The story goes on II - FF *Last Part* Pg 60

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Disha

@disha141094

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#181

such a sweet update....

luved d mayur mom trio...

d sam n banji convo was gud....heheh ....but hoping 4 more sajan scnes 2 move their luv story ahead... n dia...hmm dunno wat she was actually upto...so will hav 2 w8 4 ur nxt update 2 noe if shez actually gnna do sumthn evil aftr dis

hayye....d mayur scne was so cutee....luved it....i wnt mayur 2 b d same lyk dis in d show too....!! nups shud call him by her teddy's name...hehehe

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#182

lovely part dear
woow mayank is surely getting naughty day by day.
glad everything work out for them and also dia is repenting her mistakes.
do continue dear.
bye sumi

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#183

Debby I was going to comment on the Mummy moment with MayUr, and the playfulness and ease of their relationship, and the shift in the DiaSamrat angle, and the childishness and comfort level of BenjiSammy's friendship, but the intensity of the last MayUr bit, the way you've expressed their feelings for one another, the importance they hold in each other's lives just blows away anything I might have said. It made me speechless. And I loved every minute of not knowing what to say.

Love,
Radz

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debby

@debby

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#184

@Disha: Yeah, as I said, the Lonavala trip is mainly an SG track and I promise lots of surprises. Dia - ok keep guessing..😉 Glad u liked the MN part.. haha lets christen her teddy then. Suggestions? Thanks so much Disha!

@Sumi: Hehe.. yeah, love changes people for the better. Thanks a lot!

@Radz: Hey! That was such a lovely comment and you said a lot even by not saying much... thank you, thank you! 🤗

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Ayesha

@ayeshaD

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#185

Okie...i need a glass...no no a JUG of water first...*sighing* debsie, you are such a talented woman! I literally have no words right now...this was a phenomenal update! Alright, i needta catch my breath and probably give this another read...i'll get back to you.

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legends

@legends

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#186

TUSSI GREAT HO YAAR
"BY GOD"

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Rukhsar Ahmed

@ruky786

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#187

awww they have their first kiss aww i loved the update thank u so much for the update i love mayank and nupur scenes

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debby

@debby

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#188

@ayesha: Ok I have been waiting all evening to hear from you so be back after that never ending jug of water.. jk.. thanks so much Ayesha. You are a sweetheart!

@legends, ruky: I'm really happy you liked it.. thank you!