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Senny

@Senny

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

hey it was sooooooo well written sindhya, gosh it was sooooooo romantic and i was sooooooo happy to read the mayur parts but what did you do sindhya, why did you kill mayur , oh noooooooooooo man, i am soo upset after reading the part about the plane crash. Very Well written.

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iwantitall

@iwantitall

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

thnks sooo muchh sennyyy....

sorrryyy yaaar...

chaloo nextt one shit will b all romantic okayy???

muaahzzz

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prerna_agrawal

@prerna_agrawal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

my god sindhya.....it was too good!!!......esp the 1st anniversary....but yaar y did u give such a tragic end.....mayur ko kyon maar dia.....not done yaar....i was literally crying....anyways it was too good!!

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iwantitall

@iwantitall

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: prerna_agrawal

my god sindhya.....it was too good!!!......esp the 1st anniversary....but yaar y did u give such a tragic end.....mayur ko kyon maar dia.....not done yaar....i was literally crying....anyways it was too good!!

awww srrryyy prernaa...

agla one shott shall be veryyy happyy haappyy sorts!

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prerna_agrawal

@prerna_agrawal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: cool.sindhya

awww srrryyy prernaa...

agla one shott shall be veryyy happyy haappyy sorts!

thanx....i'm looking forward to it.....write soon....

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iwantitall

@iwantitall

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Posted: 16 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: prerna_agrawal

thanx....i'm looking forward to it.....write soon....

definitelyy prerna...

muaahzz...

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

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Posted: 16 years ago

#37

omg sindhya!!!

itni saaad one shot....😭

I really liked how you interwove the scenes...first sheena...then the sajan scene, mayur...it was very nice!!

I loved that Mayur scene...when they wake up and then when Nupur gives Mayank her gift...that was so sweet!! And he wanted a girl...awwww....!!

Sajan proposal was so cute as well...nothing fancy...just the two of them...it was how it should be!

But they died...all of them...*sob*...aisa kyun kiya yaar...!!

i can't imagine what Gunjan must have gone thorugh....but she was marrying again...?? Really...?

Why didn't gunjan too go with Samrat to see Mayur....Nupur is her sister na...i wanna cry over this...

But it was wonderfully written!! I loved reading it!

Keep it up yaar!! You're one of the best FF writers!

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iwantitall

@iwantitall

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: hgrhr
omg sindhya!!!
itni saaad one shot....😭

I really liked how you interwove the scenes...first sheena...then the sajan scene, mayur...it was very nice!!

I loved that Mayur scene...when they wake up and then when Nupur gives Mayank her gift...that was so sweet!! And he wanted a girl...awwww....!!

Sajan proposal was so cute as well...nothing fancy...just the two of them...it was how it should be!

But they died...all of them...*sob*...aisa kyun kiya yaar...!!

i can't imagine what Gunjan must have gone thorugh....but she was marrying again...?? Really...?

Why didn't gunjan too go with Samrat to see Mayur....Nupur is her sister na...i wanna cry over this...

But it was wonderfully written!! I loved reading it!

Keep it up yaar!! You're one of the best FF writers!

thnk u soooo muchh nidhi...

wuzzz waitin for ur cmmntt onlyy...

andd ur sucha swthrt...

thank u soooo muchhh...

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Anjalika

@Anjalika Khanna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#39

its really very emotional............. i dont cry easily but at the moment i m feeling like crying very hard...........

Edited by Anjalika Khanna - 16 years ago

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J.S.M

@cherrgirl2711

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Posted: 16 years ago

#40

DAT was so........ i am SO SPEECHLESS.... i cant say anything ...it was sooooooooo touching and not to mention AMAZING !!!!!!!!!!! it was soooooooooooooo gd..... but again wat else can we expect all ur work is just TERRIFIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!