AR ff:Dancing to your tunes...smallprt pg94 1/5

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Sammy

@-ArohaAngel-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#661

short but a very well written part.....great job hun

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zeebo

@thatsroughbuddy

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#662

Such a cute part! Really loved it!

Hope you continue soon with a longer one!

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Tangled

@iTangled_25

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Posted: 15 years ago

#663

Reserved! *holds ears*
I know I'm late.

*edited (4/5)

Honey I'm sorry sorry sorry sorry, so sorry, I dunno where I got so caught, dont ask me.
Anyway, leave all of that. Coming to your story,.. Sumedha, this was a very much a time pass part, no offense, but the story hasn't moved at all, this will not do, the part was not micro mini, but then the no progress part that makes me sad. Of course, the writing has been excellent as always, The scenes are cute, but then they are cut short, ended abrupt in a few places, they could have been elaborated, specially the romance part, Jeez, the DMG stuff is affecting your parts, this will not do, how about you go to Youtube and watch those old DMG episodes? ❤️
So we can get nice updates, and in my case I can also get nice dreams, 😳

Pretty please update soon. I want to see a PM update from you in a weeks time, the maximum I can wait, or else I'll spam this thread! Hmph!
So save me the trouble and update! ⭐️😳

Also get yourself capable of the romance! This time its not a request 😈
be a good girl and update! 😳

congratulations once again for getting through those exams! ⭐️

❤️

Steff 🤗

Edited by -Steffz- - 15 years ago

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Dhruvika

@dhruvikaluvsKSG

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#664

awesome ff dear

just came through it

loved it

plzz add me to ur pm list

thx

luv dhruvika

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~sumedha~

@~sumedha~

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#665

Originally posted by: kash fan4ever
Wow Sumedha!
What a lovely update!

I so wanna explore the ocean life now! haha

I really loved all the scenes! Cant wait to see what happens next.

Please update soon and do PM if possible 😊

hey.....
if you ever get a chance you must must must go under the sea.....i cannot even explain how beautiful it is down there....like a totally different secluded world!!!!
i've gone snorkelling and in a submarine but i wanna go scuba diving once!!!!
love
sumedha