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MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Anjalika Khanna
amazin parts..........
plz make the updts long if possible.............

ohk will try too

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MoNayaHolicPrag

@MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#72

hey guys will b updating in 5 mins pls wait

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MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#73

ohkey here i go with my next part

gun: samrat plss hato
sam: sorry chashmish
gun: its ohkey. ab padai karne chale
sam: ha
gun: theek hai tum ek kaam karo yeh kuch notes hai isse paro or batao ki tumhe koi problem toh nahi tab tak main chapter parti hoon
sam: theek hai
both hav a book in hand but after every 5 secs they r looking at each other and after sumtime sam starts starring and gunjan
gun: kya hua samrat ? aise kya dekh rahe ho? pado!
sam cums to hs senses
sam: kuch nahi kuch samjhne ki koshish ka rraha tha
gun: kya lao main samjha du
sam: yahi ki tumhe aaj tak kisi se pyaar hus hai ?
gun: kya ? padai ke beech main pyaar kaha se aagaya samrat
sam: main ne jo pucha pehle uska jawab do
gun with her head down and a lil sad
gun: pata nahi
sam: pata nahi ka kya matlab hai ?
gun: kyun samrat tmhe pata hai ki tumhe kisi se pyaar hua ya nahi ?
sam: ha pata hai or insaan ka mujhe pata thore dino pehle hi pata chala hai
gun go sad cause she thought it will be sheena but stil to keep cool she asked sam
gun: kaun hai woh
sam: woh kaun?
gun: jisse tum pyaar karte ho
sam: oh woh woh hai jo hamesha mere paas rehti hai hamesha mere aankhon main rehti hai woh jisse main apne dil main rakhta hoon woh jiske bina main ek pal nahi guzar sakta woh jisse dur jaane ka man nahi karta
gun nearly had tears in her eyes but tried to control
sam: or woh aur koi nahi chashmish balki
long pause

tum ho
gun shocked : kya ??????????????
sam: ha chashmish main tumse yeh baat kabse kehan cha raha tha par himmat nahi hui main nahi chahataa tha ki meri feelings ki wajah se hamari dosti toote aur tum muhse naraz ho par main or nahi rook pa ya khud ko
gun: samrat tum nahi jaante tumne yeh bol kar mujhe itna khush kiya hia
kyunki main bhi tumse utna hi pyaar karti hoon jitna tum mujhse karte hoo or mere man main bhi aise hi feelings the par main tumhe nahi bata saki
i luv u samrat
sam: i luv u too chashmish......
and they hav a tight hug
cont guys

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MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#74

hello guys plss comments
and yes mayur scene cuming uo

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Samira

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Posted: 16 years ago

#75

wow i m the first 1 to comment kool

luved ur part

luved d confession

& ya long pause was very long hehehe

but gr8 part as always.................luved it

now can't wait to c sajan's romance

thnxs for the pm & continue soon

Samira

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MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: KaSh_Monaya
wow i m the first 1 to comment kool congrats for that 😳

luved ur part thnx 😳

luved d confession thnx once again

& ya long pause was very long hehehe suspense u see
but gr8 part as always.................luved it yeh i am so creative lolz thnx

now can't wait to c sajan's romance ya sure tell my partners to update they wil add romance

thnxs for the pm & continue soon no need to thnk its ok

Samira

luv u loads
pragya

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Sayani

@-SiDsAnGeL-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#77

First of all a big Sorry to Hemu and Prags...
as i am late..i have done only 1 update..sorry yaar..i was lil busy yesterday...Really Sorry..

U two Rocks..kya update tha..awesome prags...tujhe to mjht ki writer hona chahiye..and Hemu...claps for u..claps***

ab mujhe darr lag raha hai...arey itne acche update ke baad kya likkho..
but i will update in 10 mins...
sorry again

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Ruchi

@ruchi_mrugjal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#78

Hey everyone who contributed to the scene

THE SCENE TOTALLY ROCKED !!

I could actually imagine it in front of my eyes... (gunjan was waering her yellow salwaar kameez & samrat his red t-shirt 😉 )

i reiterate "YOUR SCENE WAS FABULOUS !!"👏⭐️

P.S. : please continue with MayUr part too if possible 😊

Edited by ruchi_mrugjal - 16 years ago

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Sayani

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Posted: 16 years ago

#79

They were looking at each other...no one is saying a word...just staring at each other's eyes...
Then suddenly Samrat speaks up..

Sam:chashmish..agar isi tarha hum ek dusre ko dekhte rahe to puri raat guzar jayegi aur hum kuch nehi padh payenge...

Gunjan looked down..
Gunjan: pata hai samrat...mujhe hamesha se laga tha ki tum mujhe apna best friend maante ho aur Sheena se pyaar karte ho...(tears came in her eyes)Main to aj bhi yehi soch rahi thi ki tum aur sheena.....

samrat came close to her and kept his finger on her lips..
sam:ssshhhhh...ab to pata chal gaya hai na ki main tumse pyaar karta hoon..bas...ab plzz maat ro chasmish...in Fact tumhe to khush hona chahiye ke tum samrat ki girlfriend ho...Wink**

Gunjan:Kyun?kyun khush hona chahiye..tum Prime Minister ho?

Samrat: nehi main is world ka sabse handsome ladka hoon jise har ladki pyaar karna chahata hai...

Gunjan came close to him and hold his cheeks..
Gun:par ab wo ladka sirf mera hai...

Samrat came closer to her...remove her glasses..and kissed her eyes...and lied on her laps...gunjan was playing with his hairs
Samrat:pata hai chashmish..main is duniya ka sabse lucky insaan hoon ke mujhe tum mili...i m the Luckiest...kyunki tum sabse acchi ho..

Gunajn :aur tum sabse Januable..

Sam then kissed on her cheeks...
she blushed and stood up...

Samrat:kaha ja rahi ho chashmish.. ?maat jao..