RM FF:- SOME1 SOMEWHERE IS MADE 4 Uupdated9june - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
#51
hey apoorva,
amazing update,dear...i loved Muski and Ridz conversation......cant wait till Rahul finds her and realises her importance in his life.......do continue soon and thanks for the PM!!!!
-surbhi😊
Edited by arvanu - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52

owow...nice part ...waiting for the next part to know kon kiski class lete hai!!!thnx for the PM dear

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Posted: 16 years ago
#53
excellent part!
\hayye muski is so sad...hope rahul meets her in amritsar..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54

1stly i am very sry 4 my late reply..as i was ill and under doc'z observation....

So Cudnt cum ol on FF.. Bt now i am fit and fyn and back... Okies now lemme comment on ur ff..
Yaar..soo sweet..dat muski feelins r cumin out.,..bt shez nt dat much darin to tell..
Okkk...Oh!! rahul inderstands dat his dad luved him soo much..
Wow!!! muski fallin for Rahul again and again..dats choo chweet,,!!!
Yaar..dat was a such an sweet part..!!!
I really lyked it
Plz do cont. it soon
and dnt 4get to Pm me whneva u update ur next part..
Luv
$reejoyee
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55
thanks for the pm.. finally an rm fanfic.. its a goood one.. i know how muskaaan feels.. cuz of what ridz told her(about her being fat)// she's thinkin guys just have to be that way??lol well continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56

great part!

please do continue soon.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#57

PArt 6:

Muskaan is back in Amritsar at her place....she is completely shatered....first her marks then Rahul..........


Muskii alone sitting in her room


Kyun Rahul......Kyun tune mera dil toda?? Sahi kehte hai sab yeh pyaar vyaar kuch nahi hota...Its all fake....movies me aur bks me hi hota hai... Maine kyun tumse pyaar kiya?? Log kehte hai ki insaan apna pehla pyaar kabhi anhi bhulta...toh kya main tujhe kabhi nahi bhul paungi???
NAHI........ main tujhe bhula dungi... maine terese pyaar karke galati ki... apna sapna bhi pura nahi kar payi...82% ke saath kaun Mumbai UNiversity me admission dega??? Tera mere life me koi imp nahi hai.. I HATE U RAHU.... I HATE U....
Shit...papaji kya karu?? Why the hell I love him??

She hugs her teddy near & cried a lot......

Zindagi me koi kabhi aaye na rabba .....
aaye jo koi toh phir jaye na rabba...
dene ho agar mujhe badme ansu....
toh pehle koi hasaye na rabaa.........


Muskii is unhappy as she will not be able do her MBBS in Mumbai university...bt her family was happy as now she could stay with them...

Ridz was getting admission in Mumbai...bt she thought if she also goes to Mumbai Muskaan will be all alone & her parents are not aware of anething so she decides to take admission in Amritsar university along with MUskaan...

Muskii is sitting in her room when-

Ri- Hey Muskaan, kya kar rahi hai??

M- Nahi..kuch khaas nahi..tu bata... packing ho gayi?? Kab jaa rahi hai Mumbai??

Ri- Kaun jaa raha hai?? Mujhe toh admission mili hi nahi wahan... hum dono yahi Amritsar University me jayenge..saath jayenge.. 5 saal bahut maza karenge aur thodi padhai bhi kar lenge...(laughs)

M(tears)- Jhut bol rahi hai na?? Tu ne mere wajahse Amritsar me admission li na?? OO Ridz tu bahut achi hai...Tu meri sach dost hai wrna kuch log toh...

Ri- Muskaan......... tu kya purani baatein lekar baith gayi??? Dekh jo yaadein hume takleef dete hai unko bhul jaana hi sahi hoga....

Muskaan's mom- Ridhima putaar....jara niche toh aana...

Ri- Abhi aai aunty...(turns to Muskii) Muskaan main abhi aati hu..tu jara aaram kar le...dekh kitni thaki hui lag rahi hai... raat ko theekse soyi nahi na...main abhi aai...

Ridz is going down the stairs when she sees Rahul coming up...

Ri(to herself)- Yeh Rahul yahan kya kar raha hai?? Meri dost ko itni takleef de kar maan nahi bhara iska ki yahan bhi usko pareshaan karne chala aaya... nahi Rahul tune jo kia uske baad main tujhe Muskaan ko milne nahi de sakti... bechari pehle hi kafi hurt hui hai aur tu phir apni meethi baatein karke usko dukh pahuchayega.. nahi Rahul i am sorry main tujhe Muskaan ko aur hurt karne nahi dungi...tu muskaan ko nahi mil sakta....NO...
Rahul sees Ridz...

R- Aree Ridz...tu aur Muskii bina bataye kaise chale aaye?? Main kitna pareshaan ho gaya tha...Muskii kahan hai?? Main bahut datnewala hu usko...

Ri- Muskaan soo rahi hai.... Aur hum tumhe bata kar hi jaanewale the bt tum busy the dance karne me...aur humari train bhi...

R- Aree Ridz it okay...itna explaination dene ki jarurat nahi hai... bt Muskii abhi din me kyun soo rahi ahi?? Tabiyeet toh theek hai na?? Mian mil kar aata hu...

Ri- NAHI....... I meanwoh thak gayi hai... tum jaoge toh jaag jayegi..raat ko theek se sooyi nahi tum kal aao na..phir khib baatein karna...

R- Oye..shit...mujhe aaj raat hi Mumbai jaana tha.. wahan admission process khatam karni thi aur hostel aur baaki sab bhi... Main Muskii se mile bina kaise jaa sakta hu?? Main ek baar usko dekheke jaata hu..plzz Ridzz main darwaze se dekh kar chala jaunga...

Ri(surprised)- RAHUL???

Ridz was nt expecting that Rahul would be so caring 4 Muskaan....
Rahul went to her room & saw she was sleeping having her favourite teddy bear in her arms...he looked at her & smiled...
R- Muskii...i am sorry..tujhse bina mile jaa raha hu...bt i know u will understand...bye...apna kyaal rakhna...i will miss u...bye...

Ri- All the best...mere aur Muskaan ki taraf se...

R- Thanks Ridz...bye main chalta hu...take care of Muskii...bye....


Next day Rahul is in Mumbai& Muskii in Amritsardoing the same admission procedure...they both got thier admissions done in their respective colleges.....

Muskii is angry on Rahul that he didnt even come to meet her b4 he left & concluded that Rahul didnt even consider her a friend now...she was just a person who made notes 4 him so that he could pass....he just used her & now when he got admission in a reputed college he left her...not even formal byes & all...that was her conclusion....she was very angry & more hurt......

Ridz felt guilty that she lied to her friend bt she knew it was 4 her own good...Muskaan will now study in full khunaas to Rahul & will able to achieve her goals...

Rahul is now very focussed abt his MBBS & his life.... he tried to call on Muskii bt her lanline number had changed....Rahul wasnt aware of the new number & he didnt knew Ridz number to ask her... due to this he lost all touch with his once best friend Muskii.......

Days pass...months pass....& 5 years fly away.........

hope u like it...do comment.............
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Posted: 16 years ago
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first one to comment!!
awesome part apoorva dear!!!
ooo....muski ne rahul ko galat samjha...hayye rahul was so caring....but abhi kya hoga unke love story ka....???oh no....
wat will happen wen they meet again???
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey apoorva,
i really like the pace of the story,dear.....lovely update......the Ridz-Muski talks were soo sweet.....she came to Amristar College just to be with her friend...awwww.......and Rahul is soo caring.....and Muski misunderstood him......haww....ab aage kya hoga......do continue soon......cant wait till they meet again......thanks alot for the PM!!!!!
-surbhi😊
Edited by arvanu - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60
wow awesome part cont soon and thanks 4 the pm

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