RM FF-Pyaar Main Kabhi Kabhi UPD pt 19-pg 59 18/4 - Page 32

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsugar

Haila....rahul made noodles for muski.😍..how cute...agar mere liye koi itney pyaar se noodles banata toh i would have eaten again even if i was full..😆..hahha.....Besides nice update i will be eagerly waiting for fridays n saturdays now.....plz try n cont asap

With Love
Saba

Haha same here,yepp will continue today!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: miss.sonia

awesome and sad

sadforus thyat you cant update every day now
awesome for the part

So sorry! Wil try my hardest to post atleast two updates in a week!It may be a bit ahrd this week,but wil try harder next week onwards!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: princess4120

this was a reallllllly cute part.. love the mother son convo.. and the brother sister convo was touchy.. i cant wait to read about the sangeet.. and you know.. totally looking forward to the day that rahul proposes to muskaan.. the way he would do it.. i cant wait.. this boyfriend boyfriend thing is funny to read.. hehehe.. anyway.. thanks for adding me to the list.. looking forward to the sangeet.. and reading more.. take care

well its good that you liked it,I was a bit enrvous whether people would like this part coz it was bit of a drag.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: dipi_dipu

awwww that was vert cute part!!!! it too sweet of rahul to make noodles for muskaannnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks Deepali,yeah I would faint if he made me noodles lol lol
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: coolmimz

AWW....WAITING 4 THE NEXT UPDATE

will update soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ritsranveer

hey pls update soon!!!!!

Yepp I'll try and do that!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Pyaar Main Kabhi Kabhi

Part 14

Recap: Ranvir goes back to the rehabilitation centre,and Rahul reveals Muskaan's sari that he had bought for her.

Muskaan stared at herself in the bathroom mirror,she stood there smiling,suddenly realizing that she had to hurry up and get ready.Muskaan sprayed some water on to her face,and wiped it using a towel.She undid her hair which had been tied up and removed its many knots.She went outside in her room and grabbed hold of her outfit for the evening.It was a beautiful blue and gold lehnga with some beading on it.She went into the change room and came out trying to fix up the back.She was about to explode with frustration as she attempted putting it on.

Muskaan-Nikita! Nikita!..Uff kaha gayi ye.Nikita!(yelling)

Nikita-Kya hua Muskaan (in the distance)

Muskaan-Nikita ye,uff yaha andar aa ja.(yells at the top of her voice)

Nikita-Muskaan main busy hoon,maine nail polish lagaya hain,so main haathon ke saath kuch nahi kar sakti(yells at the top of her voice)

Muskaan-Uff,isse bhi nail polish abhi hi lagani thi.Main kya karoon(about to start biting her nails then realizes she just painted them in the morning)

Muskaan-Ma!!Ma!

There was no response,the door suddenly burst open with Rahul striding in to the room.Muskaan immediately turned the other way trying to hide her bare back.Rahul held her eye as she started moving backwards.

Muskaan-Rahul thodi der baad main aa,main change kar rahi hoon.

Rahul-(laughs) Muskaan,main kar deta hoon.

Muskaan-Nahi Rahul,jao yaha se.

Rahul-Muskaan!Idhar aao.

Muskaan is now backed up against the wall,not knowing what to do as Rahul moves closer to her.She looks around the room and finally looks down at the floor,trying to hide her embarrassment.Rahul puts his hand on her jaw and lifts it up.

Rahul-Don't worry,main aankhe band rakhoonga.

Muskaan-Toh phir tum bandh kaise sakoge?

Rahul-Good question,lo main kar deta hoon,trust me.

Muskaan-(turns around,Rahul immediately pretends to close his eyes,then opens them,he quickly ties the multiple strings and looks over Muskaan's shoulder to see her face.)

RM music playing

Rahul kisses her neck and the twirls her around so that she could face him.They both stare into each other's eyes and smile.Rahul kisses Muskaan on the forehead and then on her cheeks.Muskaan moves away from him and goes and sits in front of the mirror to do her hair.She fixes it up and leaves it loose.Rahul decides to help her with getting ready and passes her all the jewelry,he fixes the back of her necklace and stares at her.Rahul then passes her a payal,Muskaan attempts to bend down and put it on,but due to the heavy lehnga she is unable.Rahul realizing this,bends down on the floor and ties the payal around her ankle.He hits the bell playfulyy,so that it makes a noise.Rahul then puts on the other one,this time bending to kiss her foot.This gesture sends shivers down Muskaan's spine and she gazes at Rahul lovingly.

Nikita enters the room,throwing open the door whilst looking like an ultimate mess,as the residue of the face mask still lay on her face.

Nikita-Kya hain Muskaan?

Muskaan-Don't worry problem fix ho gayi.

Nikita looks over Muskaan's shoulder to find Rahul getting up from his seated position.She starts smiling and folds her arms as she smiles.

Nikita-Oh I see,problem solved.

Muskaan-(blushes)Nikita,chal main teri madad kar ti hoon,yeh tumne face mask bhi theek se wipe off nahi kiya.Abhimanyu kya sochega?

Nikita-(laughs)Abhimanyu ko shock karne ka hi plan bana rahi thi.

Muskaan scrambles out of the room to go and help Nikita to get dressed.After half an hour Rahul's mom,Nikita,Rahul and Muskaan step out of the house into the car.They had planned to reach early so that they could make all the required arrangements.Nikita stepped into the car wearing a sea green and blue lehnga,with her tresses straightened.Rahul's mom sported a smile and wore a red salwar suit that suited her figure.Rahul stepped into the car wearing a cream sherwani along with a red duppata laying loose around his neck.

Everyone got out of the car and went their individual ways.Nikita and Muskaan went upstairs to Ridhimma's room to see if she was ready.They found Ridhimma to be wearing a gorgeous pink designer lehnga.Ridhimma looked truly beautiful,and she was blushing even more intensly as the day to her wedding came closer.It was only in three days time that Armaan and her would be a happily wedded couple.Anjali smiled at the sight of her little sister,she wore a green sharara,that made her look ravishing.

Everyone came downstairs to see that the place was brilliantly setup.Armaan and Ridhimma sat together looking at each other.Armaan was on the verge of fainting due to Ridhimma's avatar.Ridhimma on the other hand,was blushing red due to Armaan's consistent side glances at her.

Shashank-Come on guys!Kuch gaana bajaana ho jaye!Something like that.Chalo aaj Sangeet hain.Rahul,start something.

Rahul-Ji sir,something!(looks at Muskaan who rolls her eyes at him )

Song starts playing Soniye ve (Dhak Dhak Dhak)

Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak Rahul starts singing,Muskaan smirks as he does.

Make Some Noise...

Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak Rahul comes next to Muskaan and nudges her,Muskaan glares at him.

Let' s Scream...

Come On Come On Now..Break To The Beat Get Down Rahul and Muskaan pull up Armaan and Ridhimma.

Come On Come On Now..Sing It Along Soniye They make their way to the dance floor.

Dhak Dhak Dhak Mera Dil Dhadke ..Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak Rahul nudges Muskaan once aagin and pulls her in closer.

Tere Bin Tere Bin Dil Na Lage.. Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak Armaan nuges Ridhimma and pulls her in closer and winks.

Dhak Dhak Dhak Mera Dil Dhadke Abhimanyu joins the two and takes Nikita to the floor.

Tere Bin Tere Bin Dil Na Lage He cutely brushes his finger past her nose(Kuch Kuch hota hai style)

Jab Jab Dekhoon Tera Mukhda Haseen Akhiyon Mein Milne Ki Khwab Saje Atul winks at Anjali,who is embarrassed by the gesture.

Tujhe Doli Mein Bhittah Ke Teri Maang Saja Ke Lejaoonga He comes up to her and pulls her onto the floor.

Mein Sab Se Chura Ke

Oye! Soniye Ve Soniye Mere Naal Aaja Soniye, RM,AR,AA,AN all dancing together moving to the beat.

oniye Ve Soniye Mere Naal Aaja Soniye

Soniye Ve Soniye Mere Naal Aaja Soniye, Soniye Ve

Soniye Mere Naal Aaja Soniye

You're So Beautiful

You Got The Moves But You're In Control They turn to ball room dancing

O Meri Sweet Hot Soniye,

You Make Me Hip, You Make Me Hop,

So Lets Beat It Non-Stop all the girls step on their partners respective feet,moving away and giving them attitude.

Kehthe Hai Pyar Kise Aaj Humko Yeh Bathla De Muskaan comes closer to Rahul and gives him some attitude and moves away.

Got My Beating No Stopping,

Everytime I Got You Looking At Me Rahul comes closer to Muskaan and starts moving her back.

Crazy Call You Baby Now!

Ho.. Kehthe Hai Pyar Kise Aaj Humko Yeh Bathla De Nikita does the same as Muskaan and moves away from Abhi.

Matlab Pyar Ka Deewane Zara Samjha De Ridhimma asks this to Armaan and gently hits his cheek.

Rakdon Kadam Tum Apne Jahaan Par Jaan Wahi Hum De Denge Armaan,Rahul,Abhi,Atul lay to their feet and bow.

Itni Ijaazath Raab Mujhe De De Sajde Mein Ishq Ka Karloon They get up and twirl them into their arms.

Haan Tujhe Doli Mein Bhittah Ke Teri Maang Saja Ke Lejaoon The girls let go off their grip and walk away giving some more attitude.

Mein Sab Se Chura Ke

Soniye Ve Soniye Mere Naal Aaja Soniye, Soniye Ve Soniye They dance individually in two rows facing each other.

Mere Naal Aaja Soniye

Soniye Ve Soniye Mere Naal Aaja Soniye, Soniye Ve Soniye

Mere Naal Aaja Soniye

Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak

Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak The guys chase the girls around the room.

Out Of My Mind, When You Think That M Crazy

Crazy Little Thing Called To My Lady

Thats The Asina, Indian Hip-Hop Generation

Singing One Word Soniye To The Nation (Nation Nation )

Chodd Ke Mein Apno Ko Tere Saath Kaise Jaaoon Ridhimma asks this to Armaan

Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak

Ho.. Chodd Ke Mein Apno Ko Tere Saath Kaise Jaaoon she goes around Muskaan,Nikki and Anji

Ajnabi Rishton Ko Soch Soch Mein Ghabraoon

Hogi Kami Mehsoos Na Inki Ithna Khayaal Mein Rakhoonga

Kehna Sake Jo Baath Zabaan Se Aakhon Se Teri Padh Lein Armaan responds to her question and Ridhimma stares at him in awe.

Ho.. Tujhe Doli Mein Bhittah Ke Teri Maang Saja Ke Lejaoonga

Mein Sab Se Chura Ke Rahul pulls Muskaan in closer.

Hoye! Soniye Ve Soniye Mere Naal Aaja Soniye, They all dance together once again,and they finish in each other's arms.

Soniye Ve Soniye Mere Naal Aaja Soniye

Soniye Ve Soniye Mere Naal Aaja Soniye, Soniye Ve Soniye

Mere Naal Aaja Soniye

All the couples come out of their eyelock's except Rahul and Muskaan.They continue staring wildly at each other.Everyone starts clapping and wooting as they notice them two to be engrossed in each other's eyes.

Random-Kaahe toh inke bhi shaadi kar le?

Random-Haan,dekho kitne cute lag rahe hain ek doosre ke saath.

Rahul and Muskaan suddenly come out of their eyelock to notice that everyone is staring at them.Muskaan turns to move away from Rahul when she gets pulled back to him,In the process of dancing,her necklace had wound itself around a loose thread on Rahul's sherwani.Rahul stares at Muskaan even more intensly.

Muskaan-Rahul,meri necklace.

Rahul-Oh,haan(they both attempt to quickly undo the knot as everyone continues to stare at them,they both bend down at exactly the same time,clashing their heads against each other.

Muskaan-Ouch,piddhe ek kaam theek se nahi kar sakta!

Rahul(laughs,knowing that Muskaan was going red due to everyone staring at them,the necklace comes undone.)

Rahul stares at Muskaan as she makes her way up the stairs,to join the rest of the girls.Someone comes and taps him on the shoulder.

Shashank-Beta kahe toh shaadi karloon?

Rahul-Huh (embarrassed looks down)

Shashank-(laughs and pats him on his back)

Rahul sheepishly grins,as Armaan,Atul and Abhi come around to him and pat him on his back.Rahul looks up the stairs once again,waiting for Muskaan to come down.

Precap:Sangeet continues,Ranvir comes to stay permanently.The girls enjoy their mehndi night.

Aright guys that was the next part.I am sorry,that the next update will not come till next Saturday.I know left you guys on a bad turn.Hope you guys enjoyed the part,I enjoyed writing it! Lol specially the Random talking bit.Hehe So do comment and criticise.Thanks for reading!

Cheers,
Radhika
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Posted: 16 years ago
AWSOME JOB SAMBHA!!!!! I was going to put this song in my ff, but I'll choose a different one now. 😉 Can't wait to read ahead. Sorry I would comment more but i have to study for my bio test yaar. 7 chapters reviw karne hain for wednesday. first test of the semester so I have to do well warna med school will turn into a far off dream.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

AWSOME JOB SAMBHA!!!!! I was going to put this song in my ff, but I'll choose a different one now. 😉 Can't wait to read ahead. Sorry I would comment more but i have to study for my bio test yaar. 7 chapters reviw karne hain for wednesday. first test of the semester so I have to do well warna med school will turn into a far off dream.

Gabbar

Aww thanks for taking the time to read.Good luck Komzie!Med school awesome.Sorry stole the song,lol luv Shahid!Hez too cute!
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Posted: 16 years ago
gud job....keep on goin this way!!

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