ok DS !! ready for mahabharat ?? 😆 😆
phewwwwwww *takes a deep breath* 😆
ok 1st before moving to the comments i HAVE to tell thiss ...
DS u r the BESTT FF writerr !!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏
i felt like i was watching them i nthe TV onli..
i wish u were the writer of MJHT...
i bet no1 in this earth would have left who didnt blush😳
it was just too gud !!
i read it at night time n realli i didnt wanted to go to sleep n just kip on reading ur FF 😳
i hope i can see them too now in my dreamsss 😍😆
cant wait for the next part !!
itna excitement toh mein eggjam finish honey k waqt bhi nahi huwaaa 😆
i m realli realli n realiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii LOVING this FF !!
its like a rainboww !!
it has has everything =D humour, the bond of frenship, bros-sis, romance, the hatred, attitudeee everythingg !!!
i m like reading it everyday 😆 ishilye jaldii update karlo DS varna parte parte i will end up memorising the wholee FF 😆
ok now comments timeee 😃
aray abhi hee itnaa lambaa hogaya hai mera post baadh mein kya hogaa 😲😆
guysss dont get it confused ok.. this is not the next part of FF 😃😆
ok now lets start *takes out the notebook*😆
the intro was PERFECT !!
i loved the way u described the characters =D as i went on reading it i became more curiouss who is gonna be whose bro or sis 😳. Aww nupur is sammy's sis 😳 they were OWESOME as frens n now i bet they will rock as bro sis too 👏 👏 like ourss 😳😆 n oieeeeeeeeeeeee hoieeeeeeee meri pyarii gunji pe sab guyss fidaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa😳 parrrrr oiee.. get lost everyone😡 she is onliiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii................................................................sammy's 😳😆😆 if not then m the 2nd option 😃😆 n haha.. the most shocking bit is uday n DIa 😲 😆 😆 lolzz imagining uday as not funny bro is kinda hardd 😆 n imagining dia as his deewani 😲 is even harderr 😲 😆 gawd i was laughing at this part 😆 i can already imagine diyaa pura saati sawitri n getting attached wid uday .. hmm not badd !! 😉😆😆 omg cant wait to read their romantic partssss 😆... n wooooooooo bhavesh is also here... kool.. that was the 2nd shocking thing for mee 😆 coz i didnt even thought he will be too in this FF. thought mayu will be gunji's bro 😳 but uday-gunji is finee too.. they r cutee as bro sis 😃
chalooo ab mujhe bhi apnii woh private msgs. members kii list mein daldoo 😉
NOW !! moving onnn 😆
i have wrote them in diff colour so that its easy for u too read 😆
PART 1
wow the starting was mindblowing !! u cant imagine how happy i m when i saw MR & MRS. 😳 😳 😳 i loved ur idea of making it all a flashbacks!!! interestingggg !! 👏 even they have got a son named saman 😲 awwwwww😳 n even honey walii bahuu ash 😳. naam toh suna suna lagta haii 🤔 haha 😆 DS !! toh saman yea hai 😉 thats y u said saman when i asked abt ur future princee 😉
aww u both r just adorableeeeeeee 😳 next sajan huh 😉.. u guys apple scene was soo cuteee 😳
my lil love birdss !! saman gave u a kiss tooo 😳 awwwwwwwww
now the flashbacks lol 😆 gunji naughty naughty.. tongue scene was hilariouss 😆 i can imagine it haha.. n uday ne toh uss ladka ka chatnii hee banadiyaa 😆 😆 its like same of pyar kiya toh darna kyaaa .. omg haha that guy ended up in the bathroom 😲😆 n woh bhi where a lady was in there 😲😆😆 tauba taubaaa 😆 😆 .. n dia in salwaar kameez 😲 another shocking things 😆
lagta hai till this FF finish shock k marey i will get a heartattack 😆
PART 2
loved uday-gunji bro sis relation from the beginning !! but m worried when sammy will fall in love wid gunji wat will uday doo he is soo over protectiveeeee//// its gonna be hardd
lolzz he called dia chipkalii 🤣 OMG DS!! this FF is soo fun to read !! i m njoying it as i go on further n furtherrr 😃 😃
n oieee sammeer mundaa 😆 he sounddd a gud boy to mee 😉 a true loverr !! u had to name him sid nahah uffffffff 😆 he is sacrificing his lovee thats soooo 😳 hha dia suneye jee n all BY GAWD !! 🤣 beyond my imaginationn 🤣 OMG.. sammy's entry was chakasshhhhhhhh 😉 for this part u deserve 20/10 👏 👏 the way u described his clothes, bike n everything was just superb !! i likesssss itt 😆 it was dhamakedaarrr 👏 imagine kartee he a cool imagine comes in mind !!
aww CHandnii is also here 😳 i thought she was another kebab mein haddi an iamginary wala character... but when i knew it was our chandnii i have no objection 😃 their part was indeeed very cute =D
lolzz benji is an alltime rocking dudeeeee 👏 👏 sammy n his part was hilariouss 😆 poor guy have no luck in girlsss 😆 i loved the way he said they r all inside the box that u r holdingg 😆
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG 🤣
gossip aunti yaha bhi agayeaaa 🤣🤣 n BimBo = RV's gf 🤣🤣
haha the line " Bimbo loves him because she couldnt impress samrat" was 🤣🤣🤣
OMG DS !! kya line haii 😉 👏
sammy was pulled towards gunji by her fragnancee awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ☺️
i bet the one who kissed him was not gunji n i was rgt 😆😆
it was gossip auntii 😲 🤣🤣 now that was not expecteddd 🤣
OMG this part was just hilarioussssssssssss 😆 😆
cant stop laughingg 😆 😆
poor sammy he was thinking that the lovely fragnance wali ladkii kissed him but 🤣🤣
PART 3
WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT !!!!
Shukla + gossip aunti = RV 😲 😲 😲 😲 OMG OMG 🤣
that means BimBo sasu ma is gossip aunti 🤣🤣 n sasur is ourr oil factory shuklaaa 🤣🤣
gawd just imagine BimBo putting oil in his sasur's head n making food alll dayy n night for her sasumaa 🤣🤣🤣
m laughing like madddd !! 😆 i wish my mom wont get up n kill mee 😆
n GA fell on his own son the one n onli RV loser 🤣🤣 haha he felt like it was his last day even omg 🤣 lolzzz GA even fell over uday too 😆 n haha those 10 guys r like her body guardss alwas helping her to get up 😆 😆 😆 😆 ahha gunji gave so many names to GA 😆 😆 atambomb n all haha 😆 😆 😆 ..
awwwwwww gunji ka shoulder mein saamy ka handddd 😍😍😍
i was so sad when SS had this same scene when sammy was taken to hospital but now m fulll satisfiedd coz my pyarii DS gave me this sweet dose 😳 😳 thankOOOOOOOOO *hugs*
hailaaaaaa gunji fell over sammy 😳 😳 😳 n then they had this eye lock omg.. i just love gunji's eyesssss ☺️ they both have got brown eyes !! awwwww thankoo to all those crowddd 😃😆 who didnt gave gunji a chance to get up !!
finally our another hero n heroine kii entryy !!! 👏👏 👏
their 1st meeting was like alwasss soooo gr8 !! 😃 😃
lolzz i would love to have that slidee too 😆 its soo fun =D
nupur was holding on to mayank n he just kept on staring at herr.. .*dead*
i can imagine this n by gawd.. m in lalaland nowwwww 😍😍
haa nupur scratched him too 😆 😆 chaloo pyarr kii nisanii ?? 😆 😆
haa ourr drama queen ne waha bhi drama suru kardiya poor mayu 😆 😆 alwas gets in trouble when he messes wid nupurr 😆 our bubblypiess alwas fightingg.. 😳
NOW NOW !! another funny scene.. aanie n chackoo 😆 😆 😆 😆
lolz their bg songs were gr8 😆... dia n chacko n aannie n uday 😆 😆 😆 n uday getting jealouss haha 😆😆😆
oiee hoiii my gunji is realli intelligenttt 😉
i m having a feeling that bhavesh ill also get pair up wid gunji 😲 pata ahi kyun i thought when sammy will humiliate her bhavesh will help n then fall in love wid her n at that time sammy will to realise his love
aww my sweet bholi bhalii gunji accept the rose n shocked mayu 😳 😳 he deserved itt !! mayu = cheatingg .. mann i can feel earthquake is comingg 😲 😆 😆 lolzz its just that coz its impossible.. the character of mayu iss soo diff then in serial but its gud we get too see another side of mayu here 👏n gawd mayu= tattoo 😲 😲 😲 *faints* 😆😆
PART 4
misunderstandinggg 😭 sammy dont hurt gunji plizz 😭
but i m loving the way the story is moving on... in evey part there is fun n then there is some turning poit !!
chaloo sajan track is not slow here like in serial 😆 lolzzz gunji ka cockroach song to RV 🤣 imagine karte hee m laughing out louddd 🤣 totalli hilariouss !!!!!
mayur too same misunderstandingg 😲 😲 ... its interestinggg !!!!!porr mayu have no idea wat is going on😆
PART 5
HAHA DS ur mom is too funny !!! 😆 😆
lolzz i knew it wasnt a serious caseee 😆 lolzz she attacked those fire men who came for her rescueee 😆 😆 😆 😆 awww ur sasur jee n DS realli r cuteeee 😉😆
Sash R the cutest jodiiiiii fro mee now !!! 😳
chotii bachoo kii love sory haiiii i justt loveeeeeeeeeeee it 😳
OMG.. sammy's badlaaa wasss soo
lolzzz benji got slaaped 😆 😆 porr guy he is rgt.. hamesha sammy ushe pitwata haii 😆
awww poor gunji 😭 😭 she got suspended 😭
n OMG nupur too slapped mayu 😲 😲 😲
woooo the the 2 hottis facing each other.. 😎
but m glad the misunderstanding was solvedddd 😳 😳 😳 nupurr gud luck !!
PART 6
ok this is the romantic part 😳 😳 i just cant stop blushing reading it 😳 😳
both mayur n sajan rockedd !!
going to manauu each other's love awwwwwwwwww 😳
mayu also feels the pain when nupur is hurt 😳 😳 mann those 2.. they will surely kill me one day !!
wow.. we alwas get to nupur in mayu's armssss 😍
m going gaga over this scene... mayu drops her homeeee 😳 lolzz bhavesh saw tht when mayur were soo close to each other 😆
OMG sammy is again fida overrrrrrrrrrr gunji when he sees her frm the opposite sideeee 😳.. i wish i was there too see gunjii ka udta huwa baal 😍 😍 😆
por sammy.. bus mein he must have felt kaun see musibaat mein fasgaya when those girls kept on hitting on him 😆 😆 ahha is chain got stuck n that girl seducing expression by gawddd 😆 😆 😆
pyarrrr mein kuch bhi maantaaa 😉 sammy got in bus which he neva eva have onli for gunjii 😍
chasmisshh!! this word mere fav. word hee bangayii haii 😳 actualli it was frm the time after i watched kal ho na ho.. 😳
OMG !!!!!! ssajan hugggggggggggggggggg 😲 *dead*
i m in 20th cloudddddddd 😍 bie bie guyssss 😍😆
another rocking line again " she let go but i felt as if i lived a whole lifetime at that moment" 😍😍
see DS ..aisee hee kaha i say u r the BEST ff writer for me !!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏
PART 7..
we r finally thereeee 😆 DS.. bear wid me sometime more ok 😆
haha gunji ka hope sammy neee titanic ki tara dubadiya 😆 he wrapped the jacket around himself 😆 😆 but m glad kii at least khana k liye toh puchaa 😆 chaloo gunji kii nazar mein he became half gentle mann 😆 n sammy dumboo still cant figure out that 😆 aww pani purii 😃 YUMMY !!!! now i remember their pani purii scene when sammy buys her an ice cream😳 😳
uff iss bus ko uss waqt hee anathaaaa 😡😆 i wish i was there ... uss driver ko toh mein 😡😆 ................................................nikalke khud hee driver bankeyy would have gone without picking him 😆 so that they could be together for sometime moreeee 😳 i bet woh bhi sheena ka koi bhai hogaaa 😡😆
haha back to mayur.. bhavu is just too funny 😆 his pani taley dialogue alwas makes me laugh 😆
he is damm gud !! mann now in coll.. does this deodhar even know the meaning of normal ?? 😕😆 mann he looks like a robot to mee. he neva smiles n yaha bhi he is ordering mayu 😕 but well very gud that he did soo 😃😆 yayyy now he will meet nupur even he doesnt wants too =D
haa gunji called sammy sadu 😆 😆 😆 omg he just went to her room n she was there wid her sleeveless top 😲 😲 mann chasmish ko waise dekhkarr he surely fell frm his trackk 😉😆 aww sleeping beauty woh toh haii 😳 now kanta bai part 🤣🤣🤣 gawd her dialogue is superb !! 🤣🤣
i njoy reading these type of bai dialoguess 🤣 🤣aww mayu made nupur a chai but woh bhi kitniiii khattti which was equal to jeher according to bai 😆 😆 haha she thought he was a murderer 🤣 but he tried it onli for nupur awwwwwwwwwwwwww 😳 😳 omg i wonder wat was in the letterrr 😲 kanta bai attacked mayu 🤣🤣
now again back to sajan 😆 !!
gunji in white i can imagine wat happen to sammy when he saw herrr 😍
uski heart rate roadrunner kii tara fast hogaya hogaaaa 😍
OMG.. that songg.. perfectly matches their sceneee 😃 😃 i can imagine this too n i wish we had sth like this in real show too
lolzz gunji did sammy kii khichaii 😆 new thingg 😆
sammy told her to sing so that he can do tit for tat but poor guy ended up falling for her voiceee 😳 😳
abt precap= ok i was worried bhavesh would have fallen in love wid gunji but now i dont think soo 😊
i wonder who that girl isss 😉 update sooooooooooooooooon ok.. !!
m loving this FF 😳
oo by the way i loved the part when mayur n sajan both were having romancee not in flashbacksss 😳 😳
i fgt which part was it so m comenting it here 😆 gawddd sajan kissssssssssss *dead* lagta hai i wont be able to concentrate in my studiess now.. sajan kii iss part willl kip on sataying meee 😳 😳 😆 mayu coffe part..oieeee hot hot !!!!! 😃 😃 😃 just too gud !! mayur k kids k saath when u were palying saman got jealouss 😉 awwwwwwww😳.. n u bot hugged too. .choo cutee =D
Edited by yulZ - 16 years ago
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