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Posted: 16 years ago
omg!! prithivi is just a pathetic jerk, so arrogant ugghh!! so can't wiat to get rid of him...
angad jee and kripa jee feels so awkward! i guess it will soon turn to just angad and kripa lol
i like rahul..
question: does gayatri knows that he is damini's son yet??
do cont soon when you can.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks...

@ak luver....yes, P is an arrogant jerk

@anshu....yes, angad is a very good person....let's see how he falls in love with kripa in the truest sense as the story progresses

@Rima....yeah the 'jee' will vanish soon lol. No, Gayatri has no clue yet...do u think she would be as nice to angad if she had found out?
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Posted: 16 years ago

oh ok.. i think she should be because its not angad's fault at all... i think she would be mean to him in the beginning but i am sure she'll realize that its not his fault!

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey di wonderful part
OMG what will happen when everybody will comes to know htat angad is their half brothers hehe
i feel bad for kripa that she got married with this stupid prithvi i just hope that angad help her get achieve what she didn't
prithvi is really jerk
pleaseeeeeeeeeee continue soon
love ya
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi bheegi! I just read the AK part without realizing i was following the AR version, and i think i like this one better 😆 Probably because im used to reading AK stories by you, so its easier to imagine them with your style of writing, and they fit better in the storyline too.. 😆
Anyways.... great part! I felt bad for Suryabhan because his son is right infront of him but he cant tell him that 😔... I loved the interaction between AK 😳 Poor Angad, he had the biggest crush on her and she turns out married... 😆 Prithvi needs a life! 😡 Before, it seemed like he was only bad from inside, but he's outwardly arrogant! Wonder why everyone, especially Rahul, praises him so much! 😕
Waiting to see how AK develop a bond.. aur is Prithvi ka kuch karo!! 😡 😆
Pleaseee cont soon 😃
Edited by -simi- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Sorry I haven't commented on any of your chapters yet...I have been keeping up with them, but haven't had the peace of mind to write detailed comments. Even today, I'll just be giving my thoughts in brief...
I loved the first part for it's uniqueness...The way everyone presented themselves was just perfect. It's difficult to write from so many perspectives and still do justice to each character, but you aced it! 👏
The second part and Angad's intro were also beautifully done. The bhabhi-devar relationship between Kripa and Rahul is sweet. 😳 I get the feeling that Rahul will be a source of support for Kripa at some point in this story (after he discovers who Prithvi truly is)...Just a speculation, I may be completely wrong.
Part 3 was very intriguing! Love Angad's choice of songs...Perfect for the situations. Prithvi is SO arrogant! I'm quite irked with Kripa's parents for making such a bad decision for her. Unfortunately for me, I absolutely love Amit Tandon. Having a lot of trouble imagining him in this role...just like I did when he was a drug addict in To Err is Human. 😒 Eh, I'll keep trying.
Continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
poor suryabhan...his past has finally caught up with him!!!
im confused....does damini know where angad is??? wudnt she have stopped him from going to his father?
and what happened to the real singers where r they???
kripa cna complete her studies after marrying angad...im sure angad wud make all her dreams come true:D just like she will fulfil his dreams...
purani jeans...havent u use this song in another ff by u???:P
gayatri comparing suryabhan to angad...afterall khoon ka rishta hai...jo aankhein nahi pehchaanti wo dil pehchaan jaata hai....i guess this will make it easier for gayatri to accept angad, maybe??? he seems familiar to her...and gayatri is already starting to remember her past with suryabhan...i hope she forgives him soon....
what a coincidence....the son furthest away frm dilip had to inherit that music gene....but thank God for the music gene it will reunite them hehe
maybe angad can take away suryabhans guilt...or atleast lessen it...as far as i cn see hes the only person who has the ability to do that...perhaps when he saves his daughter in law Kripa and gives her happiness suryabhan (and maybe gayatri too) will be relieved of this guilt and wall between them!!!
deep down suryabhan still has some feelings for damini...but responsibility comes first and his family is his responsibility now he is helpless...i hope ke uski galtiyon ka praschit angad/kripa kareinge!!!
and angad is perhaps more stronger than suryabhan.....he will win his love...unlike suryabhan...
i loved tht kismat connection part hehe
mr america...haha...so cute...reminds me of mujhse dosti karoge!! maybe angad shud start calling her ms cute n adorable haha
awww so angad finally found out shes married...lol...slowcoach...dnt be disappointed angad kabhi kabhi galti ho jaati hai but shes made for u;)
kripa is abit stereotypical abt americans isnt she....reminds me of the kripa frm des pardes....this one is the complete opposite!!!
yeh to sahi kaha angad ne...indians/pakiz bare chalaak hain=D
if the sharmas r so rich...how did kripa get their rishta??? r u gna explain tht later?
oh gosh prithvi ko zaroor aana tha:@
prithvi a role model???... uh oh....plz dnt make rahul follow prithvis footsteps in the future!!!
hes so mean to kripa she shud slap him infront of everyone:@
prithvi needs to learn alot...he doesnt know any manners or respect...he shud think before speaking!!! always saying the wrong things at da rong time:@
i think angad and rahul will have a great friendship!!!
prithvi always looking for business everywhere:@
prithvi is alredy a wall between angad and kripa:(
yay u listened to me and added a atif song:D
im loving this ff so much im having a feeling it might be my fav from all ur ffs!!! plz start continuing more regularly:D
im missing ur ffs so much...i started reading to err is human again hehe...waiting for next part!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: rima791

oh ok.. i think she should be because its not angad's fault at all... i think she would be mean to him in the beginning but i am sure she'll realize that its not his fault!

well, Rima I think Gayatri's response would change once she knows the truth...wait and see😉

[quote=sweet mittal]hey di wonderful part
OMG what will happen when everybody will comes to know htat angad is their half brothers hehe
i feel bad for kripa that she got married with this stupid prithvi i just hope that angad help her get achieve what she didn't
prithvi is really jerk
pleaseeeeeeeeeee continue soon
love ya
mittal[/quote]

Thanks mittal.....yes right now only suryabhan knows the truth but let's see when and how others will find out😃 Prithvi is indeed a bad man here😡

[quote=simi]
Hi bheegi! I just read the AK part without realizing i was following the AR version, and i think i like this one better 😆 Probably because im used to reading AK stories by you, so its easier to imagine them with your style of writing, and they fit better in the storyline too.. 😆
Anyways.... great part! I felt bad for Suryabhan because his son is right infront of him but he cant tell him that 😔... I loved the interaction between AK 😳 Poor Angad, he had the biggest crush on her and she turns out married... 😆 Prithvi needs a life! 😡 Before, it seemed like he was only bad from inside, but he's outwardly arrogant! Wonder why everyone, especially Rahul, praises him so much! 😕
Waiting to see how AK develop a bond.. aur is Prithvi ka kuch karo!! 😡 😆
Pleaseee cont soon 😃[/quote]

Thanks simi....oh good to see u on AK version. Interestingly there are more AR fans on this forum than AK fans, so it's good to see u balance out the versions here😃 well, remember Prithvi is the main bread winner in the house and as a rule in most households, who ever brings the bread gets the most clout. Right now Rahul worships Prithvi as he does not know the real side of his brother...wiat till he finds out😕AK bond is already being formed, even though they don't realize it yet😳
Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: SuhanaSafar

Sorry I haven't commented on any of your chapters yet...I have been keeping up with them, but haven't had the peace of mind to write detailed comments. Even today, I'll just be giving my thoughts in brief...
I loved the first part for it's uniqueness...The way everyone presented themselves was just perfect. It's difficult to write from so many perspectives and still do justice to each character, but you aced it! 👏
The second part and Angad's intro were also beautifully done. The bhabhi-devar relationship between Kripa and Rahul is sweet. 😳 I get the feeling that Rahul will be a source of support for Kripa at some point in this story (after he discovers who Prithvi truly is)...Just a speculation, I may be completely wrong.
Part 3 was very intriguing! Love Angad's choice of songs...Perfect for the situations. Prithvi is SO arrogant! I'm quite irked with Kripa's parents for making such a bad decision for her. Unfortunately for me, I absolutely love Amit Tandon. Having a lot of trouble imagining him in this role...just like I did when he was a drug addict in To Err is Human. 😒 Eh, I'll keep trying.
Continue soon!



Thanks rabia. I am sorry, even I have not had time to read ur new ff...I will as soon as I have more time. Thanks for reading all the parts. I have always seen Amit tandon as Prithvi and he was quite a negative character there. Therefore, my image about him is still negative😕...well this story needs an arrogant, egoistic man which suits his personality too😃 Let's see if Rahul helps AK or will he turn out like his brother😕

Thanks angullgrl😊

[quote=queenhinna12]poor suryabhan...his past has finally caught up with him!!!
im confused....does damini know where angad is??? wudnt she have stopped him from going to his father?
and what happened to the real singers where r they???
kripa cna complete her studies after marrying angad...im sure angad wud make all her dreams come true:D just like she will fulfil his dreams...
purani jeans...havent u use this song in another ff by u???:P
gayatri comparing suryabhan to angad...afterall khoon ka rishta hai...jo aankhein nahi pehchaanti wo dil pehchaan jaata hai....i guess this will make it easier for gayatri to accept angad, maybe??? he seems familiar to her...and gayatri is already starting to remember her past with suryabhan...i hope she forgives him soon....
what a coincidence....the son furthest away frm dilip had to inherit that music gene....but thank God for the music gene it will reunite them hehe
maybe angad can take away suryabhans guilt...or atleast lessen it...as far as i cn see hes the only person who has the ability to do that...perhaps when he saves his daughter in law Kripa and gives her happiness suryabhan (and maybe gayatri too) will be relieved of this guilt and wall between them!!!
deep down suryabhan still has some feelings for damini...but responsibility comes first and his family is his responsibility now he is helpless...i hope ke uski galtiyon ka praschit angad/kripa kareinge!!!
and angad is perhaps more stronger than suryabhan.....he will win his love...unlike suryabhan...
i loved tht kismat connection part hehe
mr america...haha...so cute...reminds me of mujhse dosti karoge!! maybe angad shud start calling her ms cute n adorable haha
awww so angad finally found out shes married...lol...slowcoach...dnt be disappointed angad kabhi kabhi galti ho jaati hai but shes made for u;)
kripa is abit stereotypical abt americans isnt she....reminds me of the kripa frm des pardes....this one is the complete opposite!!!
yeh to sahi kaha angad ne...indians/pakiz bare chalaak hain=D
if the sharmas r so rich...how did kripa get their rishta??? r u gna explain tht later?
oh gosh prithvi ko zaroor aana tha:@
prithvi a role model???... uh oh....plz dnt make rahul follow prithvis footsteps in the future!!!
hes so mean to kripa she shud slap him infront of everyone:@
prithvi needs to learn alot...he doesnt know any manners or respect...he shud think before speaking!!! always saying the wrong things at da rong time:@
i think angad and rahul will have a great friendship!!!
prithvi always looking for business everywhere:@
prithvi is alredy a wall between angad and kripa:(
yay u listened to me and added a atif song:D
im loving this ff so much im having a feeling it might be my fav from all ur ffs!!! plz start continuing more regularly:D
im missing ur ffs so much...i started reading to err is human again hehe...waiting for next part!!!
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Aww Hinna....lovely comment as always but remember Damini is dead....Angad said that in his intro. His uncle, Dilip told him about Suryabhan but did not tell him who was his dad. The other musicians are probably stuck in traffic😆
Of course, Kripa will complete her studies later😉
Have I used Purani jeans before? ...U seem to have a better memory than me😆
well, let's see if Gayatri finds the truth about angad and how she will react😕
Good possibilities about future storyline👏
You are right about native people...they are more street smart for sure😆 but hamari Kripa bhi street smart hai ya nahin??😕

yes, I'll explain later how P and K got married. Kripa is too dutiful a wife to even think about slapping Prithvi- at least yet😆

Thanks 4 all the song suggestions😊 and loved ur rocking comments as always👏
Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
i love this FF .....continue soon...

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