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Posted: 16 years ago

i love this fanfic!!

its the first fanfic that i have read on i-f and its truly amazing
all the parts are really cute and well written!

please PM me if you can when you write the next part of this fanfic!..cant wait!

-Firdaus
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Posted: 16 years ago
amazing part! a little short...but amazing nonetheless! :D
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Posted: 16 years ago
thanks for all the comments guys. glad yu liked the part!! the next part has been written and will be posted soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Guys,
thanks for the awesome comments.
I am on the forum after a very long time.
And i am writing after even a longer time...
So please ignore any mistakes... lol
Archi
Edited by -Archi- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 14

"Sister," Nikki said. "Meri files kahan hai?"

It was a day after the surgery and Armaan and Rahul decided to say sorry to Nikki. They decided to maintain their frienship as well as keeping an eye.

"Dr. Modi ke paas hai," the nurse answered.

"Dr. Modi?"

"Ji."

Why the hell dows Abhi have my files, Nikki thought as she walked to his cabin. She knocked and heard him say 'come in' before walking in.

Abhi was busy with his laptop. "Close the door please," he said, without looking up.

Nikki did as she was told and stood quietly infront of him. He finally looked up and smiled.

"Meri yaad aagayi?" he said, standing up from his chair.

"Meri files kahan hai?" she asked, ignoring his comment.

"How sad," Abhi replied. "There used to be a time when you used to come for me and now?"

"Abhi natak chod do," she warned. "I am getting late."

"Fine," he said, picking up the files. "Yeh lo,"

Nikki extended her hand, but Abhi simply stood still, staring at her.

"What?" she asked.

"Well come and get it," he said, with a smile.

Nikki sighed. "I swear Abhi," she muttered, walking forward. "Day by day you are getting so lazy."

And then the real trouble started. Whenever she attempted to grab the files in his hand, Abhi would put it higher and higher.

"Not funny Abhi," she said. "Give me the files!"

"When did I say no?" he replied, innocently. "Take it."

"ABHI!!"

"NIKKI!"

Nikki controlled the urge to scream at him and tried to get the file. Unfortuently, Abhi was a lot taller than her. Inspite of being on her the tip of her toes, Nikki was unable to reach the file.

"Want it?" Abhi teased, as she glared at him. "Fine, I will give it to you. On one condition."

"What?"

"Come to dinner with me,"

"When?"

"Today? after duty."

"No," she said. "What if someone saw us?"

Abhi sighed. "Well? good luck, getting the file now."

"Abhi please. Dr. Keerti will be making her rounds and if I am not there, she will kill me?"

But he didn't answer.

"Abhi stop being stubborn," she said sternly. "This is a hospital."

"You should have thought about that before you answered."

"Forget it," she muttered. "Convincing you is next to impossible."

And the trials went on. After five minutes, Nikki lost balance for the umpteenth time, but before she could catch herself, she fell right Abhi's arms.

A smile spread across Abhi's face as he caught her. "I miss seeing your eyes everyday?" he whispered.

Nikki tried to look away, but found herself attracted to his face like the countless times before.

"You leave early and come back late," he continued. "And today you refuse to come to dinner with me."

"Abhi? I? I?" Nikki felt guilty. "I am sorry," she said, quietly. "Tum jaante ho Armaan kaisa hai?"

"Aaj Armaan to nahin ho ga na," he said quietly. "You don't have duty this evening."

"Par?"

"Armaan Armaan Armaan," Abhi said, shaking his head. "Is he the only one who matters to you now?"

"Of course not," she replied. "How can you even think like that?"

"Then?"

Nikki sighed. "Teek hai? I will come. Happy?"

"Bahut?" Abhi answered.

Just then the door opened and Nikki jerked out of his arms. She stood awkwardly beside him as Muskaan walked in. She stopped suddenly, watching the proximity between the duo with surprise.

"I am sorry," she said, uncertainly. "I didn't mean to disturb you?"

"Nahin Muskaan," Nikki said quickly. "I just came to get my files from Dr. Modi?"

Abhi nodded and sat down in his chair. Nikki picked up the files and walked to Muskaan's side.

"Kahiye Dr. Muskaan," Abhi asked, in a professional tone.

"Dr. Keerthi aapki intezaar kar rahi hai board room mein. The meeting is going to start in two minutes," Muskaan replied.

"Thank you," he said. "You can go?"

Muskaan turned and walked away, as Nikki winked at Abhi before following her. Abhi laughed and stood up to leave as well.

"What were you doing in there?" Muskaan asked as soon as they were out of the cabin. But she didn't notice Abhi walking with earshot behind them.

"Like I said," Nikki replied. "I was getting some files."

"Why would he have your files?"

"How would I know," Nikki said.

Muskaan nodded. "Anyway, listen," she said. "We are going out to dinner today."

"who?"

"All of us," she replied. "Its Atul's birthday tomorrow and since not all of us can make it tomorrow, we decided to go today."

Crap! "Umm? I? I can't come," nikki said.

"Kyun?"

"Because? because I have duty!"

"No you don't," Muskaan said confidently. "We checked your schedule. You are off this whole week."

Abhi tried his best to hide his smirk. He knew it was impossible for Nikki to come up with an excuse."

"Oh," Nikki said, acting as if this was news. Of course she knew she didn't have duty! it was because her hubby changed the sheet so that they can go out to dinner. "I didn't know my duty changed."

"So you are coming right?" Muskaan said.

"Umm? yeah," Nikki said, suddenly making up her mind. "Yeah? I am coming."

"Great," Muskaan said. "I have to go. See ya!" And she disappeared around the corner.

Abhi grabbed Nikki's hand and turned her around. "What was that?" he asked.

"You were listening?"

"I thought you said you were coming to dinner with me?"

Nikki sighed. "I am."

"Then what about your friends?" Abhi said.

"I will go with them as well."

"What?"

"Its pretty simple," she said. "I will go to dinner with them and will make up some excuse and leave early. Afterwards, we can go to dinner. Okay?"

Abhi stared at her and didn't reply.

"I know," she said, smiling. "It's a brilliant plan."

"I hope so," Abhi muttered. But Nikki heard it all the same.

"What does that suppose to mean?"

"You think your un-suspecting bodyguards will let you go easily?" he asked sarcastically.

Her face fell. "I will make them?"

"And what if you don't come?"

"You don't trust me?" Nikki said.

"I do? but unfortunetly, you are becoming a bit like your friends?" Abhi said.

"Fine. How about you come there with a friend and whenever you want, just let me now. Okay?"

"Hmm?" he replied. "That's not a bad idea. Teek hai? I will come there. But you have to leave whenever I tell you to. Okay?"

"Okay baba, I will leave."

Abhi smiled. For some reason, he didn't have a good feeling about tonight, but he didn't want to miss the chance of going to dinner with his wife either.

Edited by -Archi- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
I will send the PMS this weekend when the next part is updated as well. Sorry for the delay.
ahahahaaaaa....brilliant according to plan 😉😆. loved it to bits archi. 😛
my part is next and m definitely posting it up BEFORE sunday. sont yu guys worry. 😆😳
we're going to try to finish this fanfic before september so the updates will be coming pretty fast.
love yu guys and take care 😳
Edited by Rhea256 - 16 years ago
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I love it !!!!!
I love it !!!!!
I love it !!!!!
I love it !!!!!
I love it !!!!!
I love it !!!!!
Honestly how are you guys such good writers , tooo good
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Rhea256

I will send the PMS this weekend when the next part is updated as well. Sorry for the delay.
ahahahaaaaa....brilliant according to plan 😉😆. loved it to bits archi. 😛
my part is next and m definitely posting it up BEFORE sunday. sont yu guys worry. 😆😳
we're going to try to finish this fanfic before september so the updates will be coming pretty fast.
love yu guys and take care 😳

SEMPTEMBER.... i thought it was before august... joking... its would practically be impossible to finish before august!!
And write quickly rhea, i am excited by writing the part after the next... lol
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Posted: 16 years ago
That was awesome part.... my god .. so much looking forward to the actual dinner part.. :) Sunday kab aayega 😳😆
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Originally posted by: -Archi-

SEMPTEMBER.... i thought it was before august... joking... its would practically be impossible to finish before august!!
And write quickly rhea, i am excited by writing the part after the next... lol

LOL. yes yes....i'll try my best to squeeze a part in my tight schedule 😉 and before august...ahahaaaa...ur funny....cuz no way THTS happening!!! i noe ur excited about writing the part after.....but im REALLYYYY excited about writing the part after tht one!!!

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