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Srishti but I prefer being called Mishu

@~*mishu*~

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#261

fabulous work!
no wonder u cudn't updt for so long
it had so much passion n romance
great work
continue soon

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

Elite

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#262

jaya................this is the bestesssssssssssssssssst bestesssssssssssssssssssst epitomeeeeeee romanticcccccccccccccc to d coreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesttttttt coreeeeeeeeeeee.........truly truly maaaaaaaaaaagicaaaaaaaaaallllllllllllll..............ufffffffff...............it ws d hotttttttttttteeeeeeeeet update i've read in any ff till date yaar........⭐️..........................main itna blussssssssssssssssssh kisi bhi update ke dauran nahi hui while i had durin readin this1..........☺️...........u r heavenly heavenly talented romantic FF expert.............i dnt knw wht wil happen in d nite as she said when there wilb no1 b/w them.........i'm drooooolin ovr this update yaar.........u made my day honey..........ab toh yeh 'kambaqt dil' aurrrrr maang raha hai......😉😆...........jald se jald updateeeee karo yaar..........nywz duniya ke har thnxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx just 4u for this awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update.........

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ShwePoo

@ShwePoo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#263

very nice n romantic update....

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avantika_2009

@avantika_2009

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

#264

OMG!!..... jaya.... u are awesome....how romantic it was!!......i think creatives should take your views........maindblowing FF,dear.... please do continue...and update it..... we all are waiting for the next one.

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Dipti Moni Das

@dmd2009

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#265

Wow!!!!!!!! Its too much romantic

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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#266

awesome yaar

update next part sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz pm me

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madhvi

@-madhvi-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#267

Jaya wat an ff 👏👏👏
Oh i love all scenes of mayank with other guys🤣bechara sameer🤣
Kya uday bhaiya ne fridge mein kuch choda🤣
Loved uday bhaiya and mayu scenes🤣
Shaadi ho sajan ki rahi hai par suhaag raat mannane par mayur utaru hai🤣😉
Thank god gunjan sahi salamat niche pahuchi😛
I love the super possesive mayu in the story🤣
Mn scenes bhi ............hot hai😉 baap re mayank ko nupur dekhkar sirf aisa sab hi sujhta hai😆
Shaadi mein kam karne ke liye koi toh haina, ye gunjan ke dee aur jeejaji ka maan nahi hai kam karne ka😆
Btw put a warning on Pg one - its not for under 18😉 (even though im under 18 😆)
Ur an amazing writer dear😃 and very fluent with the script😉
Also dont end the ff soon u can get dia and rv married too😉🤣
Or get nupur nostalgic bout her actual suhaag rat😉😆
Thnx for all the pms yaar🤗 and sorry for delay in my replies😭

Btw since i read the entire thing now, i got to know ki is ff ka naam karan nai hua hai😛 So may i suggest some titles hope thats not a prob😛
1) Begaane ki shaadi mein abdullah dewaana🤣(for mayur😆)
2) Too hot to handle😉 (for us😆)
3) Out of control😆 (for mayur😆)
4) you belong to me😊 (for mayu's possesiveness)
5) Hilarious and hot😳(for the ff)

👏 mind blowing yaar continue with it
and plz continue pming me😃

Edited by mdkr - 16 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#268

awesome n brilliant Jaya 👏 👏 👏, i think first time i read Mayur romance in the fics like this.😳 😳 😳
I am so happy after reading it 😃 😃 😃. U gave us a nice come back. 😉 😉 😉 It made my mood so good yaar.😊 😊 😊 Noops was trying to explain Uday that he must perform his duty nicely and thank god he did it correctly this time.😆 😆 😆 Mayu has told his mom n his beloved wife not to call him Mayu in front of his colleagues and Noopur said she is not going to talk him.😛 😛 😛
But Mayu knows how to handle his wife so he made a nice plan naming Dia the next scene was really hot n i can't say anything about it 😳 😳 😳. The way Noops controlled herself was really good because she knew what's needed the most that time.😊 😊 😊
continue soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago

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Mithila

@Mithila_22

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#269

OMG...jaya ...i don't have any other without forgiving u for not updating...

what an update...i don't have words....sooo soooo soooooo romantic...truly awwesum....

great work yaar...

hats off to u...

at the start it was toooooooo cute....n after that it bcame soooooooooo much........................😉

really m soooooo happy after reading this update....sooooo much happy...

by god ab raat ko kya hoga??//

update soon.

luv ya for this update...

Edited by taniyamiths - 16 years ago

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minalpink100

@minalpink100

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#270

jayalal

my god wt a update yar my god wt a romance😊 waw wt can i say so cute specially full romantic scene waw cuteeeeeeeee😊 it is really good yar😊 plz continue soon yar but this time plz dont delay too much 😭specially after reading u r ff i cant wait too much specially after gunajn marriege no one is there for distrub to mayank & nupur so good i m eagerly waiting for that night scene of mayank & nupur😉 😊i think marriege is gunjan & samrat's but i think in u r next part mayank nupur enjoy their night like their first night 😉 ha ha ha good keep it up yar plz update soon with again romantic night scenes of mayank & nupur 😉
i think creatives should take some tips from u yar 😊

Edited by minalpink100 - 16 years ago

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