Ek Mitha Ehsash, Part 4, 02/06 - Page 5

Originally posted by: sasha722

wow Bonnai I should thank God dat u could not complete the story
what a beautiful way 2 bring them near by simple witty
brain of R ( alsa mein hai Vakil )
I just loved the character thank u thank u.........
why dont u apply being a script writer in the tel serial 😲😲😲
know all MRD writer have got the knack / psychology
what we want in serial I too agree
U will be a super hit & win lot of accolades
( Really I am not joking so dont laugh out )
U go in depth of the character. ask me where m i😳? where else now i m in chane ke jhar......😳😳but honestly after reading ur comments i m flattered & honoured 😃, thanks Sasha its very encouraging.....


Pl keep the promise of pennu what she has mentioned mere update ka koi thikana nehi isi liye penu ne aise likha ke kabhi bhi .....
Give us one dose of ur story from Mon-Fri of MRD everyday i dont think regularly utna time manage kar paungi, mere to last part karib karib khatam hone ko hai, par as i m on .....jhar so i m thinking to pen down some other naughty ideas of mine, though i dont know whether everyone will like that or not, but i can give it a try so may be 1 or 2 xtra parts of this story.
the serial should go on till they dont actually come
on screen 2gether ei la 😲
Pl stretch it like a rubberband ( story ) yeah to kekta mata ka kam hai na....😆 iske liye bhi skills chahiye jo mere pas nehi hai😭
i think I am fair enough
coming back 2 story
when the whole house has gone 4 ustav
make it like Piya ka ghar
where she has to wait & our king will be late due to some case work
& than add all ur spices in it rootna / manana
wow but no fly should come bad whether all stuck up
so again the story will stretch
i really look 4ward

I shall try till u all not become diabetic with so much meetha....😃

Originally posted by: poetic

Aww Bonai, such a lovely update. left me asking for more. Like ... Yeh dil maange more.


Taratari next part ta likhey felo.

As for the update, liked the way Raj uses his brain once and concotes this wonderful situation. Dharamsankat mein hai Kranti.

Lovely ... too good.

Mwah

Poet

Originally posted by: poetic

Arrey, amar khub-hi bhalo lagchey. 😊

I am actually enjoying it a lot.

And Sasha'r dosh na, it's really wonderful. Tumi khub bhalo likhchho.

Kaajr pressure ektu berey gecchey, but I am planning to write my bit too and post it soon.

@ Manalee : I m glad u liked the story and the plan of Raj the wakil…. Thanks for ur comments.

@ Sami ji: aap to aajkal khoye khoye hi rahte hai, pehle jaise utne dikhte nehi, chaliye shukriya for the comments, koshis kar rahi hu romance with practical point of view se likhne ke liye (par keya karu yaar yeha experience 😉 ki kami ho rahi hai 😆) bas aap sabka sath chahiye aise hi….

@ Luv Guru ji: Thanks, I m happy aap ko pasand aya Raj ka idea. us shaam ki bateen to taiar thi par abhi kuch edit karni paregi …. So thora time chahiye…. Hopefully coming weekend ……..