|DMG FF|Scared of DarknessP4pg18 RIDRAHUL Marriage - Page 9

Originally posted by: everlastingword

hey,

wow. i just caught up with the story and i have to tell you, its amazing. the way you present the thoughts and circumstances gives it an eeerie feel but makes it all the more gripping. When i read a story, i usually try to predict what comes next, but this time i am at a complete loss. The title aong with the first two parts are very very intriguing. can't wait to read more!

mia

Originally posted by: Robin_M

this is amazing girl! wow im have no words to describe right now! your such a wonderful writer and story teller! im so gripped by your ff!
theres a very dark and mysterious feel to story, its so different, i love it!
my curiosity is building and i cant wait for the next part! i know your not going to reveal all the secrets so soon, thats the basis here, but im still looking forward to more!
my heart goes out to ridz, she really is a puppet, and she wheres the mask with ease. i hate rahul, with a passion!
so armaan is married to anjali and they have a kid! wow
the mystery behind ridz, armaan, rahul, her mom and dad, is all very captivating! rocking stuff girl, keep it up :D
continue soon!

Originally posted by: arvanu

hey dolly,

it was amazingly written....but i'm highly confused regarding Riddhima's past and her marriage with Rahul......and Armaan-Anjali married?????this makes me really curious to know more......but i am seriously confused abt it.........do continue soon and thanks alot for the PM!!!!!!!!

-surbhi😊

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

hey dolly
gr8 part
so armaan n angie r married :(😡😆😆
that was bad
but um confused why??
is this ridz's past????yes ofcourse...i did write it before starting the part..😊
i mean shes at her father's place naa
but u show her talking to rahul??? she is remebering her past
ridz angie n armaan r college frnds
n i guess ridz likes or maybe loves armaan rite???? u'll have to wait for that
too many ?s yaar
u better update soon😉😆
😆

Originally posted by: spln

wow!...sorry im trying hard not to be tongue tied here at all, but i guess im close to it, very close perhaps...the part in some ways made me think of my own FF unleashing, but only in some basic elements...theres a definite sinister eerie element inadition to the emotions i handled in mine, and of course a brutal new concept of ridhimas married life issues here...but your writing is spectacular....i was staring at the screen and much as i wanted the part to not end so soon at all i guess i should be glad for i didnt blink at all n i wonder how long i could have managed that in genral if it was longer...

fab part hun!!! i wish you update soon!!

nj

Originally posted by: ttimpy

its a terrific concept dolly.................where do u get ur ideas man...........when i reda the first part......i was like............eeeccchhh what a man...................the second part was so different..........and i can never ever imagine a scenario where armaaanis the non descript types................but wonders will never cease............

btw do u have timeframe for updation????????????....pl. do continue soon and add me to ur pm list,pl!!!!!!!!!!

tc

Originally posted by: KaShcrazy

dat was a major updte

luved it wooow very intense

really nice wrk luv hw u write

updte sooon

nthx 4 da pm

nizma x