RM FF:-SOME1 SOMEWHERE IS MADE 4 U upd 2/7/09(END) - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
#41
o god.. muskaan bach jaye bas!! continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42
hey apoorva...how r u ...firstly sorry for the late comment ...just read all the parts which i couldnt since i wasnt active on IF lately .. ok so let me start ....congrats on becoming a senior memeber ,second conrats for new username lol....must say armaan ka style of proposing was ultimate huh v sweet .!!!...all the parts were very sweet ....Rahuls style of proposing to muskaan for marriage was the sweetest part ..i liked the sauce scene also ....oh and the last part i really hope muski doesnot meet with a accident and rahul should scold her for not crossing the road properly
Thanks for all the PM sweetie it helped me keep track of which part i had read last 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
hey first of all sorrry for the late comment, i read the update then had to go out and forgot to comment.

comming to ur update, it was fabulous...loved how rahul proposed to her it was reallyyy fantastic.. but towards the end it was really shocking..i really hope muskaan is fyne...dying to read more...please continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Great part yaar, can't wait for next update.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 22:


Rahul ran only to see MUskii fallen on ground with blood every where...

R- Muskii...ankhe khol muskii....

He calls Sanjeevani for the ambulance & reaches Sanjeevani.......

All r shocked to see Muskii's condition.......

Dr. Keerti is called & she is operating Muskaan..........

All interns r sitting outside the OT...Rahul is sitting simply looking blank...he feared...he had the fear of losing Muskii....NO..she cant go....

Armaan sees Rahul being too worried goes near him & places his hand on his shoulder...

Ar- Aee Rahul..tension mat le yaar..punjab ki sherni hai teri Muskii....

R(almost in tears)- Saari galti meri hai...maine hi usse bulaya tha..mujhe usse ghar se pick karna chahiye tha,....maine.....

An- RAhul..relax yaar..kuch nahi hoga...

Ar- haan sab changa hoga...

R- Armaan..tu ek doctor se baat kar raha hai..mujhe sab samjta hai....what u think baaki logonko jaise bolte hai waise bolke tu mujhe samjha sakta hai???

Ar- Aisi koi baat nahi hai..sab theek hojayega..trust me....

R- Agar meri Muskii ko kuch ho gaya toh main mar jaunga ..........

At- Kuch nahi hoga...bhagwan pe bharosa rakh woh aache logonke saath kabhi bura nahi karta...

Ri- Haan RAhul..humari Muskaan bahut brave hai...woh har musbaat ko paar karke aayegi...

They waited & waited....operation was going on 4 three hours...then Dr.keerti came out....

K- Interns.......

R- Muskii kaisi hai???

K- She is out of danger......

All rejoice....

K- Bt..........

R- Bt kya Dr.Keerti???

K- Muskaan ki left leg ka bone smash hua tha ..so uski left tang kaam nahi kar sakti...so we replaced it with an artifical limb........

R(shocked)- KYA?????????

All the others were also shocked...Rahul;s world turmed upside down..Muskaan was handicapped..his Muskii just because of his stupididty...........

K- haan...Muskaan pehle ki tarh bhaag nahi payegi aur langda ke chalna padega...

Rahul was dying every moment listening to Keerti's words.........

K- Dr.rahul...aapko himmat rakhni hogi ....agar aap hi kamjor pad gaye toh mUskaan ko kaun sambhalega???

Ar- Haan Rahul...teri Muskii tere paas hai aur ky achahiye ???

R- Amaan ,,..main usko kaise bolunga??? Main kya kahumga ki woh---------

Ri- Main bataungi.......Rahul main Muskaan ko sach bataungi........Tum sirf uska saath dena woh uske liye bahut jaruri hai.........

K- Abhi woh behosh hai aur jab usse hosh aayega aap log usse mil sakte hai.......

R- Dr.Keerti......kya main uske paas baith sakta hu??? Plzz..main plz....

K- Ok...TAke care........

Rahul goes in Muskii's room & sees her lying uncounsious......
He sits near her & holds her hand & kisses it........

R(tears)- tujhe kuch ho jata toh main mar jata Muskii...I love u ...love u so much.....

His tears fall on mUskaan's cheeks & she slowly opens her eyes.....

M(weakly)- RAHUL.......

R- Haan....Muskii main hu...sab theek hai Muskii...main hu yahan....

M(smiles)- Rahul daar gaye the kya???

R- Nahi...mar gaya tha....

M- Tujhe kya laga itne jaldi tera piche chod dungi??? Huh??

R- Shut up Muskii...aisi baat kari na toh ----

M(smiles)- Tu bahut pyaar karta hai na mujhse???

R- Apni jaanse bhi jyada....

M- Ek baat batau???

R- Hmm.....

M- Tu roote hue bilkul aacha nahi lagta....

R- AAcha???

M- Hmm....tu muskurate hue bahut sona lagat hai..........

R- Tu bhi............

Muskii wipes RAhul's tears & both smile.....


Ridz comes in.........

Ri- KAisi ho mUskaan???

M(smiles)- Kaisi lag rahi hu????

Ri(tears in her eyes bt still) - BAhut aachi........
Rahul..tumhe Dr.Keerti bula rahi hai..kuch formalities puri karni hai..tum jao..main hu Mukaan ke paas....

R(shaky voice)- Ridz.......main.......

Ri(firm voice)- Main hu........

R(smiles at MUSkii)- Main abhi aaya.....

Muskii smiles & RAhul leaves.....

Ridz closes her eyes.......& naraates Muskaan every thing........

M(shocked)- No..plzz Ridz say ki tum jhoot bol rahi ho.......

Ri- No MUskaan...yehi sach hai.......

M(tears flowing)- Nahi..ridz..main ...main handicapped????

Ri- No Muskaan..tu handicaap nahi hai.......Tu bas bhaag nahi sakti...aur hume kaunsa olymic me bhaagne jaan hai,,,,

M-No......Ridz mera ek pair nahi hai do u realise??? Artifical limb...no.....

Ri- Muskaan.plzz...himmat rakh yaar....

M- RAhul ko pata hai???

Ri- Hmm.....

M- main RAhul se shaadi nahi kar sakti......

Ri- Kya???? Ab yeh shadiiwali baat kahanse beech me aaagyi???

M- RAhul ek apahig ladki se shaadi nahi kar sakta...

Ri- shut up Muskaan...woh tujhse bahut pyaar karta hai....

M- Main bhi usses bahut pyaar karti hu bt main usko deserve nahi karti.....main uske liye sahi nahi hu........

Ri- kaisi baat kar rahi hai tu??? Rahul sab jaane ke baad bhi tere saath hai..koi aur hota toh kabka tera saath chod ke chala gay hota....

M- main RAhulse shaadi nahi kar sakti.......

Ri- Tu----

Ridz pager rang & she had to go.....

Muskaan sat in her room analysing all the incidents of her life.....

M- Main rahul se shaadi nahi kar sakti....main apni khushi ke liye uski zindagi bar bad nahi kar sakti.....no....mujhse bahut pyaar karta hai iska matlab yeh toh nahi ki main uske pyaar ka phaida uthau....no ......


Few minutes later.....

R- Hi jaana.........

No reply.....

R- Kya hua???

It was a very silly question of his ....he was aware of what had happened bt had no slitest idea of what was going on mUskii's mind........

He came nera her & placed his hand over hers.....

R- Muskii...tu aisi mat baith...tu bak abk karte hue hi bahut soni lagti hai.....Jo hona tha woh ho gay..hamesha aage dekhna chahiye.....

Muskii was reallly touched by Rahul's words...she knew he loved her alot...bt her love too wasnt selfish....

She removed her hand 4rm his & removed the ring he gave her...

M- MAin tujhse shaadi nahi kar sakti

R(confused)- Kya??? Kyun?? Kya hua??/

M- Kuch nahi...bas MAin tujhse shaadi nahi kar sakti

R- Main tujhse pyaar karta hu aur tu maujhse toh phir kya problem hai.??????

M- rahul tu ek baar me koi baat samjhta kyun nahi....

R- Kyunki tu pagal jaise baat karrahi hai....

M- Tu apni puri life ek aapahij ladki ke saath nahi bita sakta....

R- Wahat???

M- RAhul...main woh Muskaan nahi hu jisse tune pyaar kia tha....

R- Sahi kaha tune tu woh Muskii hai hi nahi....agar tu woh mUkssi hoti toh mere pyaar pe mujhpe bharosa rakhti.....

M- RAhul mera pyaar itna khudgarz nahi hai....tumhe koi bhi mil jayega....

R- Par mera pyaar khudgarz hai...mujhe sirf meri MUskii chahiye aur koi nahi...

M- RAhul...tu-----

R- Mukii....Tum nein mere liye hamesha pratna ki hai, aur un pratnaon nein hamesha apna asar dikhaya hai. Aaj tum mere liye ek pratna aur kar do.. mujhe itni shakti mile keh main tumhare mann ko kabhi kamzor na padhne doon. Tum meri saathi ho, meri sab se khoobsurat saathi jise meri khansi ki fikar rehti. Main kya khata hon, main kya pehenta hoon is ki fikar mujhe se zyada rehti hai. Jo mujhe mujh se bhi behtar janti hai. main tum se ek tohfa chahta hoon, mujhe apne sare dard de do!"

M(hugs him)- I love u RAhul...i love u so much....

R- I love u too stupid.....

M- Thank u Rahul...tu bahut aacha hai.....

R- Tu bhi itni buri nahi hai...

M(smiles & hits him playfully)- Shut up.....

Rahul smiles...........

Hope u like it..........plzz comment.........

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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
Really cute yaar👏

but left limb replace ki for a bone😆😆😆 ek bone ke liye pura bichara per hi nikal gaya😆😆😆 anything is fair in the fiction world na😆😆😉
dont worry main bhi bohot phekti hoon apne FFs mein😆😆😆

But seriously so sweet and touchy loved every bit of it!!!!! hope muski gets well sooon! Muskiii was thinking reli wrong but all life she has to live with a fake leg😭😭😭 wonder wats next but loved how rahul explained to her and alls well that ends well😉😳😳

Awesome part👏

Jaldi se muski ko hosp mein se nikalo😉😉 and quickly update😍 Im waiting.....

Luv
Nadz😳


Edited by nadz_J - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47
Awww.......that was such a touching part......beautiful!!!!!Loved the RM scene and the way you potrayed their emotions was fabulous.....great update!!
Continue soon and thanks alot for the PM!!!!!!
-surbhi😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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VIVAH KA DIALOGUE! Apoorva yaar. Achha chaddo. Eik baat boloon bachha? Leg ki bone smash hojaati hai naa toh artifical limb nahi lagti jaan.
when a bone is totally smashed the patient can spend various amounts of time with an external fiaxator; another four months walking on the leg with a can. Possible surgery to insert a plate/metal rod and screws, yet there could still be a fracture line at the tibia / fibia that will not heat. Blood work will have to show good calcium levels as well as everything else.
I know you're probably thinking ki Komal Di is out and about once again with her medical "lectures," lekin I just thought I would let you know for future reference. Artificial limb lagti hai when a patient has gone through amputation or it could be a congenital reason. Disease ya phir bohot zyaada serious accident ki the leg had to cut off(amputated).
As for the part, I thought it was very beautiful. I love Rahul.
Komal Di
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh my my ....what did i just read ......when i read the artificial limb part i was like totally shocked ...but then rahul handled the suituation so sweetly and let her feel at ease as if nothing worst had happened ....sweet part dear
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great part!! it was beautifully written.. artificial limb?itna bura acciedent tha? wow well first song that came to me when dr said that....... CHAHA HAI TUJHKO.. i love that song.. and i would fit for this partlol

continue soon!

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