AR FF:~Sun-Kissed Face~(8/3)..Last Part 12/pg 61

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys

As my fic, Breathless is going to be end in a part or two...I will start a new one in JULY...after my finals

it will be my Summer Collection...

i know its too early to give the Intro...but I am not being able to stop myself

~Sun-Kissed Face~

~:Index:~
Part 1-2...page 5
Part 3(A)...page 6
Part 3(B), 4(A), 4(B)...page21
Part 5-6-7-8...page 35
Part 9-10-11-12...page 61


~:Promo:~


Armaan look around and get startled...a feeling strike to him that he never actually got to know the world in reality...lost in his own business world...he never knew there is a life out that...it was a plain ground in between where he was standing, while a series of closed build houses were covering it from all around...the atmosphere around him smelled of alcohol, cigarettes...it was bright and he can easily hear the laughing of the girls...who were teasing some of there customers...He was getting about to turn back to the exit when a voice stopped him

"Hey handsome, where are you leaving?" armaan turned around and look at the aged old women but her make-up made her look much younger...

"Ah, actually..." as he started to say something...the lady turn around and start walking

"Reshma...Reshma bai...thats my name"

"Follow me" armaan, baffled, thought to turn around but he knew...something is there which is attracting him as he start follow her

Reshma reached to the stairs and turn to look at him

"I know what you want...every man here just come for one thing..." she said curling the single strand of her hair and looked at him wickedly

"You want fresh meat or..." Before she can say something...armaan found himself nodding

"You are lucky...we just get one in evening...She is Still Untouched" Reshma look at his face to see the excitement but found him plain and then move upward to the close connected rooms

Reaching near one of the rooms, she stopped for a minute before opening the door

"Stay here"

About 15 minutes later, armaan heard her voice again calling someone out

"Come honey, you are going to explore the new world" armaan turned around to find that innocent, dull face...an emotion of scariness and petrify was shown on her face

Reshma ask him in eyes about the girl...and armaan nod

"Ok baby, go in..." the girl rushed inside

"So, how much time you need?" The teasing voice was again there

Armaan smiled and looks at her

"For life"

Reshma looked at him shocked...

"But, i can't allow you that"

Armaan take out his cheque book from his pocket and draw a plain cheque...

"Fill your amount...but she is mine"

Reshma look at him and then at cheque

"Ok...but if it get bounced...you are going to pay hard"

"it will not...and let me warn you...if you ever get into my life again or in this girl life...i am going to destroy your so called business"

Reshma get tempered but she didn't dare loosing such a wealthy customer

"Don't worry about that...let me make her get ready for you..." she turned around as a smile formed on her lips

She opened the door to get in, when armaan voice stopped her

"By the way, whats her name..."

Reshma thought for a moment and then said

"Nisha" armaan read many novels in which the prostitutes are given different names so they look more appealing...but she was not a prostitute...she was a simple Sun-Kissed Face...which was looking up at the Sun to guide her and he will be that Sun

"The Original Name"

Reshma get to know that he is well experienced and said

"Riddhima...you are going to love her"

"I am sure, i will" as armaan said...she disappeared into the room..


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luv ya guys

lolz
ana

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Posted: 16 years ago
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anu didiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii. (i still call u anu even though its ana) hehe Love it love it love it
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh its soooooooooooooooooo gooood
mannnnnnnnnnn soooo different
LoVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE ittttttttttttttt
toooooooooooo goood
exceptionally amazingggggg
mindblowing
toooo outstanding
loved every momment of it
do continue soon
and Pm me
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HEy Ana..
Yet another mindblowing concept..
Well well.. I'm not surprised at all..even a small part of ur FFs leave me speechless..
Would be waiting eagerly for this new FF..

Rucha

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wooooooow amezing intro really goood
plsss contineu sooon
could you plsss pm me when you update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Ana,
The concept is really nice.
The Promo was amazing, I am looking forward to read it.
So Armaan is in a way an angel in disguise for Ridhima.
I will eagerly wait for this FF.
Till then all the best for ur exams😃.

Luv u<333
Kashish
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey i read your little teaser and i am waiting for u to continue soon! plez send me a pm when u update!
...komal...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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interesting concept
looking forward to read more of it :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey amezing hun...love it...amezing promo..cant wait till u write more..do pm whenever u udpate..thank 4 the pm..
❤️MONA
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dear
awesome intro
really loved it😃
superb👏
Edited by susha11 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ugh!!!! Your are BRUtal Ana, Brutal!!! You know how long this wait of torture you are going make me go through till JulLY woman!!!! 😆 MAN I LOVE IT!!!! 👏👏👏
The concept is very different and new, I'd absolutley love it woman! And yes I still got to read your other FF, I will get to ot soon!!! Now you got all sorts of question popping up my head, but i guess it will be answered once you do part, DAT to in july!!!😭
Im just teasing! Best of luck on your exams!!
Nats xo.

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