Crazy Luv SG &MN FF#2 updt PG 4 14/5 - Page 89

Hi meela

look whose telling! mujhe toh laga tune mujhe bhul gayi! wo bhi totally!

nihu yaar, sun, i am ending my chunk of this in my 23rd -24th updates INSHALLAH, so get ready! dhamakedar mayur engagement toh tujhe hi dena hain, as promised. koi bhi advance detail chahie toh pm karna ok?

Hey Meela, this is just an amazing update, i loved each and every bit of it. I am soo sorry for the late reply. As usual all your parts have this very diverse and flexible nature and isssssssssss sooo adorable man.

thanks a lot, senny!!!

update 21

a choking noise loosens samrat's constipated looking face.

S (looking alarmed): kya hua benji? Asthma attack? (pausing with confusion) par tujhe oh asthma nahin hain! Toh phir? Benji, benji!

rimjan

as they are out of samben's sight rim sighs.

R:yakin nahin hota! Tumne wo fenk diya! Wo bhi dustbin me?

G: rimjhim suno

R (murmuring audibly): aare yaar tumhe nahi chahie that oh mujhe de diya hota! Waha kiu fenka?

In a reply gunjan shows her something which makes her eyes almost pop out.

Bensam

With samrat's great relief, benji looks quite normal now apart from his mortified face.

S: tune toh mujhe dara hi dia tha dude, ek baat bata, achanakse tujhe ho kya gaya tha?

B (making a face): jobhi huya achanak hi toh hua dude!

S: matlab?

B: achanak se usko wo ghadi pasand aya, achanak se tu wo kharida, phir achanak se wo usko dump kiya,,, phir achanak se mujhe wo 1 lakh 71 hazar ka yaad aya aur achanak se mera saanse fulne (samrat smiles at this, benji pauses a bit noticing this) aur ab tere face pe ye million dollar smile laut aya,,,ye bhi toh achanak hi hua na dude?

S: dhakkan! Ye smile ek realization ka smile hain!

B: kaisa realization?

S: yehi ke, gunjan apni amrat ka diya hua koi bhi gift dump nahi kar sakta.

B (mocking): ha ha! Aur jo usne fenka wo kya tha? Ice-cream ka wrapper?

S:very funny! Kuchh bhi ho, Usne wo ghadi bilkul bhi nahi fenki hogi dude, trust me on this.

B: fine. Par tujhe ye nahin lagta tu kuchh bhul raha hain?

S: kya?

B: tune wo gift anonymously bheja hain.

S: toh?

B: toh, use kaise pata hoga ke us gift waqehi me tu hi bheja ya nahi? Ab dhakkan kaun hain? Tu ya main? huh?

Samrat looks alarmed once again.

Rimjan

R (staring at the watch dangling from g's hand): ye yaha hai? Toh phir wo (realising the whole thing she laughs)box tha! Wow gunjan, tumpe toh waqhi apna khudka bhut sawar hain!

G (smiling): samrat ka diyahua koi bhi tohfa, main khudse alag nahin kar sakti.

Bensam

S (grinning): dhakkan abhi bhi tu hi hain benji, tujhe kya laga? Main phool dhundeme itna waqt kiu lagaya?

B: kiu?

S: just bcus she cud guess

B; kya matlab?

S (shaking his head)chhodna benj,,,I mean,,,dhakkan! (he wraps his arm around the annoyed benji's neck laughing)

Mayur

Mayank's parking the car into the mall's parking lot makes only one change in nupur's expression, now its curious instead of annoyed.

M: sorry, par mujhe film dekhneka bilkul bhi mood nahi hain toh socha tumhe thoda shopping hi karwa deta hoon,,, (nupur throws him a lil soft look) aur ab jab hume party me bhi jana hain toh shopping toh banta hain,,,hain na?

In reply nupur begins to unfasten her seatbelt while mayank reaches her door coming out of the car hurriedly.

M (opening the door for still seated nupur, spreads his hand ): ye lo.

N (staring at the card): ye kya hain?

M: debit card.

N (coldly): wo toh dikh hi raha hain, mera matlab hain, ye tum mujhe kiu de rahe ho?

M (confused): tumhe ander zarurat padegi is liye.

N (getting out of the car, facing mayank): kiu? Kya ye lohe ka hain jo tumse uthaya nahi jaraha?

M: main toh car me wait karunga, (not noticing her burning face he continues) suno, paise ke vaare me bilkul mat sochna,,,jo ji chahe kharid lena aur kuchh zarurat padhne se

N (snapping): toh tumhe ye lagta hain ke main tumse tumhara paiso ke liye pyar kiya hain? Hain na mr. mayank shrama?

M looks bewildered, nupur fumes.

bensam

s: yaar paani ser se upar chale jaa raha hain, lifts-gifts ka to koi asar hi nahi! shyad kuchh aur hi karna parega.

B: exactly, sun mere pass ek idea hain,

S: tera idea?!!! Pitwayega kya?

B: yup, pit jaa!

S: kya!!!!!

Mayur at the main entrance

M: nupur , pls aare mujhe kehne toh do,

N: kehne sunneka aur kuchh bhi baki nahin raha mayank! Tumhe pata bhi hain? Kabse main purse me paise aur dilme umeed lekar ghum rahi hoon ke tumhare sath milke shopping karu (she is on the verge of tears now) mujhe tumhara opinion chahie tha mayank, paisa nahin

B4 mayank cud reply a guy begins

G: suniye..hello? zara

N (firing up): kiu sunu? Main apni mayank ka hi nahin sun rahi hoon toh aap ka kiu

G (recovering from the suddn attack): excuse me, u r blockin my way!

N: ye aap ka personal pro

M (cutting in forcing nupur out of the way): sorry! Please go on, (to nupur, making the full use of the opportunity) nupur tum bhi na? baat kaha se kaha pauhcha deti ho! Maine is liye nahi aana chaha kiuke mai tumhe pure freedom dena chahta tha! That's it!

N: by God, mayanak! Azadi dena aur chhor dena me bahat fark hota hain! Tumhe toh itna bhi nahi pata!

M: nupur, main kaha tumhe chhorneka

N (snapping): ab chalo! Mal bandh hone se pehle kuchh kharid lete hain! Tumhara bas chale toh shayad yehi khadi hokar puri raat jhagade me hi bitana paade!

M: kya ?main jhagad raha hoon?

N: aare chhodo na yaar! (dragging mayank inside) aur kuchh na sahi to coolie toh ban sakoge mera!

M (disgusted): aacchhaa! Toh ab main tumhe coolie bhi lagne laga? Haan?

N (smiling, examining him top to bottom): well, sirf uniform ki kami hain!!! (she runs to the escalator, laughing, mayank almost begins to follow her manner but stops abruptly, noticing ppl are already staring at them searching another dosage of amusement, he straightens himself and starts following nupur at a decent pace)

2 days later

Samrat has decided to wait on to be 'pit jana' thing, to give himself a bit more time to his 'gunjan patao' mission. As a result he is keeping a hawk eye on the corridor and his accomplice benji who is on the other end keeping a look out for him. Benji nods and samrat is on action, the idea (bumping to her and then eye lock,,,according to samrat it has 99.9% success rate in melting the iceberg between lovers) isn't quite innovative tho, pity! Anyway, samrat gears up with his usual cools on, tapping a basketball or feigning to do so,,, acting to be oblivious to the ppl passing him, 3 yards now,,,,,two yards,,,,,one,,, crash,,,!

Mayur

N (shutting her book): mayank

M: hmm?

N: us party me jana zaruri hain kya?

M (looking up from his book, looking awed): kya?!!!

N: us party me jana zaruri hain kya?

M: ye tum keh rahi ho? (giving a wicked smile) kiu shaadi ka bahat jaldi hain kya?

N:kya!!!

M:party me na jakar agar nupur bhushan padhai karna chahe toh

N(mocking) ; very funny! Main padhai ki baat kab ki? Party se toh ye aacchhaa hoga ke hum dono date pe jaaye!

M: wo toh h,,,ek minute,,,honestly nupur, baat kya hain? Koi problem hain kya?

N: wo actually,,,mujhe kucchh ajib sa feel ho raha hain,,,

M: ajib sa feel?

N:kuchh darr sa lagne laga hain

M:darr, kaisa darr?

Sajan and rim

At the very last moment of the collision, rimjhim exceeds gunjan by some inches coming out of the nearest class room, as a result ,,,,,samrat's plan kina backfires.

R (falling back as samrat releases her abruptly with a slight push realizing his mistake): samrat!!!!!!!!! Pakdo mujhe!

Both of the sajan (gunjan from behind and samrat from front) spread the helping hands,,,resulting rims safe in sajan's grip. Trust me guys, it's a pretty awkward scene, I mean, eye in eye, hand in hand situation is ok, right? But holding a 5' 5'' living object right in the middle, and above it, forgetting abu her completely is indeed pathetically odd!

Mayur

N: mujhe tahrna nahi aata, mayank!

M: toh?

N: aare, agar main pani me gir gayi toh!

M (hiding a smile): honestly nupur! Ek baat batao, tumhe us party me jaaneka mab hain ya nahi?

N (still lost in thought): man toh hain par,,,

M:toh phir is par-var ko maro goli, hum zarur jaa rahe hain,,,tum sirf masti karna aur tension vagair ke liye,,,main hoon na?

N (smiles after a moment): so sweet mera shah,,,(mayank raises a brow, nupur bites her tongue) sorry,,,mera mayank!

M (shaking his head): pata nahi kab tak is shahrukh se compete karna parega!

N beams.

Sajan benrim

Rimjhim wriggles a bit but no use those two are too into each other to notice.

B (joining in,b4 rimjhim cud say anything): guys guys guys….(the trance is broken at this, gunjan looks uncomfortable, so does samrat) pyar karna aacchhi baat hain,,,lakin us pyar me kisi aur ki pyar ko shahid (at this samrat releases both rimjhim and gunjan's hand)

R (exhaling loudly) : poor tuna!

Samben (in unison while gunjan looks confused): kya?

R: sandwich me tuna ka halath soch rahi thi.

Everyone laughs.

G (recovering first, turning pink recalling the last memory): rimjhim, chalo mere sath, mujhe tumse koi zaruri baat karni hain.

B (after their departure): dude! Is plan bhi fail ho gaya, hain na?

S : dimaag hain ya kachre ki dabba?

B: kiu?

S: dekha nahi, asar hum dono pe hi barabar ka tha?

B: toh phir wo aise kiu chali gayi? Bina kuchh kahe?

S (exasperated): tu waqehi me bahat lucky hain ke tujhe rimjhim jaisi ladki mili,,,tu samrat ka dost hain,,,guru samrat ka! apna insensitivity ka misal qayem karke guru ka naak katwaneka iraada hain kya?

B: dekh dude, mera iraada hamesha se hi tere bhalai ka hi tha, ye baat alag hain ke (looking a bit embarrassed) ye baat mujhe abhi bhi samajh me nahi aa raha.

S (sighing): gunjan, ek ladki hain , mana ki wo sabse best hain (benji corrects apparently thinking of rimjhim, 'one of the bests' , samrat chuckles seeing his point) ok, best hain mere liye? Ab thik hain? (benji nods) phirbhi ladki hi toh hain? Isi liye ladkyan ki kuch common attributes usme bhi hain, jisme is terha se thode bahat nakhde dikhana bhi shamil hain. Ab samjha?

B: clearly. (looking at the hurrying samrat) ab kaha jaa raha hain tu?

S (winking): spying karne!

Rimjan

R (sharing a laughter with gunjan): ab jaane bhi do yaar, bahat hua, maaf kardo ab us bechare ko.

G: wo toh main kabke kar chuki hoon.

R: toh phir ye sab?

G: dancer ready, stage ready, music bhi ready,,,(smiling) dance director ka place leke thodi nacha rahi hoon use, apni isharon pe.

R (touches her forehead): nahin, fever-wever toh nahi hain tumhe ,,,phribhi???!!!(laughing) phirbhi ye aacchhaa hua, sach sach naraz rehnese toh kahi zyada aacchha (noticing the fading smile of gunjan) hey, ab ye mat kehna ki sachme hi thodi narazgi reh gaye hain dilke kisi kone me!

G (shaking her head in a no): nahin, koi gila-shikwa nahin, bas thoda sa khalipan,,,mere samrat ka na hone ka ek,,,chhod ye sab bina matlab ki baton ko,,,btw tumhara dress ka problem solve huyi?

R(seriously): ek baat mat bhulna gunjan, samrat jaisa bhi ho,jis avatar me hi ho, wo hamesha gunja ka hi rahega.

Gunjan nods as they leave. The cam freezes on a tensed samrat face.

wow superb toooo gud amazing
plss continue soon
i a m jus tloving it

thnaks a lot for apu ur update.... haven't read it yet, will make comment after reading it.

Great yaar. Continue soon. It was so lovely. Nd thanx 4 d pm. U r realy a sweet heart.

Hey sorry dear, i didnt see the reply of u on my 1st comment. Thanx 4 it yaar. Surely i'll b ur friend yaar. But i cant post long comments since i'm logging from my mobile, its very difficult. And d worst thing is dat my college is opening on 3rd sep nd mob is not allowd there for 6 months, so i cant help it. But whenever i come back 2 kerala, i'll b commenting on ur ff. So pls 4give me if u didnt see my comments. And its a pleasure 2 b ur friend yaar.

hi di!!!!!