃..........Milind imaginin himself as gay godddd wat an imagination🤣 mine or Milind's?😆..........Fantastic dea no words to describe ur ff simply mindblowin.👏 thank you so much bids🤗

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Posted: 16 years ago

thank you😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pria4ever

Rakhi Sawant😆..i luved that part!!!!👏😉... hahahahaha Milind-Rakhi-Sawant-Mishra😆

yaar Milind shud not not closed his suitcase na, 😉huh? then?😲😕 put his boxers and all on display?😆...this ones really naughty😳😉all i will say is tht i am innocent child!😃...luved it...Ayesha out her too... thank you😃
Anyways...plz update soon..... will update it in a few minutes
Pria

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: btkr

Came to this forum after a long time and was in splits with your ff....adorable....u made my evening. Thanks!👏


thank you so so much hun... so glad tht i cud entertain u for a while😃
P.S: you don't have to thank me😛
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: diyak

kuku, please post the update soon😊.
I read in proposal thread that you would be updating this ff today.
Waiting for your update😉 .



Originally posted by: azam12neelab

waiting for yr update tooo!!!!😃😃😃



Originally posted by: diyak

Waiting for your update 😃 😃



@Mayuri:
will update it now😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

prem_fan your inbox is full, can't send u pms:(

Dedicated to Sia for her idea on the football game, thanx hun🤗

Epilogue

7 years later

"Aren't you done yet, Prachi?" Milind asked his wife irritated as he kept shifting behind her trying to see the mirror. "One sec." Prachi replies as she applied her make up. "You have been saying that for the past half hour." Milind reminds her pissed. "I am almost done, Milind." Prachi replies. "I'm going to be late." Milind says angrily as he again shifted here and there trying to catch a glimpse of himself at the mirror but his wife's hand was all over the place blocking his view. "We all have to leave together." Prachi reminded him. Finally after two minutes Prachi moves aside and walks out of the room, Milind who was busy knotting his tie didn't see how Prachi looked after she was ready. He walks towards the mirror to get ready when suddenly a head popped up out of nowhere. "Ma-yu-ri!(may268) What are you doing?" Milind asks his daughter irritated. "I'm getting ready, Papa."Mayuri replies as she balanced herself on the stool and looking at herself in the mirror blocking her father's view effectively. "Why can't you do it in your room?" Milind asks irritated. "In that mirror I can't see my beautiful toes, and if I stand on the chair then I won't be able to see my beautiful face." Mayuri explains. "But baby doll, Papa is getting late." Milind tries to reason with her. "We all are going together na, Papa?" "But still I've to get ready right?" Milind asks back. "Even baby doll has to get ready right?" Mayuri asks back. "After me!" Milind says like a stubborn child. "Please Papa." Mayuri starts making cute puppy faces and Milind was a sucker for that. "Okay, do it fast." Milind says defeated. "Thank you, Papa." Mayuri says happily and gets down to business, brushing her hair some one million times, twisting here and there to see herself in the mirror while Milind started counting in his head. When he was at 239 his cell started ringing with a smile he answers his call "Hello sweetheart! Missing me?" he hears a bout of giggle from the other end and then finally he hears his assistant ask him "Milind, where are you? Mr. Malhothra is waiting for you here." "What? Sia (siya..), I told you that I have a marriage to attend today so I won't be coming to office today and to cancel all my meetings." Milind admonishes her. "You did?" Sia asks him dumbly. "Of course I did." "I don't remember." Sia replies as she tried to think when he had told her that. "If you take your eyes off those Mills n Boons then you will remember something!" Milind says angrily. "erm... erm" "Fix another appointment with Mr. Malhothra and if I find you reading any more MnB at work I swear to God I'll... er.. I'll... ah I'll let Mayuri and Sara ($ara_$hachi) loose on you." Milind threatens his assistant and then hangs up. Sara is Mayuri's best friend, Prachi and he had secretly nicknamed her huggy, as Sara was always on a hugging spree. "How do I look Papa?" Mayuri asked her father as she posed for him, seeing her Milind starts smiling "Beautiful." "Do I look as beautiful as Mama?" "Even more beautiful." Milind praises her. "No one can look more beautiful than my Mama." "Of course, my baby doll can." Milind says and was about to take her in his arms when Mayuri stops him "No, Papa my beautiful dress will get crumbled." Milind moves back with a frown I had told Prachi that we will raise her like a boy but when has she ever listened to me? Jumping down from the stool Mayuri runs to the table where Milind's and Shah's old photo was kept, she kisses the photo and waves bye to Shah saying "Bye Shah Uncle, we are going for Neev Uncle's and Ayesha Aunt's wedding. Ta ta." and she runs out of the room while Milind smiles at his daughter's retreating back. Mayuri had refused to believe that her mother was anything other than ladylike in her life, and refused to believe that Shah is her mother but her mother's brother.

Chuckling he turns to look at the mirror to get ready when he heard his wife ask "Milind, you are not yet ready? We are going to be late! How much time you take to get ready?" Milind turns to frown at his wife but then seeing her he starts ogling at his beautiful wife "Oh my!" he says dramatically and then walks towards her while Prachi gives Milind you-are-hopeless look. Milind starts tugging her saree, "Stop messing my saree Milind!" Prachi orders as she tried to push his hand away. "We are not that close to Ayesha and Neev right? We could miss their wedding." Milind suggests as he leans down and starts kissing and nibbling on her ears as Prachi gently tried to push him away grinning "No we r not close to them, and it was definitely not us who kept going to Mumbai every other week to convince Ayesha's parents for their wedding, and we never browbeat Neev's parents into letting him marrying a muslim girl." Disappointed Milind asks "We really have to go?" "Yes." Prachi replies. "Can't we send Mayuri you know to represent us along with huggy and Sia?" Milind asks her shifting his attention and lips towards her neck. "And who is going to watch them?" Prachi asks back. "Sia who else?" "And how exactly are you going to make Sia watch the girls instead of reading MnB?" Prachi asks him as she started kissing his jaw. "Maybe we can send Baba and Mama to keep an eye on Sia that way we will get the whole house to ourselves and it will be like that time when we were alone here for a week and we were you know *playing* all around the house." Milind says as he again started tugging her saree. Finally pushing him away Prachi says "We are going for the wedding, so get ready." Milind pouts and then walks towards the mirror to get ready when Prachi orders him from behind "Stop sulking!" Milind makes a face and then starts getting ready for Neev's and Ayesha's wedding. Unlike Milind and Prachi whose parents were more eager to get them married than they themselves, Neev and Ayesha had to fight for their love for nearly five years as they were from different religion and to top it all of Ayesha was working in the fashion industry which was a big minus in Neev's parents mind. But with Prachi's and Milind's help and guidance they were able to finally convince their parents. Neev and Ayesha already had their nikkah in Mumbai and today they were getting married in Guajarati traditions. Milind and Prachi had attended their nikkah last week. "Papa, are you ready? Dadu and Dadi already left with Nanu. Everyone there would be missing baby doll!"Mayuri told him impatiently. "Done, baby doll." Milind replies.

It was a beautiful ceremony, after wishing Neev and Ayesha yet again for a happy life Milind and Prachi along with Mayuri were on their way back home suddenly Milind stops the car. "What happened?" Prachi asks confused. "Our school." Milind says as he pointed towards their old school. "We pass in front of it every single day, Milind." "Yeah. It's been how long since we went inside? Come let's go inside and see. It'll be fun." Milind says excitedly, hearing his idea Prachi starts smiling "let's go." Milind turns his car towards their school and enters the compound after the guard recognized him as an ex-student. It was summer holidays and the campus was empty and they could leisurely drive around. "Why are we here?" Mayuri asks confused "We are not going home?" "We are sweety, this is Mama and Papa's school, and next year Mayuri will also go to this school." Milind explains to his daughter. "Milind, stop!" Prachi suddenly orders him. "What happened?" Milind asks confused turning his attention to his wife. "Look there, a ball is lying there." Prachi says excitedly pointing towards a corner of the goal post. Milind looks at her confused "You don't mean we...?" "How long has it been since we played, Milind?" "What about your saree?""I will just tuck it in like Kajol in KKHH, what say husband?" "I say that like always I'll beat you this time too Shah!" "In your dreams, husband!" Prachi snorts. "Come Mayuri, you sit there and watch us play." Milind says as he unbuckled his seat belt. "No, my long beautiful skirt will get spoilt." Mayuri says looking horrified. "Seriously Prachi, what were you eating when you had her?" Milind asks exasperated. Mayuri pokes her tongue at him and then lying on the back seat she orders her father "Don't off the A/C, Mayuri is going to sleep." While Milind did what he was ordered to do Prachi starts smiling seeing how her daughter had her father tied around her finger dancing to her every tune.

Milind and Prachi got out of the car and quickly started playing, they were nicely playing when Milind scored a goal and then Prachi turned nasty, and soon they were playing rough. With the rain crashing down on them they were one sight as they pulled and pushed each other, kicked and shoved and Prachi even ripped off Milind's shirt in the spirit of the game. As they kept scoring they started kicking each other more than the ball. As Prachi was about to kick the winning goal Milind pushed her to ground and as he tried to tackle the ball he lost his footing and fell on top of Prachi and soon they were rolling on the muddy ground as they tried to stop the other from getting up and getting hold of the ball. When Prachi realized that Milind was getting the upper hand in a fit to distract him she pushed him to the ground with all her might and slammed her lips on his. Even before Milind could fight her off her tongue was a playing wicked game with his making even Prachi forget why she instigated the kiss in the first place. It took both of them a while to regain their senses and realize where they were "Do you think we can find an empty unlocked classroom here?" Prachi asks desperately. "Mayuri is in the car." Milind reminds her. "Oh God! Let's go home then." Prachi says. Nodding Milind gets up and then helps her up. As they walked to the car Prachi asks him "It was like old times na?" with a teasing smile Milind asks her "Old times? Oh you mean the time when we both were THE men?"

~~~The End~~~

Thank you so much for encouraging me to write this fanfic guys. I really hope you guys had fun reading this fic:) and please do leave ur comments or click the like button if you like the update.

Kuku😃

Edited by kuku.. - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
it was great.
it took five years for neev and ayesha to get married, but they did get married it is good.
sia milind's assistant.
michi is always great.
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Posted: 16 years ago
😆 😆 😆, Kuku, that was fantastic. So May is his baby doll okay, but Siya is his dumb assistant 🤣 who is stuck up on M&B 😆 😆 and Sara huggy 😆. Oh dear, well written. Thanks for the short and sweet fic and lovely ending. Ta

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