AR FF: Sacha pyaar

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Reshma

@KaSu_Foreva

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

plz yaar write soon

i am waiting

Love reshma

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Suhani Kapur

@rahulmuskaan

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: freezinme
heyy dats gr8 yaar
seems like m seein saathiya again..lol
wud luv to read more.
do update soon n plz pm me if u can
luvv
tiya

yes finalli some one got my point!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lolzz.. ya i wanted the start and sum of it after that to be like saathiya hehe😃

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anjie

@dmgaddict

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

hey

loved the first part....its like the movie saathiya and cant wait to read more!!!

*gasp* ridhima just straight uup told everyone she is married!!! didnt expect that

please jaldi se likho or utni he jaldi se post karo

plz plz plz plz plz

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shonaveer

@shonaveer

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

please please please...

continue soon....

waiting for the next part to come...

madly in love with ur ff....

continue soon...

please do pm me if possible....

luv

deepu :)

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komal793

@komal793

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

heyyy..

i love ur ff....its very intresting...👏

will be waiting for ur next part......

plz do continue soon........

plz pm me if possible....

Love,

Komal....

Edited by komal793 - 16 years ago

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Suhani Kapur

@rahulmuskaan

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

First of all thanx sooo much 4 all ur guys support..now bak 2 da story :) Part 2: R:ji, aap ko main abhi bataa dethi hoon ki meri shaadi ho chuki hai Sh: kya? kab? kaise? Kahan? KISSE? R: app aise baat kar rahen hai jaise aap ko kuch pata naa ho SM: Hum jaa rahe hain! *they leave*

Sh: nahin pata mujhe...wait....ARMAAN!

R: ji, aur main apne faisle se bohot kush hoon!

Sh: agar tum ne apna faisla kaar diya...to maine bhi apne faisla kar diya..tum mera time barbaad kyun kar rahi hoo, tum apne armaan ke saath rehlo, ab mere ghar mein tumhare liye koi jhage nahin hai!

R: teek hai

* armaan enters*

A: chalo basket

*armaans house*

A: yeh tumhare naya ghar....ander chale

R: chalo

*they go inside*

R: haaawwww(just like shilpa used 2 say lol) yeh ghar to bilkul trash ke dibe jaise lagta hai, lagta hai ab mujhe hi sab saaf karna padega.

*two guys come in..lets name them aditya (ad) and varum (v)*

Ad: hey armaan..hum dono as usual late aane vale hai...oolala, yeh kaun hai...nayin girlfriend??

V: shes hot yaar

A: shes my wife also

AD and V: KYA WIFE!!!! armaan mallik ne shaasi karli...r u sure??

A: yes im sure, and oh ridz, yeh hai aditya aur varun...mere roomates.

R: ROOMATES!!!!! KYA!!!

A: haan, i have a feeling ki thodi miscommunication hui hai sorry for not letting u guys know about each other

Thats that 4 today..i will upload soon hopefully..just keep supporting me like this.

What will happen next? will they be able to bear each other (ridz and Ad and V?

LOL I luvv u guys 😃😆

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Tangled

@iTangled_25

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

hey nice part ...Bu i wish it was longer...this is rilly short....

i lik ur FF ...

n one suggestion...wen u post a new part ....then on page 1 u edit ur 1st post and then against ur title u write which part is updated on which page ....

for eg ...

AR FF : Sacha pyaar part 2 page 3

this helps ur silent readers to know u have updated ur FF ....

Love Steffi

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Tiya

@freezinme

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

heyy nice part yaar..
omg..!! armaan had room mates n dey also called ridzi hot in front of armaan..n armaan didnt react at all..lol..
so finally dey r living together.. dnt noe hw wil dey manage to.. :P
great one.. but it ws more descriptive and longer..
thanks for the pm.
luv ya
tiya