PEHCHAN (AK) 1-parts 1- 31 - Page 113

hey di

thanx for d pm

y is she so shocked wen angad proposed
i mean dat wud hav happened
it was wat dey planned after all

neways i hope she says yes
wat is d twist u r talking abt di
update soon
anshu

fantastic part di and thanks for pm

hi
gr8 part
krioa gurl u betta say yes or ill take angad from u
continue sooooooonnn
xo*kiran*xo

Originally posted by: bheegi

thanks vallanki! Kripa's dilemma is a result of her past experiences😕 No, Gayatri won't change as she knows AK love each other. Wait and see what i have planned😉😉

Hmm..so she wants to wait till she gets her own pehchan!!! and Angad agrees!! Obviously, he wants to see her own identity too. But, I fear, meanwhile he might become superstar and gets into some difficult-unavoidable situations where kripa rremains alone!!!! OK..no prob we like that 'Waiting' too when it comes to AK, as long as they belong to eachother at the end of the story😉

Originally posted by: annu127

Angad to Kripa....

apne ehsaas se chhu kar mujhe sandal kar do
main ke sadiyon se adhoora hoon mukammal kar do
na tumhein hosh rahe aur na mujhe hosh rahe
is qadar toot ke chaho mujhe paagal kar do
😊 -- Wasi Shah
wah wah wah👏

I knew it, I was expecting both the things in this part, but kripa's reaction was totally unexpected, but maybe she expected this in mumbai, and angad's at once going for proposal made her amazed.

it seems like kripa will say' Yes, but would attach some stupid condition as well, that she'll be ready for marriage if that happens otherwise Not, and through this angad would get disappointed.

i didnt like the way dilip considered marriage as a mere formality for him and naina , its ok that he said everything due to his health condition, it would be a correct decision for D-N, but as AK dont know the truth, then to say something infront of them related to get committed, is a bad example.😕

btw, this consummation is a part of the story or just for the sake of one AK passionate scene.

you have created a lot of hype about this remaining unconventional story, jis pe aapko yaqeen hai ke aap per jootey bhi pad sakte hein 😍😉'. this means that something is going to happen that would be disapproved by readers'is there a new entry of any new character.... ya phir prithvi ki waapsi kripa ki life mein ' ya phir kripa ka Sharma house mein kuch ziada hi aana jaana anyways, an unconventional twist is going to occur, either its ur POV or ur character's , doesn't matter.... but what i know that whatever happens in this fanfic.. un sab baaton ke karta dharta bheegi...Aap hi ho.😳

yeah....expected the unexpected as Kripa said. Basically, i am trying to stir away from oft repeated formulas and stories. Agar aapne meri pehli waali kahaniyan padhi hain tho aapne dekha hoga ki ab tak main saare formula apply kar chuki hoon. Iss liye abki baar kuch different try kar rahi hoon....it's not going to be as drastic as u have predicted that much i can assure u. Consummation was not done to tantalize the readers (i never try to do that😕) There is a reason....and it's NOT PREGNANCY!😆 aur haan...is ff ki karta dharta main hi hoon including all the inputs from readers which has made me change the cours eof this story many times😉

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Awww di wat a Excellent part...👏😉

Angad's soooo naughty....i loved their ROMANTIC n CUTE scene...😳

u said that there'll be a twist in the story...n its scared me.....plz di dont seperate them......wants to see them together n also their marriage..😳

kya suspense wali jagai per rokaaa.... lol

Originally posted by: bheegi

Angad to Kripa....

apne ehsaas se chhu kar mujhe sandal kar do
main ke sadiyon se adhoora hoon mukammal kar do
na tumhein hosh rahe aur na mujhe hosh rahe
is qadar toot ke chaho mujhe paagal kar do
😊 -- Wasi Shah
wah wah wah👏

lagta hai, aapko sher pasand aaey 😍 chalein, main puri ghazal sunaati hoon😆

apne ehsaas se chhu kar mujhe sandal kar do
main ke sadiyon se adhoora hoon mukammal kar do
na tumhein hosh rahe aur na mujhe hosh rahe
is qadar toot ke chaho mujhe paagal kar do

tum hatheli ko mere pyar ki mehndi se rango
apni aankhon mein mere naam ka kaajal kar do
is ke saaye mein mere khuwaab dehek utthein ge
mere chehre pe chamakta hua aanchal kar do

apne honton se koi mohar lagao mujh per
ik nazar pyar se dekho mujhe ghaayal kar do
mujh pe chhaa jao kisi aag ki surat jaanaa
aur meri zaat ko sukhaa hua jungal kar do
-- Wasi Shah