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Posted: 16 years ago

ii really want the confession soon Mona!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: DMG4EVER

ii really want the confession soon Mona!!

Thank 4 ur commenet...i will open the topic and u can go there and vote....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part- 16

Recape: Armaan realized his love for ridhimaa but is afraid will ridz have same feeling for him???

Armaan like always got up and went to ridz's house to pick her up….but was shoked to find out that she wasn't home at that time….

Armaan(thinking): where can this girl go at this early in the moring…..

He still waited outside her house thinking that maybe she might return from some where….he cant have nice day until he she her face first thing in the morning….

Seeing him waiting outside the door padma called him…

Padma: armaan beta wo to aaj subha mandir gayi hai….

Armaan: what??ridz or mandir.??that is some thing new…

Padma: haan beta I know u must be shocked but ridz always goes to mindir on this date….because today is her grand father's birthday who isn't here any more…she goes there to remember him…u go to school she will come later on….

Armaan: no…its fine..i will go there..which mandir???

Padman: the one right next to ur house…

Armaan: ok..thankc u aunty..i will see u later…

With that armaan made his way toward the madir around his house…he reached the mandir In half an hour…he parked his car under a tree and got out with his eyes wondering here and there trying to look for the love of his life….

Armaan(to himself): where could she be…..pata nahi aaj ka din kesa jayega afterall she isn't the first one I saw this morning…she never cares for me…pata nahi ke usko dekhe bina dil ko sukoon nahi milta…..then he realise that how will she know afterall u haven't told her u love her..did u??duffer…

He talked to himself on his way toward the mandir that he didn't realise a car coming toward him at full speed….as the car was getting closer armaan didn't paid attention..just then he heard her yell..

Ridz: ARMAAN…

Armaan jumped out of his thought and saw her running towards him in full speed….

Armaan(to himself): arre…use kya hogaya he…kahi use pata to nahi chalgaya ke me use pyaar karta hun…OMG..she will surely kill me…then he closely paid attention to her face and show her crying…OMG..why is she crying…oh no armaan I think she really hates u..dude now what u going to do….he was still lost in his thought when he felt her body crashed into his…they both lost their balance and hit the ground all together….

Armaan didn't understand what happened all he knew that his lady love was hugging him and crying…

Ridz: ARMAAN tum thik to hona…tumhe kahi lagi to nahi…….

Armaan: ha???excuse me what u talking about???

RidzI(to herself):OMG….did he lost his memory….how come he don't know my name….

Ridz:armaan its me..ridz..dont u remember…ridz ur friend…

Armaan: hey why u teeling me ur name..???

Ridz: because u don't remember me..armaan I m worried now….are u ok???

Armaan: why don't I remember u???why r u worried??i m fine…

Ridz:u don't know me because u lost ur memories…did u???

Armaan: ridz…ha hah…he started laughing….what when did I lost my memories??

Ridz: OMG..armaan u said my name….that mean u know me..yaya…I m so happy….

Armaan: ridz..wait up..i never lost my memories….i m fine..and plus even if I do lost my memories I will still remember u..u know why….

Ridz shook her head in no…

Armaan: because u r not in my mind u r in my heart….

Ridz blushe shade of pink

Armaan noticed her cheeks go read and loved the feeling…

Armaan(to himself): abhe hasi to phasi….oh look how cute she look when she blush…..

None of them knew where to start a convo from…they stayed there looking at each other…..without saying anything..

Armaan finally broke the icre and said…

Armaan: so ridz….how was the pooja???

Ridz: ha???how do u know about that???

Armaan: well padma aunty told me…btw u look really pretty in the salwar I didn't notice as u came running into me like a bull…

Ridz: oh thankc….then she realise that hejust called her a bull…what….i wasn't running like a bull…u fool u should be thanking me for saving ur life..

Armaan: thankc u for saving my life..when was my life in danger???

Ridz: OMG..u r so stupid..right now..that car was going to hit u…but let me guess u Mr.Supercool was thinking about some chick….wasnt u???

Armaan: oh….that is why u ran into me….ya I was thinking about a girl….kyun tumhe jalan(jealous) ho rahi hai???

Ridz: jealous my foot..me kyun jalane lagi???

Armaan: kyun ki….he said coming closer to her….

Ridz was surprised by his sudden act and said: kyu???

Armaan coming a lil more closer to her: kyun ki ridz???

Ridz was loosing her self because of the closeness they both shared….she could hardly spit out a word: kyun ki armaan??

They were both only mm away from each other….armaan placed his had on ridz face…his one touch make her shiever and she started getting read like a tomatoes…

Ridz:ar….maa….nn…kyun ki???

Armaan loved the effect her had on her..he was happy that she was having the same feelings as him…he didn't wantd to tease her more so he suddenly back off and said…

Armaan: kyun ki….mujhe kya pata….jealane tum he hor hi hai tum he pata…..he got up and started walking away….

Ridz was left shocked….

Ridz(thinking): OMG…kitni stupid hun main…I got fooled by that fool…how can u do that to ur self ridz….she saw him walking toward his car…

Ridz: you go to hell….

Armaan: sure…but I kind of lost the address….reapet that again for me..will ya???

Ridz was fuming red she stumped her foot and ran toward the mandir…

Armaan(thinking) : i thought she was done with the pooja….come on ammy u have pised her off now go and see what is that lil devil of ur is up to…

He walked behind her…he took off his shoe as he saw the other do it..and entered the temple following ridz….he saw her and went to her..

Armaan: ridz…yaar sorry…

Ridz: chup….and got to her praying..she handed the pooja thali to the pandit and got on the floor and started praying….

Armaan saw her closing her eyes and leaning on the god's murti….and he did the same….instead of praying to god he was looking at ridz's beautiful face and then he notice water coming out of her eyes….and was shocke to see her crying…he wanted to ask her there but stopped himself and prayed to god….

Armaan(praying to god): please god give all the happiness to my ridz…..and keep her safe and sound….

He didn't realise when ridz got up and left from there….he looked around and saw her planting tulsi….he never thought that the same thought ridz would cry praying he wonder what is wrong with her…and he never in his dream thought that she would pray her heart out here in the mandir….he thought she was a modern kind of girl and don't believe in god…..but he found her total opposite and he love this side of her….when he remembered that ridz was here praying for her grandfather…he thought that some day she would pray for him….

Armaan(thinking): just love her…..

Armaan went behind her and saw her waling around the mandir….he watched her go in circle around the mandir 5 times and thought what was that for….finally when she was done…he saw her coming toward him…

Ridz: I thought u left tum yaha kya kar rahe ho..??

Armaan: arre yaar I waited for u and came to mandir for the first time in my life for u and u are behaving badly with me how rude….

Ridz: shutup….pehli baar aye mere liye how cute….

Armaan: I know I m very cute…

Ridz: cute my foot….waise ek kaam karo..hold this..she handed him the pooja thali and said…tum yaha ruko main abhi aayi…

Armaan: yelled back at her…YOUR WELCOME…

Ridz: turned back and smiled..THANK YOU…

Armaan saw her desapper inside the mandir and thought of going down to his car and wait for her….as he turned around to go back he saw ridz running back to him…

Armaan: kaya huva…kaha gayi thi…

Ridz: kuch nahi…

Armaan: are u sure….u r not hiding anything from me??

Ridz(thought): kese bata du tumhe….ke kya huva hai meri life me….

Ridz: nahi..yaar..come lets get to school….

Armaan: now…

Ridz: ya why..

Armaan: have u looked at the time…..we are like super late there is no point in going to school today…

Ridz: oh I guess not…then lets drop me home please…

Armaan: ok…lets get inside the car….and had home…

On their way back to ridz house…..ridz thought to herself that kya use ye baat armaan ko bata deni chahi ye..??lekin kese bata de wo uska visvas nahi kare ga…

Precape: what is the lil secreat the ridz has been hiding….

I know guys I m sorry I couldn't update soon….and like i said that I will be updating after my school over but I felt really sorry for making u all wait….so I thought of taking my time and not studying for my exam on Monday's exam…I wrote an update for u all..hope u all like it…so read it and comment..

❤️MONA

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Posted: 16 years ago
res!
edit** hey...
great part dear!
wonder watz her secret!....
armaan is just so cute...
he went to the mandir nd just 4 ridhz...
soooo sweet...
plzzzzz cont.soon dear...
nd thnxxx for da pm!
Luv SAZ!
Edited by SaziArmaan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey mona, commenting after a long time...
lovely part sweety..... gr8 job and keep it up...
i am one of ur silent reader....lol....
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey Mona,
cute part yaar....Ridhima and Mandir...nice.....loved the interaction they had in the temple......and Armaan thoughts were really hilarious and cute.......wonder whats up with Ridhima's secret.......cant wait to read further......do continue soon and thanks alot for the PM!!!!!!
-surbhi😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey mona darling ki kahu it ws sooo loving nd touching prt yaar ar cared fr her sooo much nd ridz thnk god she savd him nd he w slost in her hehehe gud gud vryyy gud mate marte bacha nd arridz moments in mandir it ws tooo cute ar ws seeing her doi all tht nd so much lv her hmmmm kaise kahega lts see nd he prayd to god only fr her thts soooo sweeeeeet cnt wait fr d nxt prt
cont sooooooon
thnks fr dpm
luv yachna
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Posted: 16 years ago

It is a fabulous update mona...

waiting eagerly to know about the secret...
Will be waiting for the next part to come...
Loads of love
Deepu :)
P.S. Thanks a lot for the pm :)
Edited by loyal-kashian - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Mona!! I am really happy u updated and the prt was so adorable and cute!! HOWEVER U SHUD REVISE FOR UR TEST GIRL!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey mona great update yaar
continue soon
loved it
Love Reshma

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