teri sajni*AR+SaJan* FF..Updated part 2-pg. 10 - Page 7

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Posted: 16 years ago
#61
Hey dear,
The part was great, I really enjoyed.
AR scene were awesome.
So Armaan was falling for her, he didn't even flirt with her friend.
OMG she has left him, I hope ehr dad is fine.
Pls continue soon and thnx for the PM.

Luv u<333
Kashish
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Posted: 16 years ago
#62
@warda oh gawd! teri comment ne to dil khush kar deeta
m so so so glad u likd it
thnx u ton
einstine.??? shakesphere...gosh! i culd nva get a better comment den dat...!!!!!!
u made ma day..ma nite evrythng.
thnk u so much sweety pie
no wayz not at all better dan u atleast
thnk u so much yaar! m so happy u likd it
haila! ur blushin wuld be so cool yaar
tak ur picture & send it 2 me!
thnk u tons & tons..!
stripper..hahah
i wil surly do dat dun worry
aftr all readers ko jo cahiye vo karna hi padega na hahahaha
thnx so much sweety
evn m proud 2 call u ma frnd..

@kashish thnx 4 likin ma junglee writting..
thnx a ton..hmM! hope dat be a gud concept..crossed fingers
glad u liks it..!!!!!!
wil surly do so

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Posted: 16 years ago
#63
Part 2
D clock was striking 1.30 but a girl wasnt sleepy. She sawn her sister who was sleeping soundly. She smiled & she didnt wanted 2 disturb her so she went downstairs and opened the window. Cold wind was blowing. She felt as she is in heaven for a second. She sat down the window streching her one leg & folding her other leg near her chest. She closed her eyes & she felt is so peaceful. It was really the best moment of her life. She felt nothing else can make her happy than this but she heard the sound of rain drops & opened her eyes saying "I was wrong..that could get better...its raining...!!!" She went outside to the lawn & streched her arms wide feeling the water drops on her face. She started singing in joy
"gunji si hai sari fiza jase bajti ho sehnaiya
acting as she is playing a trumpet
lehe rati hai mehki hawa gungunati hai tanhaiya
movin her hand on ground 2 feel d wet grass
sab gate hai sab hi madhoosh hai
smelling the atmosphere as the sand came in contact with rain
hum tum q khamoosh hai
places her finger on her lips in a kiddish way
saase dil chedo na..chup ho q gaao na
givin a questioning luk on her face but again a big smiles covers it
aao na...aao na...aao na..aao na!!"
walkin down d lawn feeling the rain on her body but jus den she heard sum1 sayin "aa gaya" She turned around whn her hair was watery & clothes wer stiking her body. She sawn a guys who was standing out side of the gate wearing a green jacket & jeans & his hand were above her head covering his face from rain. She said "do i know u?" D guy replied "all beautiful girls know me..but i didnt knew that the most beautiful gurl dun know me...well diz is samrat!" D gurl gaved him a do i care look & was about to go to the room back whn Samrat sneezed & den managed 2 say "dun get me wrong. Acc. i was passin through here but ma bike isnt working ryte now..dun know wht crap is der but listen can u please lend me a umbrella as i dont wanna get more wet so..." whn gurl cutted him off 2 say "u were passin through at 2 o'clock & u r already wet..y do u need umbrella now?" givin a questioning look
sam said "i need it. as m sick but den 2 i went 2 party 2day"
gurl said "k..i get it 2 u" she ran in d home gettin a umbrella she gav it 2 samrat & samrat askd her name..where she told "jab lotane aaoge tab bata dungi..!!" sam said "agar main lotane nhi aaoga to..." "to main tumpe umbrella curane ka F.I.R. likhaungi" Dey laughed & samrat said bye 2 her. When she was still getting wet she heard her sister screaming from her bed "Gunjan! kaha chali gai tu" Gunjan went up to her sister & said just 2 enjoy the rain. Her sister was still sleepy so she went to sleep again & gunjan went 2 change her wet clothes
Next day:
Gunjan, her sister (nupur) were having breakfast. The bell rang. Gunjan went 2 see who was at door & she opened the door. She sawn a umbrella above her face & was shocked looking at that. She went off it to see who it was & sawn samrat der. She smiled. Samrat said "lo tumhari umbrella...nhi to main kal jail mein hota" dey giggled whn her sister asked her who it was. She askd samrat to join dem at break fast & he agreed. Nupur was den chekin out samrat who was wearing a white shirt & d top 3 bottons were unbottoned & his hair was spread all around giving a messy look & a million dollar smile on his face. Nupur said "gunjan ye..." waiting for her to reply who he was..when gunjan replied her "di ye samrat hai..vo acc. main isse kal hi mili thi aur..." "aur muje jail bhijvane ki dhamki bhi di thi! vase asmaani..muje tumhara naam pata chal hi gaya" gunjan smiled at him & 3 of dem were havin breakfast & chatting. Nupur & Samrat were laughing as hell where Gunjan was just giggling. They were done with their breakfast.
"By god samrat...tum to bilkul pagal ho!"
"hu nhi..ho gaya...tumhe dekh kar koi bhi pagal ho sakta hai" nupur hit him playfully where gunjan smiled & said "samrat tumne muje thanx bhi nhi kaha ab tak"
"oh umbrella k liye ya phir breakfast k liye?"
"dono k liye"
"wel sam kabhi kisi ko aise thanx nhi bolta iske liye tumhe mere sath dinner pe jana hoga"
"vo samrat main...vo...umm!!...acctully..vo"
"vo umm! aahh..means yes..so i pick u at 8..k be ready..bye god i mean bye nupur" Nupur widened her eyes as samrat made fun of her. The 1st time it was that some guy made her fun but then to she said him bye! samrat winked at her & left
nupur said "by go *remembering what samrat said..she 4got dat & spoke back*...vase gunjan tere dost aj kal bahot ache ban rhe hai"
"matlab"
"dekh pehle armaan jo ki aadha pagal hai...aur ab ye samrat jo pura pagal hai" dey laughed at her words
"vase gunjan..abhi main chalti hu vo kya hai maine abhi tak libraray ki books lautai nhi hai..to main milti hu shaam ko"
"shaam ko kyu??"
"vo library k baad main movie dekhne ja rhi hu..kya hai ki akshay kumar ki nai movie aa rhi hai aur tuje to pata hai muje vo kitna acha lagta hai to.... so chal bye!" they huged each other and even nupur left.
"di bhi na.!!" She went upstairs to her room

Dinner time. Samrat came near her house & beeped the horn of his bike & gunjan sawn him from her window & smiled saying i am coming. She went down & said "tumhari bike chalu ho gai"
"tumhe dekh kar..acc. aj subah servising kar vai u know kal puri raat baarish main..bichara bimaar ho gaya"
"haha...vase hum ja kaha rhe hai"
"tum betho to sahi asmaani"
"asmaani???..tumne subah bhi muje isi naam se adress kiya tha..whtz d deal?"
"umm! i dunno..tumhe dekh kar bas asmaani hi nikal ta hai" They went to a restraunt & samrat pulled the chair for her. Gunjan asked him wether he is filrting with him. Samrat said that "U r ma friend but den u know samrat ko beautiful girls k samne pighal jata hai"
"like that..main bata du ki main bas isliye aai hu kyuki...kyuki....kyuki"
"kyuki maine bulaya..dun worry no more filrting k!" she smiled back & dey chatted for a long time then. The restraunt had one one else except them. But they didnt even realized that..they were just going on & on. Samrat asked her the secret of her singing. When Gunjan said that she herself didnt knew that but yesterday she just felt all her's & sang for the first time. They again got in their talks where the waiter came & said them it was time for the restraunt to get close. By listening that gunjan started to panic "samrat..di ghar par akeli hogi..ab kya..unhe to yaad bhi nhi hoga ki main tumhare sath hu..ab? di to pagal ho rhi hogi mere khyaal mein...ghar ja kar aur daat padegi" samrat was just staring at her as she was just over reacting to the incident & was expressionless
"muje dekh kya rahe ho samrat..chalo jaldi!" dey left d restraunt & samrat left gunjan at her place & he left to his.

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hope u likd it
i know it was bit dissapointing but hey! wasnt it a huge one
nxt part wil b on both AR & SaJan so no worries..k
i dun hav time 3 pm ny1 ....wil do it as soon as possible
but do comment! 😊
Edited by komal_4_u - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#64
its very good sweety keep it up..👍🏼 lovely hun keep writing n yea its really niceeeeeeeeeeeeee..😆
Edited by saher_90 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65
hey dear,
amazing update.
pls continue soon.
thnx for the pm.
luv
komal.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy dear,
nice part
continue soon
thanks For PM.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its really nice dear 👏
keep it up
loved it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi!!!! nice part 👏 thanx 4 d pm cont soon
love soumya 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#69
woah dear🤗 its rocking one dear⭐️ so cute😍 plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉

"Jiske pass kuch nahi hota use log haste hai,
aur jiske pas sabkuch hota hai usse log jalte ,
aur hamare pass Dosti hai usse pane ke liye log tarste hai."


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Posted: 16 years ago
#70
nice part
pls update asap

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