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Originally posted by: tetuty66

skeptical another master piece gr8 as usual..........👏

Originally posted by: Dawn Idol

Awesome Skep .........

I second Arwen ... the highlight for me today ........

"What tore at his being was the sight of that one helpless tear that found its way down her cheek. He held her face and looked at it. He brought it close to his chest as if trying to alleviate the pain. But there was no time to lose."

The whole operation was so believable ..... What a realistic picture you paint .........

And Sohan Tauji connecting with Raj ??? Brilliant .... as if the older man can sense that Raj wouldn't let Kranti come to any harm !!!!

And Raj ???? ....... What else ...........

"But Raj remained deadpan and unconcerned"

Superb ..................👏

Originally posted by: skeptical

Pen and Tetu,

Hope you didn't starve and faint. I gave you yr daily requirement. Am glad you found yr meal tasty. And BTW too much of pecking at food gives indigestion. 😉

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Mindblowing...Fabulous...Outstanding Skepti👏👏👏....Read the last two parts...and wow I agree with Dawn..each and every sentence of yours sounds so realistic...I could just visualize each and every scenario that u painted once Sohan Tauji gets caught and the way Raj tries to hide Kranti from the policemen👏👏👏... thanks joey

Why din't we see all this when the actual gunfight happened in the show ?😡...I guess u should hv started writing the story from that time onwards😉😳... It would have been a gr8er heartbreak for us when the serial wud have to wind up

In your story Raj looks so much human ..even he has a mind of his own...even he is hving his own POVs which are very strong👏...unlike in the serial where initially Raj was projected like a dead pan minus any emotions.. he is/was such a creep in the serial

Skepti why don't u send these scripts of yours to a good PH Arre who will bother? They want want all saas bahu sagas and I am useless at that or why don't u start writing a book similar to the lines of this short story...I can assure u that this book will become the Bestseller in one week itself😃...Skepti please take it seriously...u got to start writing books soon...the whole world should come to know about your talent...👏👏👏

Originally posted by: skeptical

Thanks Arwen and Sprite,

Am glad that you both kinda like it. Walter, you wanted subtleties and I wanted compassion. Dewy wanted a forceful bold Raj (all the dreamers included), Joey wanted passion 😳 ..........hahahaha !!!!!!! Hopefully I can keep everyone happy. 😉 😆

great update skep... 👏👏👏

loved everything as usual, but in every update there are some things I love more than other…n this time its same for all of us....it had tingling effect on all of us..
"What tore at his being was the sight of that one helpless tear that found its way down her cheek. He held her face and looked at it. He brought it close to his chest as if trying to alleviate the pain. But there was no time to lose. "
that was so passionate.... so apt.... 👍🏼

n so far Raj has started showing the required traits for being our Kudi's man... I m sure story proceeds further, we ll get more evidences of his worthiness…emmm actually I think we have already got enough😳😳….better kudi start getting that too😍😍…

Thanks skep....👏 I had stoped praising you... Even my hands are getting pained after giving such a big clap to you dear... Bcos, by default you are Great... Each and every line in you story gives a feeling that, I myself is in the story..... And I am watching it live..... Once again Thanks skep.... the best part liked is..