New FF*~Love mera hit hit~*-17/02/09 AR FF

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Love mera hit hit

armaan malik : he is cute boy and hadsome sari ladkiye is pe marti hai, he is very pride of it, love doesn't exist for him. He is also studiying in the same college as neev, ridzi and Jiya.

ridhima Khanna : She is very cute and bubbly? She is a student. She loves her siblings a lot.
jiya Khanna : she's preety and beautiful and is also a student. She also loves her bro and sis a lot.


angad Khanna : he is hadsome boy, he had done his studies into business. He is the owner of one of the famous fashion (modelling) companies. He know Kirpa through his family, as she is his father's friends daughter. He fall in love with her at first sight, when he met her at a party.He called her sister angels.



neev shergill : he is hadsome and cute, girls are after him...., he is a student. Although he is younger then kripa, he is so protective, he behave like her big brother, they always called each other by name, as they have a year difference.


kripa shergill : neev sister, she is neev's big sister and is a model. Their parents into business, but she isn't interested at all, so all the time she has argument with her father. Neev always support her.

INTRODUCTION

INTRO

We entered in a big house, the camera went up by stairs, turned to right and entered in the first room. There is a huge room, wall covered by girls picture, the guys seemed a die hard fan of deepika padukone. There is guy laying on the bed, we can only see his back. His alarm went on, he irratetly off it and sat on his bed lazily and then lay back.

Someone enteres her room and tried to wake him up, as usual every tactic went in vain so she went near his bedside took bottle of water, made her way toward him and pour the water on him.

The guy jumps from the bed and is red in anger.

guy:ahahah!! kripa aaj tu to gayi

He ran behind her, but on time she exited his room and close the door on his face. Kripa talk to him from outside the door.

Kripa:get ready neev u have to go to uni

Neev:oh yes, I completely forgot, thnx kripa for made me remember

Kripa:ur welcome, come soon

(neev went to his bathroom)
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Khanna mansion


We see they r sitting two girls who are unindentical twins, they are 21 years. They r having there breakfast. After few minutes a boy came down.

Boy:good morning angels

girls:good morning angad bhai

(he hugged them)

Angad:hey Angels where are mom dad?

girl 1:Angad bhai, mom dad office gaye hain

angad:ok

(he came and sat down)

Girl:I am so happy Jiya,

jiya:me too Ridhima, we r going to start our uni, and it's very first day there, I hope they won't do ragging as we r freshers.

Angad:don't very angels, when u two are together, u don't have to be nervous or afraid.

(he glaced at his wrist watch)

Angad(shocked):oh my god, It's so late, I gotta go angels, I have shooting

angels:all the best bro

angad:u too angels, after all it's ur first day

(he gave them the angels a hug)

..................................................................

(There is a match going on a basket ball court, there is a tough match going on between two guy. He dribbled and there he shot it, goal)

(all the girls ran to him)

girls:hey ammi u r the best

ammi:thnx girls, I have to go now, this is first day of uni

(he said bye to girls and went to his house. Where he lives alone, his father died two years ago in car accident. He never believed in love he had seen lots of people getting cheated in love in fact her mother too left his father when he was 8 years old, he had seen his father crying. He hates girl so he only use them)

Hey folks, pls leave ur comments, they meant a lot to me.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#2
wow cool FF
love it
but i thought that all the FF's are moved to the FF section
so i think u migth wanna start it there instead of here
sandy
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very interesting lkin4 wrd to readin more
but i think ur gona need to move this
to da ff section
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: angeldmg16

Woooooooooo!!

Nice one .......................



Thanks a lot for the compliments.
Keep reading and leaving ur comments
Neevfan
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sandybabes

wow cool FF

love it
but i thought that all the FF's are moved to the FF section
so i think u migth wanna start it there instead of here
sandy

Sandy,
Thanks a lot for the compliments.
Actually, I am in this section so didn't knew it but I started it in FF section too.
Keep reading and leaving ur comments
Neevfan
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet-niz

very interesting lkin4 wrd to readin more

but i think ur gona need to move this
to da ff section

Thanks a lot for the compliments.
Actally I am new in fanfiction thing so i didn't knew, I also started it in FF section too.
Keep reading and leaving ur comments.
Neevfan
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Posted: 16 years ago
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woah🤗 sound interesting😊😊 really a nice one⭐️ superb😍 plz continue it soon😛 & pm me😉 when u update it😳 if u don't have any problem😳

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Yeh dil hi na hota toh koi baat naa hoti."



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