Mere Apne3(AR) - Epi51-70 - Note on Pg151 - Page 57

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hello Aimee

How r u? hey see this time i came to comment lil early than b4 but ur part is very short.. kab khatam ho gaya pata bhi nahi chala..
The part was fully POVs of Atul, Anjali and Rahul.
cute AR fight...
Aur kya boloon? part itna chota tha..kuch bolne ke liye rakha hi nahi..
Anyways i loved ur update.. thanks for d PM..
Take care
Nisha😛
Edited by hnisha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hello janeman HEAVEN Hmmm part bahot..... bahot bardiya tha...maza toh bahot aye par shotta tha... par its okay you said something big is coming up... please kuch improv jururr karna aur voh motti aunties..🤣 he he arey aise kaise jabardasti karde ge ridhima ki shadi... uske prince ka naam to sirf ARMAAN MALLIK hi hai.. aur yeh stupid Armaan har baar Rihima ke barrre main soch keha ki RAHUL KI SISTER HAI... sister my foot ...... Aur bb yeh AA Kuch kar kyon nahi rey yrurar ridhima main ke gaR riste anne shuru hogaye hi.... jaldi iss armaan ko sut buddi dedo...jaaneman Aur pleas koi baat karooo rahul aur atul.......KOIIIIIII can't wait to read the next part...... love you jaaneman HEAVEN
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow
it was really good
loved it
pm me if you can
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey aimee
great one yaar,,,
atul n anjali thinkking a lot abt armaan n rids n so is rahul..hope he talks to atul soon abt.it//
armaan felt jealous seeing rids with some other guy!!hehe...gosh he loves her but fails to admit it!!
how happy he was when he got to knw rids heped omang to stop cigarretts.hehe
atul remembered the flashback scene..oh Mrs.Ridhima armaan mallik..wow!!heeh..now lets see anjys reaction.n plan to make armaan n rids close.....
great one as usual!!!
good wishes
sri:-)
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Posted: 15 years ago
wowwwwwwwww

nice part
i hope thy do something quick to make both ar reliaze tht thy love each other.................
fr8 part
continue soon
n thnx for pm

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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part aimee! armaan is feeling jealous!!! the pain and anger he felt on seeing ridhima talking to a man was so clear! very good!
and now atul anjali an rahul want to see armaan and riddhima married :D exciting!
looking forward to the next one, continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
pls do send me pm

love
chahat
Edited by chahatmalhotra - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
*reserved...
*edited*
Heyyyyyyyyyyyy Aimee !!!!!!!! :D
the update was fabulous... loving the way the story is moving ahead ;) :) getting really good... the part was awesome, beautiful and well-penned !! :D
anjali thinking abt riddhima as armaan's wife.. and then abt how she was the perfect girl who'll blend in with everybody in the family... her thoughts abt her family and the way all of them were united was really really really good... sweet !! :)
atul, here, thinking the same... but also abt his doubts ... him thinking abt armaan's beahviour and his feelings for riddhima... getting confused abt the relationship they shared... wondering if it was more than the normal boss-employee relation !!... his heart and brain having an argument and finally the heart having its way... the way it was all written was just sooooooooooo superb !! :D
rahul thinking abt AR, getting restless and having nagging doubts and confusions abt his sister's future, armaan's feelings and then muski making him feel better by comforting him !!... his thoughts were soooooooooooo very sweet... he's such a protective n loving bro !! ;) :)
armaan getting jealous again when he saw riddhima talking to that stranger... hmmm... the way he got irritated and lost is cool was really sad.... i feel sorry for poor riddhima... she was absolutely clueless to this sudden change in the behaviour of her boss :( :( him speaking harshly to her was really not good... poor her !! :(
armaan regretting his behaviour soon... and him lost in thoughts abt her...awww.. !.. then a war between his mind and heart... and him getting more n more confused as it proceeded !! :) awwww.... hope he realises his feelings soooooooooooon enough !! :D :D
armaan loosing temper at chatur and then atul telling him and anji abt omang and riddhima's deal... both of them getting quite surprised... and armaan again getting lost in riddhima's thoughts !!..
anji noticing this strange behaviour in armaan and sharing her suspicions with atul, who decided to talk to armaan at the first opportunity...hmmm...waiting for armaan's reaction to it !! ;)
the tale of the registary cards and atul sharing it with anji....hope how she reacts to this news !! :D :D
it was beautiful update aimee !! :) loved reading it !!
thanks for the pm,..
continue sooooooooooooooooooon :D
Edited by SunainaTM007 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
nyc part yaar
oh god ridzz ki shaadi planings..............
plzz armaan nd ridz ko jaldi milwa do
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyyyy Aimee... :)
thnxx 4 updating the part.... :D
loved it soo muchhhh... :)
awwww.....armaan is jealous..lolz... ;)
loved anji-atul and rahul-muskaan's convo... :D
plzzz continue soooooon..
and plzzz reveal the mystery of ridz's caller and unite AR....lolz.. :P
luking 4wd to it...
thnxxx.....:)

\m/
sri

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