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Xainab

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Sounds interesting......

Pm me when u update.

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Neeta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Great Intro Sonia :) Do continue soon !!

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Hey The Creative Writer Sonia !~

The Intro Was Great ~!
And The Co0ncept Is Aweso0o0me ~!

Continue Dear !~

U Will Wait For The Update !~
And If There Is Any PM List Then Count Me In !~~!

Take Care ~!

-Walo

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Mansi bhatia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Wow Sonia..AWSOME! Im very upset..u never PM'ed me!!

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rahayma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

woow nyce concept plss continue soon

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-Mishti_Divz-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

😡 Thanksss honey for not telling me :(

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ramusk

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

hmmm sonia---so once again u r up with another hun n this time looks a lot more diff....am looking forward for it. just PM me wen u update.

lov ya my RM soul sis!!!

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sweetaddiction

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

heyy--
sounds interesting !!-- do continu soon ! =)
~Sweetoo

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Sonia Bhalla

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

Wowz! More comments? How did you guys find this? Did Sonia (stellarwind) PM all you guys also? I did not PM anyone about this because I did not really start.

Hmm.. I need to update the other 2 before I start this so probably be a few days if not weeks!! Haha!! 😆

Edited by SuhaniSonia - 16 years ago

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Sonia Bhalla

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Posted: 16 years ago

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And I was correct!! It has taken me weeks to get to this!! I am not sure if people will enjoy this story or not as it is quite different than the other ones!! I am going to post a little bit now .. like an intro .. I suppose. Tell me what you think!!

Intro

Rahul Grewal is a 7 year old boy with a difficult childhood !! Not only did he lose his mother recently but he lived with his father, who was not really the parenting type. During Rahuls' upbringing, there were times his father did not care and there were times that he was harsh. But nonetheless, Rahuls' childhood was not a typical one. He never had too many friends and he often drifted into his own imaginary world but he almost always felt lonely as he never found anyone that understood him quite right.

Rahul - Are you game?

Silence.

Rahul - Are you game?

More silence.

Rahul stared at his cousin, Karan, of about the same age, as he played intently with his video game system. There was no way of getting his attention with a simple soft spoken question right now.

Rahul - ARE YOU GAME?

Karan jumped and yelled back.

Karan - WHAT? Game? Game for what? I am playing a game right now.

Rahul - No. Not that game. This one!

Karan looks over to see Rahul sitting on the bed staring at the same tin can he had in his hands all afternoon. It was a silly looking round rusted piece of tin with a painting drawn around it. Karan could not fathom what would be so interesting about a simple old can. He had far more difficult things to deal with like how he was going to destroy the alien in his video game.

Rahul was dropped off a few hours ago by his dad literally a minutes after he found this new toy in his mothers closet hidden in a remote box on the top shelf. He was intrigued with its design and wanted to open it at home but was rushed out. He finally emptied the contents of this tin as he arrived at his aunts home and found a piece of paper with some writing. The paper was old and the script hard to read but he made out something about a game. A game that dictated you to dare someone. The holder of the can would dare someone and if the dare was done the other player would get the tin and continue the game. At first he was skeptical of the concept but then he thought of the endless amusing possibilities. If only he had someone that would agree to play.

Karan - Stop staring at the silly can and come here and help me defeat this creature!!

Rahul knew Karan would never be up for this game because he was never up for anything he had asked of him before. Rahul also did not care to engage himself in video games but he also did not want to be the lone one out so he wandered over to the tv console and engaged himself in the mindless game. But he could help but think of his new found potential source of entertainment.