Jiaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! It was a real treat catching up on all these parts..I have to say you definitely didn't dissappoint me one bit...now lets see if I still remember how to give you these detailed comments..but then again I"m sure it'll just come to me when it has to do with your Fics..because there's always soo much to say..! Loll
I have to say Jia, you're definitely a very talented writer..I know I know I"ve said this to you a countless number of times..and I'm not just saying this to flatter you..but I genuinely do mean it. While catching up on these parts, I was just thinking about how you have 3..no 4 FF's at the moment..and each one of them is soo different from each other..while ones a more action filled romantic..this one has a more aristocratic (not at all in the snobbish way) feel to it..going at its own natural pace..a very classy feel....and personally I'm enjoying it a lot.
*Jumps jumps jumps* I was right, I was right, I was right!! Abhi and Armaan do know each other..from their college days ehh?? Personal conflicts with each other..more of a ego problem here..lol. Ahh I guess for Abhi I can just say "Once a jerk..always a jerk" haha. It's actually quite amusing to know that one person that did even really matter to you can leave such an impact on a person that years later they still remember...it just reminds me of something I was discussing earlier..that hate is a type of passion as in like...your so irked by this person that you hate him with a passion...and somewhere deep inside he matters enough to you that you actually feel something for him/her..whether its hate or love...instead of just dissing this person off as a nobody. But in Armaans case here I can understand, Abhi Modi left no chance in making Armaan realize he's inferior to him...and after a while it does hurt a persons ego, his respect, it effects their outlook to life even....but we did have one good aspect come out of all of this...and that is that Abhi Modi made Armaan much more ambitious towards his goals...towards actually becoming something and showing Modi that he's no inferior....that with his hardwork and dedication he can gain the same status as Abhi..possibly even be superior to Abhi,
I can see that Armaan is going to use Riddhima to his advantage, I'm not saying that he doesn't feel anything for her, it's more than obvious that he does...but he's also going to use her to gain his revenge....she's a golden opportunity for him...I'm not going to think too much into the future..I know in the future for a while he's going to lose something precious, but for now I'm just going to sit back and enjoy their romance...which girllll the way you write yours parts...is making me get butterflies in my stomach while reading them..it's like I can actually imagine them acting these scenes out...uffff a great quality you have in you as a writer :)
Soo really I'm not following any general pattern with this comment..not that I ever do...loll....but I just wanted to say AR have a unique relationship. I almost feel if I was in Riddhima's place I'd feel a tad intimidated by Armaans...it's just the aura he creates..but I mean don't get mee wrong..he's a tad intimidating in a good way..definitely not a bad way!! LOLL. I especially like how you've showed Riddhima to be this independent woman, not influenced and easily swayed away by men using their wealth on her to buy her expensive things..that in my opinion makes her stand out from other women that Armaan has dated....and something that he should respect about her..which I know her doess lol. Though the way she brought him a samurai sword...was special..I've heard and seen of people buying other people meaningful gifts..but this was definitely a unique gift she got him...and what I liked the most was that she was able to match it up to his personality as well, she so easily percieved the image of the REAL Armaan, not just what he pretends to show on the outside....which shows that in just such a short amount of time..they're created a bond/connection..which takes certain couples years to reach...seee they're sooo meant to be!! Hahaaa.
"Wow! What a sexy hunk! Those eyes'and he's obviously smitten with you, Riddhima," was Muskaan's comment the moment Armaan had gone.
ROFLingggg! I feel like this is something one of us love struck Armaan/Karan lovers would blurt out the minute he left. For sureee he is a sexy hunk...and his eyes my god...were the first things I noticed about him....like Muski said they have this wicked spark in them, they're beautiful, they're captivating, they're breathtaking, they're just perfect!! I feel like there aren't enough words in the dictionary to describe his eyes..haha...or his dimples..or any of the rest of the features one that gorgeous face of his! LOLL...now I knoww Jia you're rolling your eyes thinking..damnn this girls needs to stop and get on with my FF..lol.
Oh lalaa...dynamic in bed huh?? Hehee...not going to elaborate on that comment...*don't kill me for saying this* but I agree with Muski on this one as well LOL ;)
So I realized that Rahul hasn't popped up in any where in this fic yet, so I'm guessing he'll be coming in shortly to sweet our Muski off her dainty little feet lol. Or maybe it'll be Hate at first sight?? But then again thats how it always is with them..and you seem to have a knack for going your own way...soo lets see what you have in store for us...as long as he's not one of those nasty lil online pervs I think we'll live lmaoooooo
Okay so along with Riddhima and Muskaan's relationship.. I have to say I love the bond between Sebastion and Armaan as well...for a boss-employee(butler) relationship..they act more like best friends..and thats actually very nice. I like how even though Armaan knows he has a high prestige status in society, he's very grounded in some ways..and not treating his employee's as if they are inferior to him. ANDD Sebastion..mann this is one classy butler he has..from his preferences of Ballet to flowers to even being a skilled Gourmet chef was it?? Andd he has a liking for Riddhima...not in that way obviously..but still that's brownie points right there as well!! Lets see what he plans for AR's dinner date...!! Should be a nice romantic set up I'm guessing..
Oh and for the very first time I'm seeing an insecure side of Armaan, a fear that he might just be rebound love for Riddhima?? This is a first..and to be honest I'm not saying I'm happy he's scared..it's just nice to see he's not Mr. Overconfident 24/7....but lets see..this should be interesting when Armaan and Riddhima and Abhi meet...very very very interesting!!
Jia hun, I hope all is well with you now..it's been a while since we've talked..but I"m just hoping everythings okay with you and your family now *hugs* I'll be waiting for your next update....which brings me to my next point...with each part you write..you can see that it's a very well thought out one..which just makes your parts..worth the wait!! :p Muahhh I hope I did justice to your part with my comment loll.
Love youuuu,
Mira🤗
Edited by ..Mira.. - 16 years ago
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