FF:Contract Marriage[MayUr]Pt23 pg113 4/8

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twiinkletoes

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Posted: 16 years ago

#491

i just finished reading the previous parts of this ff. rohit, you are writing a story about two persons who are mayank and nupur just by their names. they hold any of the traits of the original mayur neither in their appearances nor in in their attitudes. so its tad difficult to imagine them in a completely new scenario. again this is the reason which is making the ff original in the lot. your storyline and way of writing is unique for sure. the mayur scenes are damn passionate and i am in cloud 9 even to visualize them 😍. unfortunately we won't get to see anything sort of that in the soap 😔. anyways keep the good work going

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Rohit86

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Posted: 16 years ago

#492

Originally posted by: adi_gupta
very touching rohit
thx for saving maynk

very nice update

when u clear the misunderstanding that maynk not love nupur

plz soon update

Thanks for the comment dear, i am glad that you like it😃

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Rohit86

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Posted: 16 years ago

#493

Originally posted by: cuppycake990
rohit ....ohh godd...you made me cry soo hard on this part....😭in the beginning that is....
i am really sorry to make you cry dear, i didnt intend too

but the end brought a smile to my face...😊
thanx yaar for making mayank better.......im glad nupur is back with him....plzz dont make mayu suffer any further...

Lets see, but he has to suffer a little naa as long as nups is not there with him?😉

this part is my favv till date...AMAZING JOB yaar👍🏼...it really touched my heart.....thank u soooo much....it was a treat to read this...
u did great as usual.....😃
aisha..

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Rohit86

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Posted: 16 years ago

#494

Originally posted by: ananya_s
wow rohit!!!!!!!!!!!.................dis update was so amazing plz dnt make mayank unconcious again na like u did in d oder 1 plz.........

i am not going to do that, i have something else in mind, shayad😕😆😉
😉
nyway dnt make it too tragic either....i mean d part wer she tells him shes married nd abt sahil's child and all.......

Voh toh hona hai naa?? He has to know that!!

plz let dem gt togeder soon na.......nyway wonderful amazing fantastic fantabulous actually..........many many more words of praise fr dis update......it rocked.....updt ur oder ffs too nd plz updt dis one soon
wid luv

Thanks for the compliment
ananya

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cuppycake990

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Posted: 16 years ago

#495

hey rohit plzz update karo..we have been waiting since long..

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Rohit86

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Posted: 16 years ago

#496

Originally posted by: Senny
hey rohit so sorry for commenting so late, but my my what an update, i deem it to be the best update of your ff so far it was the best, i had watery eyes myself, i know so emotional na but i loved it so much, i don't know how to express my feelings, i still have a lump in my throat after reading it, but i am kind of scared again as this happiness is shortlived because someone or nupur herself might tell him that this is not his baby please don't let nupur do that or anyone else for that matter this will spoil the fun and touching element na. only right now mayank has got ok.

I am glad that you like it, sorry to make you cry, That part was meant to be emotional, get ready for some more part like this😛😉
Lets see, if happiness is short lived?😉He has to know abt baby thing, lets see how😉

Edited by Rohit86 - 16 years ago

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Rohit86

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Posted: 16 years ago

#497

Originally posted by: hazel94
Omgshhhh rohit im speechless
its was very insightful nd touching

Thanks for compliment😳

the bit where she is talking to him was just amazing u wrote it beautifullly that was the best part so realistic type thing.........I Am glad that you felt it

thankyouu for making mayank better Welcome

but nupur is married =[

im eager for the nxt upd

thxx

hazel

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Rohit86

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Posted: 16 years ago

#498

Originally posted by: ruky786
wow i read all the parts today i loved it this is such a brilliant ff especially with one of my fav couples mayank/nupur

Yup...you are reading it here too?? You do it for AR also naa??
Thanks for compliment😳

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Rohit86

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Posted: 16 years ago

#499

Originally posted by: styleislife13
Hey Rohit...

This was awesum....Thankks dear, i am glad that you like it😃

Sionce wen have u becum a tragic story teller? since long time, when i had updated it for AR

Really emotional update...Yes it was, i agree

Wen u said lets see if he wats to cum back..i thought....why wouldn't he......lolx... Yes he has to come

Ok he;'s back...gr8...now even more problems...coz he knows thats his child...eventually he will find out that she's not married....Yup...he know his child?? Who told?? He just felt it, just wait and watch now.

Anyway, the story is going gr8...have pressed the like tab...is there a tab...for really like..?...Its not there, they should include one naa??😆😉

Ok....lolx....

Keep it up..

And plz update sooner...

The end was just fab....

looking forward to the future updates...

-Ayesha-