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Henna

@Manhen

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey guys, I was getting bored so i thought I would write something about SaJan.

I know, it's not that interesting but plz, help me get this little story into a big one.

I need ur help!! Plz continue my story and enjoy yourselves

The scene is placed in Gunjan's room where she is studying. The windows are wide open and the moonlight is shining all over the place.

Suddenly, Samrat jumps in Gunjan's room and...

S : Hi Chashmish

G : Samrat tum ??

S (with a big smile on his face): nehin, tumhara neighbour

G: Samrat tum yahan...itni raat ko...?

S: Acually, tum se baat karne ka mann kiya, is liye chala aaya

G: Lekin Samrat, hum fone pe bhi to baat kar sakte the na? Tumhe yahan aane ki kya zaroorat thi? Agar kisi ne dekh...

S (interrupting her): Don't worry Chashmish, Samrat ko koi nehin pakar sakta

And besides,tum to ho na mere saath (he looks at her very sweetly)

Gunjan blushed

G: Dekho Samrat, tumhe yahan se jaana chahiye! Warna...

S(getting closer to Gunjan): Warna kya Chashmish? Tum hamesha itne stress mein kyun rehti ho? Mujhe dekho, aur kuch seekho ( he sits on Gunjan's bed)

G(blushing): SAMRATTT! Kya kar rahe ho? Dekho, yahan se chale jao ! Plzzz Di aajayein gi..

S: Relax Gunjan, it's ok. Agar koi aa bhi gaya, to main tumhare..humm..(with a mischievous smile on his face) bed ke neeche chup jaoon ga :D

G(very confused): Haan haan theek...KYA? Tum kya keh rahe ho??? Plz Samrat, yahan se chale jao!

Someone knocks on the door...

Plz guys, continue. Don't worry if what u write is not long. Just write your heart out :D

Edited by Manhen - 17 years ago

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Henna

@Manhen

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Posted: 17 years ago

Doesnt anybody wanna continue? :-( is it that bad??

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Ynaiita

@ynaiita

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hi!!i luv Sajan,so i'll continue!!

G-Samrat!!darvaze main koi hain,plzz yaha se jao!!

S-relax chashmish,kuch nei hoga.ek kaam karo,poocho ke darvaze main kaun hain.

G-par...

S-poocho chashmish,kuch nei hoga!!

G-thike,Kaun hain????

Voice-main hoon!!(it was Nupur's voice)

G-di!!ek minute!Samrat,tum yaha se jao!

S-thike thike main jaongi par tumhe terrace main aana hoga varna main phir se aaongi!!

G-thike,ab jao!!

Samrat hides behind the door.Then Nupur comes in.

N-Gunjan,itne der kyun laga diya??

G-vo main kapre badal rahi thi na to...

N-thike,choro is baat ko ab so jao.kal college bhi toh jaana hain na???

G-haan di.
Then she remembers wat Samrat had said.

G-umm di,main terrace main jaongi,kal college hain par main kuch fresh air chahta!!

N-thike,par jaldi aana.aur mujhe mat utho!

G-thike.

Samrat goes out of the room.Gunjan closes the door n goes up 2 the terrace too.

plzz i hav 2 close the comp' so can someone else continue in the terrace?plzz Sajan fanz,do continue n write wat u want 2 see!!

ynaiita

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Henna

@Manhen

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

Hey tnx ynaiita :-)

I'll continue and hope u guys continue too

Samrat is waiting for Gunjan to come on the terrace.

Gunjan hurries to go on the terrace. There, she closes the door so nobody can see them.

G: Kya hua Samrat? Tumne itni zaroori baat kya karni hai ke kal ka wait nehin kar sakte the?

S(looking very deeply in Gunjan's eyes): Chashmish...Main tumse yeh kehna chahta hoon ke...ke...ke...

G(her heartbeat gets faster): Ke?

S: ke...raat ko tum bohot hi...cute lagti ho !

G(confused): kya? Sirf yehi kehna tha?! (then she realizes that Samrat gave her a compliment and she blushes)

S: Hmm..haan yehi kehna tha...

He gets closer to Gunjan, whose heartbeat is getting really harder

G: Th..thank you

S: (with a big smile) You're welcome Chashmish! Acha suno...ab main chalta hoon.

G: Nehin!

S: kya?

G(realises what she said): Mera matlab hai..ke...haan tum jaldi se chale jao isse pehle ke koi ajaya

S: Acha to phir main jaoon?

G(doesnt want him to go but she can't say that...): Haan...

S(he wants her to stop him but then he thinks what am i doing!?): Acha theek hai then...See you

G:ok

S: Good night Chashmish

G: Good night Samrat

S: Apna khayal rakhna...(he doesnt knw why, but he really wants to stay all night with Gunjan)

G: tum bhi...

Loolz plz someone else continue

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@mayur_rox123

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

ok... i shall continue... lol

NEXT DAY IN THE COLLEGE

S. oi.. benji .. yeh gunjan kaheen dikh nahi rahi hain yaaar...!!!!

B. Samrat .. log tere baare mein poochte suna tha.. par tu kisi ke baare mein pooch raha... kahin main sapna to nahin...

S. benji yaar shutup.. tujse to kuch puchna hi bekar hain

( suddenly he see's chashmish )

S. aniwaz see yuh later dude.

B. par samrat.. sun to.....

( samrat walks away )

S. hey chashmish

G. hi samrat

S. kya hua?

G. kuch nahin

S. kuch to hua hain chashmish...

( the bell goes ...)

G. class ke liye late ho rahan hain.. ! chale

S. tumhara hukum sar aankhon par chashmish!

G and S smile and go to their classes..!!

IN THE CLASS

D. hey sammy

S. hi candy

D. mere saath nahin baatho gey?

S. zaroor bathta... par aaj chashmish ne kahan tha ki wo mujhe kuch notes samjhaegi

so sorry candy...

D. gettin angry buh doesnt show her emotions.. NO PROBS SAMMY

G. samrat tumne dia se jhut kyun bola ki mujhe tumhe kuch notes samjhane?

S. kyun chashmish.. kya tum mere saath nahin bathna chati? *mjht violen music is played*

G. nahin... wo.. main

S. oi hoye

G. kya?

S. kuch nahin...bathen.. ya phir puri class khare khare attend karne ka irada hain

G. smiles...

( the class finishes and they leave the class )

lol.. SUM1 ELSE CAN CARRY ON NOW...!! 😊

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Henna

@Manhen

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

In the canteen. Samrat is lost in his thoughts, while Dia is trying to tell him to go out on a date with her.

D: So Sammy, what do u say?

S:..Huh? Date?

D: Ya Sammy! Chalo na date par chalte hain

S: hm...haan Dia (he's thinking how can he say no but doesnt find any way)

D: Oh great Sammy! Kitna maza aayega! Acha phir main chalti hoon. Bye Sammy

S: bye..

S: Are benji! Main kya karoon ab?? Dia ko kaise samjaoon ke aaj shaam ko mera Gunjan se milne ka irada haiii??

B(shocked): Kya? Gunjan se milne ka KYA?

S: Shut up Benji...kuch sochhh

B:acha acha...

After a moment.

B: IDEA

S: Kya??

B: Abhi teri tabiyat kharab hone wali hai!

S: kya?

B: are!! Tu Dia se keh ke teri tabiyat kharab ho gayi hai aur tujhe bukhaar hai. Phir date postpone!!

S: are haan! Thanks benji! Tune meri life bacha di!

In class:

S: sir, can i leave the classroom plz? I'm not feeling well...

(he acts as he was sick)

The teacher: hmm...yes go ahead Samrat

G: tum theek to ho Samrat??

Samrat winked at her and smiles but Gunjan doesn't understand.

He goes and waits till the class ends.

There, he takes Dia apart and says

S: Candy...mujhe chakkar aa rahe hain...mujhe lagta hai ke mujhe bukhaar hai...

D: Oh no Sammy! Ab hamari date ka kya hoga!?

S: I know babs lekin main kya karoon?

D: Tum ghar jao aur rest karo Sammy! Hum kal date par chale jayeinge.

S: ok babs...See u

Samrat goes straight to Gunjan after that.

S: Hey Chashmish!

G: Samrat tumhe kya hua? Tumari tabiyat to theek hai na??

Samrat is touched by her careness

S: Haan chashmish main bilkul theek hoon.

G: to phir class mein tum achanak bahar kyun chale aaye??

S: woh kya hai ke Dia mere saath date par jaana chahti thi lekin main tumhe date par leke jaana chahta hoon iss liye...(he gets a lil shocked by what he said...)

G blushes: kya...tum sirf mujhse milne ke liye yeh natak kar rahe the...

S: haan Gunjan...

Then they go home and Samrat told Gunjan that he'll pick her at 7.

During their way to the restaurant

S: mujhe theek se pakar lo chashmish, yeh na ho ke tum gir paro

G: Samraaaat! Dheere chalao mujhe darr lag raha haiii

S(laughs): Don't worry chashmish, tum abhi Samrat ke saath ho aur jab tak mere saath ho, tumhe kuch bhi nehin ho sakta

G looks at him very sweetly

They arrive at the restaurant. But what they don't know is that Dia was there too. She heard Gunjan telling Nupur that she was dating Samrat...

Someone continue plzz

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

IN RESTAURANT

S: chamish u looking soo beautifull specailyy todayyyyyyy.

G: thank you samrat u also look handsome as always.

S: thanks.

G: samrat sell we order now.

Samrat and gunjan order there food after finish there food.

S: ask gunjan sell we dance .

G: yes i love to dance with u samrat.

they both danceing with each other.

on the other side of restaurant

Ani: look over there babes looks like samrat love gunjan so much tht why he lie u about his date with u.

D: annie just wait and watchh i will seprate both of themm from each other.

Ani: babes i am always with you just think about samrat he likes only gunjan babes u love samrat soo much u coud do anything for him .

D: yes you are right annie i coud do anything for samrat but i hate my morana sisters.

BACK TO SAMRAT AND GUNJAN

after danceing samrat saw dia and annie he is thinking what are they doing here something is wrong if they saw us candy will do something wrong with me and gunjan i will do anything for gunjan to save from candy she is crazyy girl i know her she will plan something saperat me and gunjan.

G: what happend samratt what are u thinking .

S: gunjan i will never leave you look over there dia and annie are also here if she saw us she will do anything to make u and me saperat i know her she is crazyyy girl i save u from dia and her chamchi annie i think she saw us making plans to separte us i will never let tht happend to us.

G: dont worryy samrat i am always with u dia and annie can seprat us from each other i trust u samrat u will never let dia our her chamchi annie come between us we will fight for our friendship and love.
can someone contuied plzz

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Henna

@Manhen

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo
IN RESTAURANT

S: chamish u looking soo beautifull specailyy todayyyyyyy.

G: thank you samrat u also look handsome as always.

S: thanks.

G: samrat sell we order now.

Samrat and gunjan order there food after finish there food.

S: ask gunjan sell we dance .

G: yes i love to dance with u samrat.

they both danceing with each other.

on the other side of restaurant

Ani: look over there babes looks like samrat love gunjan so much tht why he lie u about his date with u.

D: annie just wait and watchh i will seprate both of themm from each other.

Ani: babes i am always with you just think about samrat he likes only gunjan babes u love samrat soo much u coud do anything for him .

D: yes you are right annie i coud do anything for samrat but i hate my morana sisters.

BACK TO SAMRAT AND GUNJAN

after danceing samrat saw dia and annie he is thinking what are they doing here something is wrong if they saw us candy will do something wrong with me and gunjan i will do anything for gunjan to save from candy she is crazyy girl i know her she will plan something saperat me and gunjan.

G: what happend samratt what are u thinking .

S: gunjan i will never leave you look over there dia and annie are also here if she saw us she will do anything to make u and me saperat i know her she is crazyyy girl i save u from dia and her chamchi annie i think she saw us making plans to separte us i will never let tht happend to us.

G: dont worryy samrat i am always with u dia and annie can seprat us from each other i trust u samrat u will never let dia our her chamchi annie come between us we will fight for our friendship and love.
can someone contuied plzz

Hey, that was nice but u make them fall in love too fast...i mean, it's just the beginning of their "love" and i want all the details to be there so if u could respect that...it would be nice

Anyway, thank u very much for the writing :-)

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

no problamm i really respet soory if i put love in end

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Anwaya

@anwaya

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: mjhtlover123
ok... i shall continue... lol

NEXT DAY IN THE COLLEGE

S. oi.. benji .. yeh gunjan kaheen dikh nahi rahi hain yaaar...!!!!

B. Samrat .. log tere baare mein poochte suna tha.. par tu kisi ke baare mein pooch raha... kahin main sapna to nahin...

S. benji yaar shutup.. tujse to kuch puchna hi bekar hain

( suddenly he see's chashmish )

S. aniwaz see yuh later dude.

B. par samrat.. sun to.....

( samrat walks away )

S. hey chashmish

G. hi samrat

S. kya hua?

G. kuch nahin

S. kuch to hua hain chashmish...

( the bell goes ...)

G. class ke liye late ho rahan hain.. ! chale

S. tumhara hukum sar aankhon par chashmish!

G and S smile and go to their classes..!!

IN THE CLASS

D. hey sammy

S. hi candy

D. mere saath nahin baatho gey?

S. zaroor bathta... par aaj chashmish ne kahan tha ki wo mujhe kuch notes samjhaegi

so sorry candy...

D. gettin angry buh doesnt show her emotions.. NO PROBS SAMMY

G. samrat tumne dia se jhut kyun bola ki mujhe tumhe kuch notes samjhane?

S. kyun chashmish.. kya tum mere saath nahin bathna chati? *mjht violen music is played*

G. nahin... wo.. main

S. oi hoye

G. kya?

S. kuch nahin...bathen.. ya phir puri class khare khare attend karne ka irada hain

G. smiles...

( the class finishes and they leave the class )

lol.. SUM1 ELSE CAN CARRY ON NOW...!! 😊

u wrote so nyc!

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