All Men Are ..Well Leave It !!! (AR FF)UPD p2/pg2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hiii guys i was reading quiet a few ff's which inspired me to write this one...Hope u guys like it


Ridhima: Seriously yar all men are b****** (remarked Ridhima. angrily)

Muskan: kya hua Ridzi '

Ridhima: 'tumne dekha nahi wo kaise ghoor ghoor ke dekha raha tha hame'

Muski: Sachi mein yar ye Mard bhi na sab ke sab Bandar hai...


Muskan started laughing at her own remark and soon Ridhima joined Muski and both started laughing uncontrollably for few minutes..


Rahul: Are kya hua tum dono itna has Kyun has rahe ho .. 'mere bare mein baat kar rahe the kya? Saying that he *winked* at Muski' as he approached them with ice creams...

Muski and Ridhima controlling their laughter took ice creams from his hand and started giggling to each other and finishing their ice creams '

Muski: Oye khankajure tuje kya, aur waise bhi tumne sahi guess kiya hum tumhare bare me hi baat kar rahe the *winked* back at Rahul and started laughing again 'and soon Ridhima joined her 'leaving Rahul confused...

Atul: Are yar tum dono itna has Kyun rahe ho mujhe bhi batao 'raised eye brows at Rahul enquiring what he missed' as he approached the gang ..

All four are very close friends ....Ridzi and Atul know each other from childhood they both studied in the same school and Rahul and Muski became their friends at college ...they all are in their last year of graduation...


Atul: Are Ridzi batao na kya baat hai mein bhi hasoonga hahahaha yese '.

Ridzi: kuch nahi Atul yun hi soch rahe the ki ki ki...

Muski interrupted Ridzi saying quickly ki 'Sare Mard Bandar Hai' and started laughing hysterically'

Kya both Rahul and Atul muttered loudly at the same time '

Rahul: what made u think so '.asked with questionable face...

Muski: Isme itni hairaan hone wali kya baat hai tum ho sab Bandar '.Bandar Bandar Bandar repeated the words'

Seeing Rahul getting angry at muski's banter Ridzi interfered 'chodo na Rahul chalo chaltein hein '.

Rahul: Nahi Ridzi is chipkali KO sabak sikhana padega kab se matar matar Kari JA rahi hai and ran to catch muski seeing her slowly escaping behind Ridzi '

Atul and Ridzi started laughing seeing them act like kids and started walking together leaving them behind...

Atul: kya hua Ridzi chup Kun ho?

Ridzi: Kuch nahi Atul '

Atul: mujhe pata hai Ridzi ........Jab koi tumhe ghoor ghoor ke dekhtahai to tume gussa aata hai ' aur

Ridzi: tumhe kaise pata?

Atul: WO ab bhi tume hi ghoor ghoor ke dekh raha hai 'saying that Atul laughed slightly...kyun na ho tum itni khubsoorat jo ho still grinning slightly at her irritation and ha wo kya kehti ho tum hamesha ''..

'All Men Are b******* laughed Ridzi saying it loudly

By then Muski and Rahul reached them feeling tired chasing each other '

Wiping sweat Rahul said hearing the famous dialogue of Ridzi ''oh no ab kisne tume tang kiya Ridzi' sach me Ridzi tum kabhi kabhi bachon jaise behave karti ho ' Sare Mard waise nahi hote '.Shararat, Irresponsible, flirting...aur kya hai tumhare list mein ?

Muski interrupted Rahul in between 'ha ha sach kaha Rahul sare tumhare jaise nahi hote hai na 'Bandar' shouting loudly irritating Rahul...

Atul not wanting to hear another tu tu mein mein from Rahul Muski 'said loudly with slight irritation ' Ab tum dono chup karo bahut hogaya... And turned to Ridzi and said ye to sach hai Ridzi tum ab bhi bachi hi ho '

Muski: Han Ridzi tum kab tak yese chidti rahogi male behaviour se 'aise hi rahi to tum kuwari rahjawogi 'saying that muski *winked * at Ridzi slightly '

Ridzi: Muski ...please yar phirse start mat karo'

Rahul: thank god ye hame u know... wo nahi samaj thi looking at Atul 'and again shifting his attention to Ridzi 'mujhe ab bhi Shaq hai ki .kahi hamare peet peeche tum dono bhi hame ..?

Muski: 'Bandar' hai Na Rahul raising her eyebrows to tease him '

Ridzi: Are yar tum dono mere best friends ho yar aur kabhi bhi tum dono ke mu se cheap batein nahi suni... Aur tum dono pakka Gentlemen ho yaar adding this as sugarly as possible hoping to get rid of the topic for the moment answered Ridhima '

Atul and Rahul feeling special smiled to themselves and walked ahead of the girls...

And Ridzi and Muski laughing at their behaviour followed them Out of the park...

Next part Armaan introduction...

Please leave ur comments and let me know whether u guys liked it or not .

Thank you.


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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy!!! welcome to IF, and a good start...
best of luck for this one :D

Kiran
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pebblez

heyy!!! welcome to IF, and a good start...
best of luck for this one :D

Kiran



Hey thank u soo much .....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Riddss

heyy dear,
nice part
continue soon

love
Riddss



Thank you so much ..will continue soon ..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HAHA ridz sounds just like me! i have the same philosophy in life about men!
looking forward to the story to begin, continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dear,
a very nice start.
pls continue soon.
pls pm me if possible.
luv
komal.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice start
pm me when u cont
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey it was great.plz do continue.soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice ff.
wonderful yaar
loved it .
update sooooooooooooooooooooon and pm me if u can.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank you all for your lovely comments ....Iam postin 2nd part ...Hope you guys like it ...let me know your views and any suggestions if any ..

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