KaSh Mini FF ~*Mesmerised*~

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Guys I had this dream long time ago and decide to finish off the story first and then post it but decided coz I havent updated Love, Lust Or Both I will post this and its a treat for you guys aswell.
I havent got a name for it yet but after reading this please giive me some suggestions and then we will have a vote for what the name shud be.
Mainly half of it is exactly from my dream coz my dream stopped halfway so I made up the rest.
Here it goes and enjoy. Hope you like it 😃
Credit for the name fo the ff goes to Swansea who helpred me.
Love you


She was in a black cab looking out seeing it was actually very dark with only the street lights providing them with light and they were next to a really dirty and ugly place.
Meaning by "they" it was her, the cab driver and a woman next to her who had the collars of her coat pulled up, hiding her face. She looked down to see the label stuck on her coat saying 'New Girl' After about a minute later someone entered the cab sitting next to the woman and the cab driver drove off. All 3 of them were sitting at the back with the 'New Girl' sitting on the left side of the back looking out of the window, the woman and then the man. Finally they arrived at their destination and the man came out first and opened the door on the side and let the 'New Girl' out of the cab while the other woman had already come out and had headed to the place that was in front of them. The 'New Girl' looked at the building in front of her and saw that the outside looked horrible with no name with lights indicating what the name of the place was called and there was broken pieces of wood outside.

The guy then touched her arm to say for her to follow him and when he walked on, she tried to take his touch off her and shivered. She then followed the guy and entered the place it was actually a good looking place. The carpet was all red and was very clean. On her left there was an orange room where she saw girls wearing mini skirts and short tops. She then looked forward and saw a desk with a couple of people in front waiting to talk to the manager. The guy who took her here was also there talking to the manager. She then looked to her right and saw the side of the stairs which she guessed must lead to rooms. Then the man came to her and told her to come to the desk.

M: What's your first name madam?
NG: Ridhima
M:Your second name?
R: Gupta
M:And your Age?
R:25
M:Ok Madam your client will be here in a hour so you can wait in the waiting room or look about.
R:OK thank you very much

The Manager had handed her a piece of paper while telling her what room she's in and the name of her client, but she didn't decide to open it yet, only when she saw her client.
When Ridhima looked at her side she saw the man was not there anymore but was with another girl talking to her.
The girl was blonde, very fair and was wearing a gold dress looking stunning.
The girl then headed for the stairs and while walking smiled at Ridhima, with Ridhima smiling back.
Ridhima knew this girl was friendly as all friendly people always smiled even to strangers.
Ridhima sat down on a brown soft two seated sofa with a water cooler next to the sofa. She got up and put water into a plastic cup and sat back down, drinking her water while waiting for this hour to go past.

1 hour pasted quickly as Ridhima was walking about looking around to see how great the place looked.
A man wearing a white shirt with a black vest onto and black trousers with sensible black shoes walked over to her and started talking to her. He looked like a very friendly funny person. He was holding a tray with drinks so he must of been a waiter.

Man: You have been called to the room your are to be in.
R: Thanks by the way what's your name
M: Atul Joshi I'm a waiter here.
R: Well Hi and my name is Ridhima. You look like a decent guy so how comes you are working here.
Atul laughed a bit
At: Well I need some money to buy a ring for my girlfriend because I wanna propose to her.
Her name is Anjali and we've been going out for a year and I really love her and I know she wants me to propose to her so i'm going to surprise her.
R:Awww how sweet well Good Luck and I know she will be very happy. She's a very lucky girl to get a great guy as her soon-to-be husband
Atul blushed at the thought of being Anjali's husband
At: Well I've got to go work and Welcome to Luxury
R: Oh so that's the name of this place. I've been trying to find out because outside there's no light to see the name of this place.
At: Well you can see how cheap the outside is but the inside looks expensive.
R: I know well I'm going to "MY" room and I should let you get back to your work I don't want you to miss out on anything because I really want you to get the money for that ring and Congratulations.
At: Thanks and Bye hope I see you again.
R: Same to you.

And with that Atul went back to work and Ridhima walked straight and then turned right to see the stairs with red carpet leading to the rooms. She walked up the stairs slowly and when she ended up at the top of the stairs she saw the same girl who was talking to the man. Ridhima decided to say Hi as she knew she was gonna be here alot she might aswell make friends starting from now.


x...Aneesa...x
Edited by KaShCrazyAneesa - 16 years ago

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Angel-Jot thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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WOw.
Really gud,\
Luv Atul....so cute!!
Plz cont soon.
Harji
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice start. i really wonder what this place is that ridz is at! and shes waiting for a client? really curious to know, please continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy,
great goin aneesa.........lovly script......plzz do continue soon.....i soooo wanna read more of it!.......lol........i can't wait fr d next part .......wonderin wats gonna happen next!!!!!!!!!!!😍....
luv,
dolly
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Lovely intro...everything in suspense so far......would love to read further....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey l
looved the intro...pls continue soon add me to ur pm list..nd pls update..love lust or both..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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WOW you dreamt of AR. lolz It sounds sooo interesting, please update. btw is Ridz a whore?? im confused coz shes waiting for a client and in the room, she told atul he looks like a good guy and why is he working at such a cheap place. me soooo confused😕
otherwise loved it, 👏👏👏could you plz pm me when you update! im sooo damn curious to know whats next!
love
Nadz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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this is gr8
plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy Aneesa,
nice update.
post next part soon.
😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#10
OMG i didn't even see this
ohhhh i loved it dids
tooo good
swancy

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