Second Fiddle (AR) Discontinued! - Page 9

hey sim, this really was a quick update! :D happy u didnt keep us waiting too long this time!
what a unpleasant way to get married...really unfortunate circumstances to get tied together for life in! marriages are something to look forward to, a start of something beautiful and new...this is just a compromise, nothing happy at all :(
i feel bad for both...but will they really be able to live as a married couple under such conditions?!
really good part sim, im really looking forward to seeing where this takes them both, how will their lives change...hope u continue soon!

loooved the update and now im relle looking forward to their relationship progressing....update soooon

That was awesome and I totally loved it and plz update soon

Hi there,
I personally loved movie Aaina, so I cant stop myself reading it further when I knew that you are writing around the movie.
Really nice one
keep it up

that was quick simi! and although it may feel like not much moved in general and u only put to word much of what could be speculated, i liked the part. u have an easy flow, uncomplicated and most times unquestionable... i think its ur feather! to be able to nail points, often controversy involving or those provoking difference of opinion with subtle but absolute conviction!

its like, i can't think of many more i know who could make such a wedding happen and still have me not only hooked, but also in no apparent disbelief over its plausibility!!

kudos!

like the bit about her flinching him taking a moment to understand... in fact to be honest, i REALLY liked his entire thought process!

cheers,
nj

Hey that was a wonderfully written beginnig of a new FF.Loved it, am hooked for sure. if u send out PMs then do add me to ur list. Thanks

This was an exquisite part. Wonderful description of the whole situation and what is going in both Armaan's and Riddhima's head. Though the basic story line is of Aaina - your hatke touch is visible allover. After reading this part, I watched the same scenes from the movie itself. And, I find your part a lot better - especially the awkwardness between the two - which is the most expected thing..but was easily brushed aside in the movie.

Eagerly waiting for the next part..and sincerely hoping that it comes in the next few weeks.

hey awesome fic pls pm me when u cont.
and do update quickly

hey nice FF read the whole thing in one go...really interesting and different concept.....would love to read onmore...so please do pm me if u can whenever u update..