kahein pyar na hojaye.....prt 2 pg2RMFF - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Very Very cute...and emotional...i wanted this concept to be portrayed on RM and u did it awesome work cotd soon plz and make the next part a bit longer if u can...thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
good start.. wonder how rahul is.. casanova , work freak.. wat..

continue soonn
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
Awsome! thanx for the PM. continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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kAHEIN PYAR NA HO JAEY....
ramu kaka....ramu kaka...pooja ki thali ley aaeey......kamini(rahuls mom) yelled

muskan beta sedha paer andar rakho...kamini said

muskan with fake smile stepped in and rahul followed her

after all da rasamz ....

rahul bohat dair ho gi hai merey khayal mai muskan thak gi hai issey room mai ley jao

priety (rahuls sister)..aesey nahi bhabhi ko apni bahoon main laey kar jao bhai...

rahul smiled...as u wish sis...he lifted muski in his arms and carried her to da bed.........!!!

RM ROOM....
rahul put her on da bed carefully...main abhi aya saying this he walked towards the closet pulling his nite suit ...he un button his sherwani infront of muskan
muskan tried not 2 look at his perfectly bulid body....she thought 2 herself beshram ...oh god kya ho ga mera....
rahul turned around and stared at her face the moonlight was reflecting her beauty even more. muskan didn't know what to say because she was seeing mischief in his eyes ....rahul smiled as he noticed muskan looking at him.... he pauses for a second and than walked towards her...
rahul move closer lifting her face up...
tum chand sey haseen ho
taroon sey pochlo,pholoon
sey khubsurat ho baharon
sey pooch lo.......
saying that he bend his face and brushed his lips on her cheek..he could feel her heart beating agaisnt his chest he moved his face up and felt her hair inhailing her fragnance

muskan took a deep breath and stepped back...choro mujhey....mujhey change karna hai.....she gave him an angry look

muskan was about 2 leave wen he grabbed her waist and pulled her on da bed and pressed his all body weight on her he moved closer and whisperd in her ear...muskan tum ghussey main aur bhi khubsurat lagti ho...kya karoon sweetheart mujhey is ghussey par bhi pyar araha hai

muskan pushed him away and stood up...par is waqt mujhey neend aarahi hai.....main change kar key atti ho.....

muskan ran in2 da washroom...leaving rahul confused.....
after 15 mins....rahul knocked da door.....kya hua muskan plss open da door....
mukan wiped her tears...no way main nahi aaon gi
rahul replied in shock...par kyun plss u cant do this 2 me....bahar toh aao
muskan said loudly...no way main ayi toh phir tum mujhe tang karo gey....main nahi aaon gi.......this door is not going 2 open
rahul asked...par kab tak????
muskan replied....subha tak.....
rahul kicked da door........dekho muskan bahar ajao warna...............................!!!!
2 BE CONTINUED.......

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Posted: 16 years ago
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niceee parrtttt!!!!! hope rahul doesn't hurt her
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy....just read ur FF!! its awesome!! really interesting!! plzz cont soon and plz PM me when u cont!!

<33
Mahima
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Posted: 16 years ago
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so he seems 2 me da my hormones r jumping but i dont want to hurt u type guy...lol

plzplz plz continue soon!!!!!its vvv interesting part!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
Oh my god why is she being so mean to him. He's such a sweetheart! if she'd just talk it out with him I don't think he'd force her into something she wasn't comfortable with. i hope they come to an understanding FAST!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG!! That was so cute!! 😳 Muskaan and rahul need to understand each other now... or else... 😕 !!

Thanks for the pm!! 😊 update soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
Wow wonderful!
I loved it totally..Ahh just had to top there didn't you.LOL
can't wait for the next update...continue soon!

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