SaJan&MayUr FF/Cant Help Falling 4u/Pt7 pg19

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zoe

@cute mayur

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Posted: 16 years ago

#61

really nice update!!

keep up the good work!!!simply loved it!!!

cant wait for the next part:]

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shrishti gupta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#62

Love the update! Do update soon n thanks for the pm!

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.BarunSanaya.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#63

hey it was awesome but next time a long update !!!!!!!!! it was fab do continue soon and thanks a lot for the pm!!!!!!!

luv

hema

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tanya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#64

wow it was nice update pls do cont soon

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RapChick101

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Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#65

hey it was nice but thoda chota tha.........nxt time it shud b big....

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MoNayaHolicPrag

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+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#66

wah bahi wah kya amazing update hai its really amazing

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Khushali

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Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#67

nyc update..........thanx 4 ur pm.......lovd tis part.......ab jaldi sajan ko mila do......

luv,

khushali

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Monica

@_Monu_

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#68

HEY NICE UPDT!!!

TOO GOOD!!!

BUT PLS NEXT TIME MAKE IT LONGER!!!

LOVE THE UPDT!!

CONT SOON WHEN U GET TIME !!!

SEE YAAA!!!

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

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Posted: 16 years ago

#69

GR8 YAAR....WAITING FOR NUPUR'S ENTRY

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talkativetaurus

@talkativetaurus

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Posted: 16 years ago

#70

Part 5

2 days later. Its Sunday morning. Samrat is sleeping. His mom shouts.

Mom : Samratt .... wake upp ....

Samrat pays no heed. His mom comes to his room.

Mom: Samrat , get up u lazy fellow.

S: *he turns n off to sleep* mom its sunday !

Mom: yes, its sunday . dont u remember di is coming today . arent u going to pick her up ?

S: *gets up with a jerk* omg! nupsiii.

Mom: what ? whose nupsi ?

S: errr.. no i mean di ... yeh di is gonna back ... give me 20 mins ... i ll be on the dining table.

Mom: ok fine.

After breakfast , he leaves for the airport.

At the airport london arrivals come out, but samrat has still not reached.
A simple and sweet girl wearing a long frock and untied hair waits with a hand bag and a suit case. All of a sudden Samrat comes and closes her eyes. Nupur realizes her bhai has finally arrived.

N: Bhai , i knw its u. so atlast u have reached. i was thinking to catch a taxi

S: hey nupsi, how cud u do tht when ur young , smart and handsome bhai is with u , *he flies his hairs with his hands*

N: *giggles* yeh right right. but whats this nupsi. cant u call me di or else tumhari khair nahi. *they hug*

S: come on nupsi , i have always been calling u nupsi .... u r my sweet nupsi di ... *he holds her cheeks tightly*

N: ok ok come on lets go . everyone will be waiting for us at home. but first take me to the mall. i want to buy something for mom n dad.

S: hey nupsi , cudnt u buy from ur grt LONDON.

N: bhai *she makes a baby face* please.

S: okay!

They leave for the mall.

Coincidentally Nupur - Samrat and Gunjan reach the mall at the same time.

N: bhai r u coming with me

S: *yawns*

N: o ok i knw .... bohat badaa ehsaan kiya yaha lakar.

Nupur gets inside. While samrat roams here and there in the mall after parking the car. Gunjan came from the opposite side. She was walking when she bumps on Samrat.

G: oh my goodness ... *she turned to see who it was* cant u see?

S: excuse me miss.... u shud knw how to walk.

G: *she lked at her fallen thing* uff ... whts all this ?

S: its nt my fault .... i didnt do anything ...

G: spoilt fellow ....

S: what ?! i didnt hear u properly ... come again

G: its not my fault if u didnt .. HEARING PROBLEM! *she murmured*

S: hey miss ... dont go beyond ur limits ......

G: wow ... gotcha ... u can hear this .....

S: look u dont knw who i m ...... i m mr ...

G: *interrupting* i dnt want to knw! but if u like to tell then go on .... mr .... ???

S: II ... I

G: oh so u r a failure in ur kindergarten too ..... poor fellow .... hey u knw what i can teach u ....

S: you ... just ... you ...

G: yes .... V ..V .. now ur turn ...

S: hey miss .... i m nt a kid like u .... u can play this game of urs with someone else.

G: really ? gosh wasted my precious time with u ....

S: i wasted!

G: fine , now can u give me my cell phone please.

Samrat didnt notice he was holding Gunjans phone. He gave it to her and went away to lk for Nupur. Gunjan left. After finding Nupur.

S: Nupsi . chal lets go .... i m tired ... are u done ?

N: yes. but whts the matter .. r u ok ? u look upset. u want something frm me ?😉

S: nothing nupsi ... come no ....

They leave.

***

Next day at the college. Samrat and Nupur came to college in their car. Gunjan came in her car, but Mayank was not with her for some reason. Nupur left the car soon since she had to do few formalities. Samrat was parking the car but he cudnt get any place to park. Another car was wrongly parked. He horned but no response. He lost the temper and came out of the car.

S: cant u see i m parking the car. i cant do it bcos of you.

Someone came out of the car and said ... "Sorry...."

Samrat was shocked to see it was Gunjan.

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Thats it. please leave ur comments. a small credit to my friend born_leader aka aimen.

next part - mayank - nupur meet.

it wud be nice if those who wish me to pm press 'thank you' button on the first page, cos it bcoms diff to pm all of u ...... thanks all of u *muwaah*

Edited by talkativetaurus - 16 years ago

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