MAYUR FF-DOSTI YAA PYAAR? 1st part updated

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I'm updating the 1st part with intro and some scenes.
PS- There is NO DIA AND RANVIJAY.

Characters:

1. Mayank- a sweet guy, full of attitude, a bookworm, Gunjan's best friend, Samrat's & Natasha's step-brother & Nitin's best friend, loves his childhood buddy and Gunjan's sister Nupur but is unaware of it.

2. Gunjan- a sweet & shy girl, bookworm, Samrat's, Mayank's & Natasha's best buddy, has 2 sisters- Nupur and Dia and 1 brother Uday, Uday's favorite and hates Dia a lot & secretly has a crush on Samrat, has a past but never discusses about it.

3. Nupur- a sweet girl, Mayank's childhood buddy & Gunjan's sister, gels very well with Samrat, has Dia, Uday and Gunjan for siblings and hates Dia, full of confidence and knows how to sort out tedha-medha people, has a crush on Mayank.

4. Samrat- Gunjan's best buddy, Mayank's step-brother and Natasha's real brother, secretly has a crush on Gunjan and hates Dia.

5. Uday- Has 3 sisters-Nupur, Gunjan & Dia, bit confused about life, a sensible and mature brother to his sisters, very helpful, but sometimes gets taken granted of.

6. Natasha- Samrat's sister & Mayank's step-sister, a very caring and loving girl, know as the "GYAAN-GURU"

Of the college as she gives meaningful and very useful advice 2 everyone 4 free, has a past but never discusses about it, has a crush on Mayank's best friend and childhood buddy Nitin .

7. Nitin- Mayank's best friend, a cool, cute-looking guy with a devil-may-care attitude, has a crush on Samrat's sister and Mayank's step-sister Natasha.

8. Benji- Samrat's and Gunjan's best friend, cute guy, a big flirt but girls don't give him any ghaas.


Storyline:

Mayank, Gunjan, Natasha, Samrat, Nitin, Benji & Uday are the "KEWLEST" group of the college; in their 1st year of ARTS stream; Nupur is coming back after 6 years from USA after completing her +2 [parents got divorced; Gunjan with mom and Nupur with dad]; everyone else, even Mayank, except 4 Dia is happy.

Sitting in the canteen, everyone is discussing what to do when Nupur comes to the airport.

Gunjan:"Lekin Samrat, tum baat KO kyun nahin samajh rahe ho! Hum log aggar airport jaayenge, toh Dee KO pehchaanege kaise?"

Samrat [thinking]:"Hmmmm……… baat toh tumne pate ki kahi hain chashmish. But don't worry; jab Samrat hain yaha, toh kisiko tension lene ke koi zarrorat nahin hain, alright?"

Gunjan just nodded; Mayank came up with an idea.

Mayank:"Guys, mere paas ek idea hain."

Everybody:"OH NOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Mayank [feeling bad but still cheerful]:"Ek baar meri baat sun toh lo!"

Everybody [looking at each other]:"OK."

Mayank:"Thank you! Now listen, hum log aisa kyun nahin karte hain ki……… Haan, Gunjan tere paas Nupur e-mail id hain Na?"

Gunjan [confused]:"Haan, kyun?"

Mayank:"Dekh, tu Nupur KO ek e-mail bhejh, yeh kehke ki tere paas uski koi photo nahiin hain, aur aggar woh airport par aayegi, toh driver usse kaisi pehchaan paayega? Issi bahane, tujhe uski photo bhi miljaayegi, aur driver ka bahana kar, it will be a surprise 4 her. Simple!!"

Everybody is looking shocked.

Mayank: "Kya hua, Maine aisi kya baat kehdi ki tum sab-ke-sab Mujhe aise ghur rahe ho, jaise ki meri jaan leloge?"

Then, Natasha breaks the silence.

Natasha:"Kya baat hain, Mayu!!![Whistles] Kya baat hain!!!

You know what? Tune toh meri mooh ki baat chheenli!!!!

Mein yehi idea dene waali thi."

Samrat [looking impressed]:"Hmmmm........ not bad, Mayank. Achcha idea hain. Kyun, hain Na, chashmish?"

Gunjan: "I'm surprised Mayank!! Tumhare dimag main itna achcha idea kahaan se aaya?"

Mayank [having an interior monologue]:"Kya karu? Jab bhi Nupur ki baat chalti hain toh, I just can't help it!!!"

Nitin knows the truth but says: "Arre! C'mon, guys!! BF kisika hain? {Referring to himself}"

Natasha and everybody, including Mayank, staring at him in surprise and shock.

Nitin: "Guys, I mean Best Friend kiska hain?"

Natasha just rolled her eyes upwards thinking-"Yeh Nitin toh kabhi nahiin sudharne waala hain! Huh!"

Then, says to herself smiling," Par jaisa bhi hain, mujhe pasand hain."

Samrat:"Hmm.Tune kuch bola Nats?"

Natasha {stammering}:"Aaa bbb.......Nahiin toh. Kuch bhi toh nahiin."

In the evening, Mayank, Benji, Gunjan, Samrat, Natasha, Nitin, Uday and Dia {much to everyone's disgust} come to a cyber cafe and sent an e-mail to Nupur. Within a few minutes, there dialogue box appeared saying, "SEXY_BABE84 is online."

Gunjan smiled saying: "Arre! Yeh toh Dee ka e-mail id. What say, guys? Login kare? Par problem hain!"

Samrat: "Kya hua chashmish? Problem kya hain?"

Gunjan: "Kisiko paas koi e-mail id hain?"

Natasha: "Abbe! Idiot!! Tu bhi Na! Abhi tu mujhe bata, tune login kaise kiya? E-mail ke thru Na? Toh problem kya hain abhi?"

Gunjan: "Problem yeh hain ki mujhe phirse login karna hoga. Aur woh mein nahiin kar sakti hain hoon?"

Coming close to Gunjan, Samrat asked: "Aur woh kyun, chashmish?"

Scratching her head, Gunjan gave a look which meant- "Dude,-i've-again-4gotten-the-password. Now-what-to-do?"

Natasha: "Dude, now don't tell me dat u've 4gotten the password?"

Gunjan gave a helpless look, saying: "Yes."

Natasha cudn't believe it. "Bloody Hell! Ab kya kare?"

While everyone was busy arguing, Mayank had already logged-in and was chatting with Nupur.

For the first time, Benji spoke.

Gunjan: "Guys, Mayank kidhar hain?"

Benji tapped on her shoulder, pointed at Mayank who was laughing while chatting with Nupur, saying: "Madam, uddhar."

Everybody was surprised as to why cudn't they think of this instead of arguing with each other. In the meantime, Mayank not only chatted, but also took out the print-out of Nupur's face and said: "Guys, tum log wahaa baith kar behas karte raho. Aur yahaa, meine naa sirf usse baat ki, balki usski tasveer ka ek print-out bhi nikal diya!!!! Ab bolo?"

Everybody was staring at him in disbelief dat how cud they be such idiots!!!

Guys, this was the 1st part. I know it became a bit long. I;ll update the rest on Tuesday.

I hope u all will like it. Do PM me.

Taniya



Characters:

1. Mayank- a sweet guy, full of attitude, a bookworm, Gunjan's best friend, Samrat's & Natasha's step-brother & Nitin's best friend, loves his childhood buddy and Gunjan's sister Nupur but is unaware of it.

2. Gunjan- a sweet & shy girl, bookworm, Samrat's, Mayank's & Natasha's best buddy, has 2 sisters- Nupur and Dia and 1 brother Uday, Uday's favorite and hates Dia a lot & secretly has a crush on Samrat, has a past but never discusses about it.

3. Nupur- a sweet girl, Mayank's childhood buddy & Gunjan's sister, gels very well with Samrat, has Dia, Uday and Gunjan for siblings and hates Dia, full of confidence and knows how to sort out tedha-medha people, has a crush on Mayank.

4. Samrat- Gunjan's best buddy, Mayank's step-brother and Natasha's real brother, secretly has a crush on Gunjan and hates Dia.

5. Uday- Has 3 sisters-Nupur, Gunjan & Dia, bit confused about life, a sensible and mature brother to his sisters, very helpful, but sometimes gets taken granted of.

6. Natasha- Samrat's sister & Mayank's step-sister, a very caring and loving girl, know as the "GYAAN-GURU"

Of the college as she gives meaningful and very useful advice 2 everyone 4 free, has a past but never discusses about it, has a crush on Mayank's best friend and childhood buddy Nitin .

7. Nitin- Mayank's best friend, a cool, cute-looking guy with a devil-may-care attitude, has a crush on Samrat's sister and Mayank's step-sister Natasha.

8. Benji- Samrat's and Gunjan's best friend, cute guy, a big flirt but girls don't give him any ghaas.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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awessssooooooooooooooooooomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
loved it to core
it was tooo too good !!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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have u posted this part on two threads ???
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wooww! i love it!!!!!!
amazing!!!!!
but how is mayank, samrat and natasha's step brother??
but loved it!
do PM me!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awsome!
but what i did'nt get is howz mayu samrat's step bro?
And u said mayur and gunjan were book worms and smart, then how come gunjan is shown as forgetful and why is every saying no to mayu when he has an idea(is'nt he the smart one)?
Love the setting and how u started it out.
Great! Keep going.
do answer-cause i think i'm a bit mixed up with it-i might b wrong. Correct me.
great work.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey it was gr8!......and i love it when ff's are long......pls pm me when u update next.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey gr 8 part.......... plzz continue it soon........plzz pm me.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey awesome update so maynk have idea and why yaar all hates dia but very nice
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Guys,
thnx for u'r Comments.
Mayu is Nats and Sammy's Step-bro bcoz Nats and Sammy's Dad
became a widower when Nats was born[ Sammy and Nats mom died after giving birth to Nats] , so Dad git RE-MARRIED to MAYU's mom.
SIMPLE!
That's the reason.
And, by the way Ruchi, my net got disconnectd fpr a while.
So, when i connected it again, The intro part came again.
TANIYA

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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwesum. plzzz continue soon.
i really loved the friendly convo among all.
n mayu has loved nups since childhood ,that's amazing.just loved it.
update soon n pm me plzzz.

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