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Posted: 16 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: nehasfan

nice start.....
cont soon......

thnks for commmentingg....🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Samrat_Gunjan

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee yaar 👏
its really nice update
i didn't find anything pakao in it
infact in my looking forward now 4 AK

continue soon

hey natz.....thks a ton fr liking it..n nt finding it pakao..😆😆
🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: naughtyash

wow awsome do continueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee if u do plz pm me plz

thnks fr liking it.....🤗🤗..n yeah..i will def pm u....😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24

hii..guys....heres wat happened next.... 😉😉

EPISODE 2

KRIPA'S MANSION

"Ramu kaka...ramu kaka.."😉

"kya hua kripa bitiya..??"😛

"kaka mera break fast..??aapko pata hai na ki aaj mera 2nd year mein 1st day hai...yakin nehi hota..RAS mein ek saal guzar gaya..."

"haan beta..main aapka purse lata hoon.."

"kya hua,aap itne udas kyun hai..??"😕

"kuch nehi beta"

"arre kuch to hai..dekho aap mere samne ye faltu ke jhoot mat bolo..."

"beta wo meri patni bimaar hai..to main thoda.."

"kya..aur aap meri falto batien yaha sun rahe hain,aap abhi jao..i can take care of myself.."😉

"kuch angrezi mein..."😕

"arre.sorry..aap jao abhi.."😆

"mera RAS mein ek saal ho gaya,aur mom and dad ne mujhe ek bar congratulate bhi nehi kiya..hmmm pata ho to kuch bole naa..!!..."😭

kripa.after getting ready,sees her mom sleeping though itz quite late,and doesnt care to wake her up.....her father has already left,n so she leaves for RAS too..

RAS

Scene 1

Angad has joined RAS ,as an employee..because well i want dat..n so does his father....

Angad –"arre ye armaan kahan reh gaya..zaroor kisi ladki ki saath hoga...useless ...."😡

Armaan-"hi dude..!nervous ..?pehla din hai yahan parr..!"😉

Angad- Abbe ooye..main yahan par employee hoon...nervous kis khushi meinn..?aur waise,mr dude..aap the kaha...?"😆

Armaan-"vo main..."😳

Angad-"as usual..kaha tha pata pata ..par phir bhi tu bol...sharma mat....ooo main t o bhul gaya..sharmana to teri dictionary mein hai hi nehi..."😆

Arman-"aur isi liye tu mera yaar hai.."😉

Angad-"jiske yaar ki hazaroon dildaar hai..bol aaj pyar hua...?"😆

Armaan-"arre tu to janta hai...."😳

Angad-"haan janta hun..armaan ka pyaar,aur uske dimples..kabhi nehi chup sakte....ye kisi ghisi piti film ki tarah ek hi line mat repeat kar..."

Armaan-"jab mujhe pyaar hoga naa..arre chodo kyun abhi se apne barbadi ke sapne dekh raha hun...grow up armaan...."

Angad-"acha chal mujhe kaam hai ...main jata hun.."

Armaan-" i will miss u.."

Angad-"get lost..."

n no..this wasnt dostana....!!😈😆

scene 2

the students have been called to the hall,n dere has been an announcement that the annual drama event would take place{i havent copied this frm mjht..they copied it frm me.😈] and there would be teams of 4 people...{no points for guessing who 4.😆..]..2 freshers,1 senior..n one creative..btw angad happens to be a creative.....

the studentsare gathered around the notice board..searching for their respective partners....

ridhima-"arre ye list to qutub minar se bhi lambi hai..isme mera naam kaha hai.."😕

armaan is obviously standing besides...eager to defeat ridhima...

"arre yaar angad...ye list to eifel tower se bhi lambi hai.."then he wispers slowly into angad 's ears"kyunki eifel tower qutub minat se lambi hai..."😆

ridhima is..😡😡

"hmm vaise ek chiz hai...jo isse bhi lambi hai..😉"{slowly}

armaan-"hmm..kuch kaha.."😕

ridz-"hmm.nehi..vaise tumne kabhi notice kiya hai..tumhari naak bahut lambi hai..."😆😆

armaan-"excuse me.."

ridz-"bhagwan ne ye'rich n brat'logon ko daulat to zakhir hussain ke balon jitne diye hai...par vo dimag ki supply karna bhul gaye hai..nehi.."

armaaan--"dekho..mind ur own business.."😡

"dude..noww dats her business.."..angad who was standing dere...tired at their silly fight..suddenly found the rite way to interrupt them..

ridhima.."what...?"

armaan.."kya..?"

angad-"arre..arre..relax..i meant ki tum dono meri group mein ho.."

ridhima-"dats not possible.."

armaan-"cut the crap.."😉

ridhima.."shut up.."😡

armaan"u shut up.."😡

ridhima.."u"😡

armaan"u".......😡

angad..."CHUP...and the third one is.....kripa....main janta hun vo kaun hai..tum dono kal rehersal ke liye class room 10 mein aajana.."

scene 3-AK first meeting

angad..who was passing by the corridor...suddenly sstopped dead in his tracks...some thing..rather some one had caught his attention...and he had forgotten every thing at the moment..he felt dazed.😳...and nothing seemed important to him rather than oogling at her...but then he had no choice but to just stare..because he was too late to stop it....

kripa.."aaarghhhhh..omg ...omgg....."kripa had closed her eyes tighly..n clutched the nearest person standing dere...which obviously happened to angad.....

angad-"relax.."...."aap aankhen khol sakte hain.."😉

kripa slowly opened her eyes...n saw angad..but before she could thing ny more..."aaarghhh ...help....chilkali..vo bhi too many.....😕"

angad..'dekho...mujhe lagta hai.."😉

kripa.."mujhe tumhare opinion ki koi zarurat nehi hai...mujhe jane do..move..!"😡

angad-"fine...."

suddenly they were interrupted by kripa's friends..who were laughing uncontrolably...too happy to heve made kripa fall for their prank..which was a rarity..

kripa.."oo so this was a.."

angad.."prank.."😆

soon all of them joined in the laughter.😆😆😆...and kripa registered what she saw...going by angad's dressing..she made out that he isnt too well off.. but there was some thing.angad had acertain warmth ,an aura surrounding him.... a mysterious pull...n she couldnt help herself from liking him instantly.....they introduced themselves...basically angad introduced him self...😉

angad..."umm hi..m angad...vo drama meet mein i m ur creative partner..so if u could come tomorrow to classroom 10..."

"oookk.. iwil be dere...bye...."

soo guys..did u like it..?dere is less humour in this episode...because iwanted to show the depressions in kripa's life.....😉

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Yaaaayy Firts to comment😳


Aneesha.........🤣

whoa babe......

So funny.....

Armaan ki naak lambi hai.....

I love the Angad Armaan thingy..........so funny......

n MJHT copied from u.........🤣

Awesome man............

i didnt know u cud write well..

and by this i can suggest u a title..

"Zindagi ho to aisi"

its just a suggestion...

Gawjus part pertaining to ur humour..gosh.....my grandma went phyche wondering whats wrong with me😆

Love

Steffi🤗



Edited by Steff_DMG - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Steff_DMG

Yaaaayy Firts to comment😳


Aneesha.........🤣

whoa babe......

So funny.....

Armaan ki naak lambi hai.....

I love the Angad Armaan thingy..........so funny......

n MJHT copied from u.........🤣

Awesome man............

i didnt know u cud write well..

and by this i can suggest u a title..

"Zindagi ho to aisi"

its just a suggestion...

Gawjus part pertaining to ur humour..gosh.....my grandma went phyche wondering whats wrong with me😆

Love

Steffi🤗



thnksss.........🤗
i cn 🥳 now....😆😆..
n yeah..cool suggestion...😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Angad has joined RAS ,as an employee..because well i want dat..n so does his father....

@ blue font - 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Armaan-" i will miss u.."

Angad-"get lost..."


Defo Dostana ........even if u say no 😉


the students have been called to the hall,n dere has been an announcement that the annual drama event would take place{i havent copied this frm mjht..they copied it frm me.😈]


Thanks for informing that....u should register a case aginst them 😈😈😈😈

armaan-"hmm..kuch kaha.."😕

ridz-"hmm.nehi..vaise tumne kabhi notice kiya hai..tumhari naak bahut lambi hai..."😆😆

"Naak" thing was very well said.......it......ummm.......reminded me of something 😉

I liked what u wrote and specially your comments between the story.....AK meeting was nice 😉


@ Kaminey poster

The poster is nice 😉

Are u planning to use Shahid in your story ???😉....give him a role in the FF 😉

Edited by mysticwater24 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#28
@paro..
thnkssssss...for likin it....muaahhhhhhhh....🤗
n well ermm..that kaminey poster was supposed to be posted in d cc....😈..
bt i def wont mind a special appearance frm himm....n yeah i have to sue mjht.....😈
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sorry posted something here by mistake Aneesha 😆
Edited by mysticwater24 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg LOL 😆 luvd it Aneeshuuu!!!!!!!
🤣
armaan nd angad!!!!!!
GOD cant control!!!!! 🤣
"sharmana tho teri dictionary mien hai hi nahi!!!!"🤣
lol as paro said..... hehe defo dostana................ will miss u... get lost !!!!!🤣
haan haan anshuuu MJHT copied it frm u! :P

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