RM: Pyaar hai ya sazza...upd18/12pg48 LAST PART... - Page 20

Awesome part!!

loved your update! can't wait to read more. thanks for the pm and continue soon.

amazng yaaaaar

BAchha this was so beautifuly written! the end lines were just.... MWAH! they were so nicely written I have no words for you!

loved the flashback!

GREAT part!!

PArt 16:

Rahul had tears in his eyes...so had Arjun..he had never ever thought ki jiss Doc ne uski zindagi sawaar di uske zindagi me itna kuch hua hoga.......

A- Rahul...main..mujhe nahi pata tha...

R- Its ok...tumne pucha toh amine bata diya......Tumhe tumhara promise toh yaad hai na????

A- Haan yeh baat hum dono ke alva kissi aur ko pta nahi chlegi........

R- thanks.........

Bt this was not a secret between Rahul & Arjun......Muskaan standing behind the tree had listen everthing........She stood there shocked...she never thought she was responsible 4 Rahul's present condition.......tears were flowing continuously thru her eyes.....she slowly walked to the beach......She sat there watching the waves.....Rahul's words were moving in her head.........

M- meri wajhse Rahul ki zindagi barbad ho gayi...ek galat faimi..agar main ussi din woh galatfaimi dur kar deti so yeh sab kabhi nahi hota...Rahul ki zindagi bahut aachi hoti...woh sab na hua hota jo unn 3 saalon me hua....Sab meri galati hai....maine apni dost ki zindagi barbad kar di...Woh mujhse pyaar karta tha aur maine..maine kya kiya...use chot pahuchai..aoso chot jisse uski zindagi badal gayi...nahi yeh maine kya kar diya.....Sab ke liye pyar khushiyaan lata hai...zindagi laat hai aur Rahul ke liye pyaar hi sazza ban gaya....main kabhi samja kyun nahi payi...uss cheez ke piche bhaagti rahi jo kabhi meri thi hi nahi aur maine uss insaan ka saath kho diya jiske liye main uski duniya thi...maine sab kahrab kar diya....O God!!! maine kya kar diya???

She came to the cottage...Rahul was waiting 4 her...

R- Kahan chali gayi thi???

M- Rahul....I am sorry......

R(confused)- Kyun??? Utla i am sorry....Arjun ke sath baat karne me kab itna waqt ho gaya pata hi nahi cahla...

M- Rahul.....main bahut buri hu na???

R- Aisa kyun bol rahi hai??? Tu kaahn gayi thi??? Mujhse milne aayi thi kya???

M(remembers Rahul didnt want her to know everything)- Nahi toh.....main toh aaeve hi puch rahi thi...

R(not convinced)- Phir sorry kyun kaha???

M- aree abhi khana khane ka time hua uar main stupid ki tarah yahanwhan ghum rahi thi na phir tujhe wait karna pada na isliye....

R- O...theek hai...

M- Chalo..khana khate hai...Kal Ridzi Goa aarahi hai toh main soch rahi thi ki usse mil aau....JAu main???

R(looked at her surpirsed)- tu toh aise puch rahi hai jaise main tera pati hu-----(stops)

**RM music**

**Eye lock**

M- Main pani lati hu.....

R- hmm....

They had their dinner & both went in their respective rooms.........

*Rahul*

Rahul sat near the window...he could see the sea-shore...the waves.....

R- Na jane Muskaan yeh sab kyun kar rahi hai??? Mujhe abhi lag raha hai ki woh apna waqt barbad kar rahi hai.....Meri zindagi shayad ab kabhi normal nahiho payegi.. mujhe bahut daar lag raha hai.....

*Muskaan*

Muskaan was lying on her bed....

M- Meri wajahse Rahul ki zindagi barbad ho gayi..main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paungi....Kash maine ussi din woh galataimi dur kardi hoti...Shit...main kya karu???

*Next Morning*

Muskaan wakes up & sees Rahul is still sleeping......She went & sat beside him......

M- Rahul.....tu bahut acha hai....sach me...(moves her hand thru his forehead)

R(sleeply)- Kya baat hai subhe subhe meri tarif kar rahi hai???

M(shocked & quickly removes her hand)- Tu jag raha hai???

R- Hmm...

M- MAin....coffee lati hu....tu fresh hoja..phir tujhe Arjun ke saath bhi toh jaana hai.....

R- YA......Arjun aagaya kya?? Mera pehla yoga session hai....

M- Nahi..ab tak nahi aayya....

She goes in the kitchen...

M- Idiot hai tu Muskaan...jor se jor se baat karne ki kya jarurat hai..usse pata chal jaata toh...jara bhi akal nahi hai....

She makes coffee & goes in Rahul's room....

Rahul was siiting reading the newspaper.....

M- Paper kyun padh raha hai???

R- Kyun matlab???

M- Apni shakla dekhi hai?? KAisa lag raha hai??

R- Kyun?? Kya hua???

M- Shaving cream khatam ho gayi hai kya?? Ek dum devdas lga raha hai...

R- Toh kya karu???

M- Ruk...Yahan baith..

R- Bt..

M- Jitna keh rahi hu kar na

She makes him sit..takes out the shaving kit & makes him shave...

M(looks at him)- Ab lag raha hai na mera Rahul ekdum handsome.....

R- Mera???

**RM music**

*Eyelock*

M- Woh..main....

Gud moring ppl...

Enter Arjun....

M- thank God....

R- Kuch kaha tune??

M- Nahi toh...

A- Rahul..i must say someone is lokking really good 2day....

R- Thank u....

A- Chale???

R- um..Ok...

A- Aap chalenge Dr.Muskaan???

M- Main thodi der me aati hu...

A- Ok....

Arjun & RAhul leave.....

Muskaan gets ready & meets Ridzi int he coffee shop....

Muskaan sees Ridzi & hugs her...tears start 4rm her eyes.....

Ri- Kya hua??? Mujeh dekhke inni khushi hui kya???

M- Ridzi..main....main bahut buri hu na....

Ri- Kya hua Muskaan???

M- Ridzi..main...

Ri- Tu baith yahan...mujhe theek se batayegi kya hua hai???

M- Ridzi...Rahul ki jo halat huihai uski jimmedaar main hu...

Ri- Matlab??

Muskaan tells her everything........

Ridz- Kya??? Uske saaath itna kuch ho gaya aur hume kuch bhi pata nahi chala???

M- Woh mujhse pyaar karta tha aur maine kya kiya??

Ri- Tu usse pyaar nahi karti???

M- Main kaise??Nahi toh....

Ri- Pagal hai tu Muskaan....

M- MAine toh Armaan se...

Ri- Armaan tera crush tha bas.....tu jo Rahul ke liye kar rahi hai woh kya hai??? Tune uske liye Mumbai se Goa transfer le li....Mumbai me tujhe kitni opportunity milti aage badme ki...successful hone ki...bt tujhe Rahul ko yahan laana jyada important laga...Rahul ko chot lagti hai toh tujhe dard hota hai....Uske ek smile ke liye taras rahi hai...Jab woh khush hota hai tujhe saari duniya aachi lagne lagti hai....yeh sab kya hai??? Sirf Dosti????

M- Maine kabhi aisa socha hi nahi....

Ri- Toh ab soch na....

M- Maine Rahul ki zindagi barbad kar di....

Ri- Anjaane me....tune jaanbujke kuch nahi kia...aur jab chot tune di hai toh dawa bhi tujhe hi deni hogi.....Muskaan tera saath Rahul ke liye bahut imp hai....Usse teri jarurat hai....Puri duniya me tu hi toh hai uski apni...uske mom dad nahi hai na koi relative..bas tu hi hai...

M- Haan..sahi keh rahi tu....main Rahul ko theek kar dungi...main uski dawa banugi...zindagi me usne jo bhi saha hai main usse sab se bahr nikalungi....Main apna pyaar nibhaungi...

Ri- So u admit u love him???

M- Haan....thanks Ridzi...main sahi me stupid hu...mujhe apne best friend se pyaar hai yeh bhi mujhe pata nahi chala...

Ri- Aur tujhe chodke puri duinya ko pata tha...

M- Matlab??

Ri- Jab se Rahul London gaya mujhe toh tabhi se laga tha ki tujhe use pyaar ho gaya hai..jis tarah tu roj usski baatein karti thi...usse miss karti thi...Woh sirf dosti nahi....woh pyaar tha.....

M- Thank u Ridzi...tu bahut achi hai...

Ri- Ab mujhe jyada maska mat laga...aur haan Rahul ka aur apna khayl rakhna....

M- Hmm....

Ri- Abhi jaake usse bata degi kya???

M- Nahi...usse lagega main smypathy ke wajahse keh rahi hu..main usse puri tarah theek karungi phir woh khud hi samja jayega...

Ri- good..all the best....Yeh le tera transefer latter...

M- Tujhe baatein karni thi na merese..

Ri- Nahi...mujhe yehi kehna tha jo tu khud hi samja gayi....

M- Thanks Ridzi...

Ri- Anytime.....

Muskaan goes back to the rehab smiling...

WONDERFUL update!!

This is one of your best oarts bachha! Muskaan's tension, guilt, love... everything was depicted so subtly that it was just perfect. Na bohot zyaada na bohot kam. Balanced tha. Beautiful job jaana!

hey i'm soooo sorry for being this delayed par aaj to par ke hi rahoongi... actually its ramadhaan and big nights so at night i'm usually praying so cant read, i'll try my best if not then eid ke baad to defo comment karoongi! im soooo sorry!