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netu19

@netu19

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Posted: 16 years ago

#61

awesome..... magnificent.....fantastic .... 👏
such a detail description of situations which we actually wanted........
both part 2& 3 were brilliant, beautiful and toooooooooo good! your writting always blows me away!
in part 2.. raj already on the way to transformation having adrak wali chai...n loved R & k nok jhonk....
ha n that Birayani of Ranjna added flavor 😉
not to forgot "with you inputs " Raj camp on verge of combat😆😆

n the latest one....enjoyed it....the Krantikaris here are so real n not pack of jokers....but i found it lil short....was it 😲or i was so engrossed that i dint realize..

we love your writings n enjoying MRD your way...its also our way...so you plz keep writing for us! once again, thank you for posting this!!!!!!!!!😳

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@chimuli

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Posted: 16 years ago

#62

wowww i enjoyed update thanks

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Sri_Nidhi

@Sri_Nidhi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#63

It was good one.Just eagerly waitung for Amritsar.Emotional kranti ..

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Bugger

@Bugger

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Posted: 16 years ago

#64

it was amazing skepti as usual ....very intresting ..........

u really took time to post this one ....plz do post the enxt part soon

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Arwen11

@Arwen11

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Posted: 16 years ago

#65

another amazing piece form u skepti 👏 simply superb😊

eagerly waiting for the next part

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Gagori Chatterjee

@jyoti06

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Posted: 16 years ago

#66

Skepti first of all I loved your new green font colour😳...the colour was suiting this whole flow of journey from Lahore to Amritsar😛..

While reading it I went into a complete flashback mode😳...those were the golden times of MRD😳...I rememeber how that tanga was coming behind Raj's car and how Kranti cleverly used Raj to escape quietly from the checkpost😉😛..

But the way u narrated it sounds even better👏👏...I liked the whole Q&A round going between Raj and Kranti where Kranti kept on giving different excuses for her trip and Raj knew that something is definitely fishy😉...the fact that he was more bothered about Kranti's journey rather than his own journey itself proves that Raj is slowly giving some extra importance to Kranti..So Kewal's suspicion is not wrong here😉😆😆...

In the beginning when Raj locked his room and was changing his clothes,for a moment I thought he will remove his shirt also along with the tie😉😆..but never mind..I will wait for that moment😆😳..

I m now supexcited about your next part..would love to see your take on how Kranti visits her Amritsar house😳...

Skepti as usual u r going with your version in a brilliant manner👏...we should parcel this entire script to those baffoons right now😡😃

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Dawn

@Dawn Idol

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#67

That my dear Skep .......... is what story telling is all about .............

My eyes were glued to the monitor and i was scrolling & scrolling .......

Mentally .... I was like .... 😍 ............ hands under my chin and listening to a fantastic story teller ....... 👍🏼

Your narration is simply mesmerrising !!!!!

Keep it coming, Skep ..........

I'm looking forward to the next part .......

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Bugger
it was amazing skepti as usual ....very intresting ..........
u really took time to post this one ....plz do post the enxt part soon

Actually I updated in three days. I just let the weekend pass because I thought most forum members needed to take a break ...........

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Arwen...
another amazing piece form u skepti 👏 simply superb😊

eagerly waiting for the next part

Well sweetie, I'm trying to update on a daily basis at night. Except for the weekend. 😆

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: jyoti06
Skepti first of all I loved your new green font colour😳...the colour was suiting this whole flow of journey from Lahore to Amritsar😛..

While reading it I went into a complete flashback mode😳...those were the golden times of MRD😳...I rememeber how that tanga was coming behind Raj's car and how Kranti cleverly used Raj to escape quietly from the checkpost😉😛..

But the way u narrated it sounds even better👏👏...I liked the whole Q&A round going between Raj and Kranti where Kranti kept on giving different excuses for her trip and Raj knew that something is definitely fishy😉...the fact that he was more bothered about Kranti's journey rather than his own journey itself proves that Raj is slowly giving some extra importance to Kranti..So Kewal's suspicion is not wrong here😉😆😆...

In the beginning when Raj locked his room and was changing his clothes,for a moment I thought he will remove his shirt also along with the tie😉😆..but never mind..I will wait for that moment😆😳..

I m now supexcited about your next part..would love to see your take on how Kranti visits her Amritsar house😳...

Skepti as usual u r going with your version in a brilliant manner👏...we should parcel this entire script to those baffoons right now😡😃

I am glad you are liking the flow of the story. Its basically to keep the die-hard fans like you happy. We were all so upset when they declared that MRD was to be phased off.

But seeing the way they are carrying on, the sooner the better. The Rat has become a doormouse and has become expressionless. From the arrogant barrister, they have made him into a dithering fool. And my kudi........the less said the better. 🤢 The cat seems to have got her tongue. She is looking so awkward. First throes of love? Hah ! My foot. 😡

Thats why I escape into my very own MRD.

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