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Posted: 19 years ago
Welcome back & now do continue this fanfic...
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hey can you give me the link to fan fic "hum ko tumse pyar hai"
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Originally posted by: bbhhaavvnnaa

hey can you give me the link to fan fic "hum ko tumse pyar hai"

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=134472&K W=hum+ko

Sorry for being late... 😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
Hi guys,

Thanks for welcoming me back 😃 . I need more replies on the poll and then I will continue my FF. I have been busy shopping 😳 and has been taking my parents Credit card 😈 😃 ... 😳

I will continue soon 😳 ...
BTW I have started typing in 'HUM KO TUM SE PYAAR HAI'so will post the part up soon.

Sanya*
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Posted: 19 years ago
Sanya--
Welcome Back
I have just finished reading your fanfic and its awesome!!!
I really like your writing!
👏 👏 👏 Great Job 👏 👏 👏
Plz do continue (sooner is better! 😳 😉 )
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Posted: 19 years ago
heyy sanya! welcome backk = ] uhm the link for the poll wont work for me = [ lol and continuee soon!!

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: pakigal34

heyy sanya! welcome backk = ] uhm the link for the poll wont work for me = [ lol and continuee soon!!

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yea same here it wont work for me either, but welcum back!!!!! i'm sooooo happy ur back!
btw i hope u did good on ur exams
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Continued…

The leap of three months.

Kripa looked at her watch, it was 6:30. He is late again and this time thirty minutes late. She stood outside the shopping mall holding hundreds of bag! She groaned... 'Stupid, idiot what does he think of himself… Girls take time for shopping. Khud kya kar raha' she said making rude faces to herself. Suddenly she got a call from someone, her face lightened up as she saw the screen name;

Hello

'What?'

'This is the last time I am warning you Neal, I can't take it anymore' she said frustrated!

'Kya samjha karon, khud he kehte ho Girls take a lot time to get ready and for shopping and when it comes there time to do some job, you make silly, stupid excuses'..

'I have been waiting for you for last thirty minutes!'

'If you do it again, I won't talk you for whole one month.. get that!'

'What…. Angad?'

'no… it's o.k.'

'bye and not love you'

With that she ended the phone call angrily, mumbling to herself'

After ten minutes, a red sports car came in front of her. She opened the door and sat in and banged the door back!

Angad smiled at her angry impressions. Kripa turned sideways to see Angad smiling at her.First she softens but her Angad is still there and comes over her again.

'what are you looking at… you Bandar' she snapped at him angrily!

Angad smiled. She looked cute when she is angry, mad. He pretends to be angry at her and drives away completely ignoring her.

Kripa notices this but then feels sorry for hum. Then again it's not her fault, Neal told her he'll pick her up after the movies and together they will go to the movies and it cancelled again. This is not the first time, it happened seven times already!

Angad reached out his hand to change the station of radio as he did it. The song came on;

'Who humsay hufa hai….' (sorry I don't know the song)

Kripa switched off the radio as she was already not in the mood. Angad then turned on the radio, kripa then again switches off the radio. This happened quite few times when finally kripa put the radio back off and put her hand on top of it so that Angad can't turn on the radio.

Kripa smirks as Angad can't put the radio back on, she has mischievous grin on her face. Angad notices this and smiles again. 'yeh mujhe kya hor raha hai main uski har ada pay khush ho raha hom? Why?'

Right then Angad cells ring, he accepts the call and speaks on the ear phones.

'Hey man '

'You should have given me the warning'

'nahin it looks like I am sitting near the atomic bomb!'

Kripa eyes him madly and turns away with crossing her arm on her chests'

' yeah.. K. I'll try!

'Sure hold on..'

He then passes his mobile phone to Kripa and disconnecting the ear phones from the phone.

Kripa just looks at him madly and before speaking on the phone she hangs on it and throws It on Angad and turn the other way.

As kripa turns the other way, Angad gets a mischievous smile. He turns on the radio again and this time Kripa did not bother to switch it back off, as she just there, facing thee window grumpily.

After few moments Kripa noticed the car stopped in front of the disco. Angad got out of the car and waited for kripa to get out. Kripa on the other hand was equally stubborn just there, starring at the window and pretended she did not noticed anything.

Angad waited for her five minutes but she did not come. So he stood outside and flirted with girls as they passed by him. Kripa saw this more frustrated and an idea came on her. She quickly straightened her self and got out of the car.

Meanwhile Angad on the other hand had already let the lady drool over his charms so that they can spent the night together, Angad's back was facing to kripa.

'Darling… where were you?' kripa said in quite charming and sweet voice, hugging Angad from the back. Angad on the other hand was not surprised at all as he was expecting this. He smiled to himself and pretended to be worried.

The girl glared at Kripa, 'Who are you?'

'Excuse me' she replied back

The girl looks at Angad and says 'Who's this?'

Kripa with her mischievous smile on, hugs Angad more tightly. She then pulls away from him, 'Darling mujhe akele kyun Bedroom choor aye'

The girl smile vanishes and gives a look at Angad and storms off. Angad meanwhile did not do anything just played along. He then looked at Kripa and raised his left eyebrow at her.

'Kripa darling, Toh main tumhare saath bedroom main kya kar raha tha?' he asked with a mischeavious glint in his eyes.

'Shut up Angad' Kripa snorted

With that she turned away and headed for the car again. Before she could move, Angad had already had her in his arms. She kicks her legs in the air, 'Leave me' she yelled.

Angad shakes his head as if 'Uff What a girl' and takes her inside the disco and puts her down.

Angad quickly put an arm around Kripa as he spotted Misty coming towards them.

'kripa.. let's go dance'

Kripa was sudden surprised by Angad's sudden change and looked around to find Misty heading their way. She smiled.

'Angad… why don't you go dance with Misty?'

'Misty?.... I see no Misty around here!'

'She is headind our way'

'Kripa I hate you when you do that'

Angad grip around her arm tightened and led her to the dance floor. Before he could dance with her, she saw them. Too late!

'ohh Man' Angad whispered

'Hey Angad' Misty said cheerfully as she approached them. She then eyed Kripa and her eyes caught Angad holding her arms.

'Hello Kripa' she greeted sarcastically

Kripa noticed the sarcasm in her voice and smiled at her. She knew from the start Misty liked Angad. They would make a funny pair, she thought.

'Misty, are you here on your own' Angad asked?

'No Bhai is here with me'

Kripa's smile suddenly vanished. Even though she has nothing against prithiv, she felt uncomfortable around him, maybe because he has crush on her. She sometimes felt prithiv starring at her oddly that made her more uncomfortable. She knew everyone would laugh at her if she told this Neal or Angad because it would be too hilarious.

'Angad… let's dance'

'Sure'

They both excused Misty and went for dance. Angad put his arms around Kripa and she put her arms around his neck. They were only best friends and nothing. Kripa, Angad and Neal were best friends now. There were no dares or games played by anyone.

'Angad'

'hmmm'

'Can I ask you one thing?' she asked

'yeh koi pooch nay ki bath hai' he replied, looking back to her eyes.

'Why don't you hang around with Misty, I mean she is your best friends?'

'I don't Kripa about this but whenever I hang around with her, I feel her behaving towards me strangely as if she likes me you know as Boyfriends and girlfriends!'

'Well isn't it good, best friends into boyfriends and girl friends?'

'Nahie I mean, I don't look at her like that way'

'ohh'

'Now can I ask you a question?'

'erm Sochon gi!'

'Kripa!' he wined like a kid

'Angad' she replied in a same tone.

They continued dancing.

'you are very mean' he pulled out his lower lip and made a puppy face. Her heart instantly melted.

'And you are very good at blackmailing!'

They then looked at each other and laughed.

'Acha pocho?'

'You and Neal? Bestfriends into a Couple? I mean how on earth did you ever think like that!

'Angad… not everyone thinks the same. She sighed. ' I know Neal from childhood and we shared everything from secrets to everything, we share a very good relationship, I don't how my feelings changed towards, it just did like naturally'!

She looked over at Angad to find him smiling, 'What are you smiling at?'

'Nothing, I am just surprised. You have found your husband. Ab mera kya hoga?'

'Hmmm…. I never thought about that. What do you want you dream girl to be like?'

'Well… Angad Khanna ki Dream girl should stand out from the crowd. She should be clever, intelligent, hot, modern and at the same time simple just like an angel'

'Wow Angad mujhe nahin pata tha tumhari choice aisi hogi! That's so sweet' she caressed his cheeks as if he is a small boy.

'Acha to tum ne kya socha tha?'

'I thought, you want some one like hot, sexy you know like those models lekin tum to…'

'main kya' he asked in naught tone

'Angad tum kabhi bhi nahin sudhro gay!'

They continued dancing, enjoying their conversation. They were Angad and Kripa, the best friends. Best friends who shared their feelings with each other openly.

Angad and Kripa came out of the disco, arms in arms sharing a laugh.

From a distant, we see someone standing; the men tightened his fist and left from there. He was the same stranger who blackmailed Angad…

They both headed towards the car.

'Oh ****!' Angad exclaimed

'What now! Don't tell me you left your car keys inside?'

He nodded in embarrassment and left. Kripa laughed to herself. 'Stupid!'

Meanwhile it started raining heavily leaving Kripa drenched. Her tops hugged her skin and it was showing off her skin. She hugged herself.

Few drunken men approached her.

'Hey sexy' one of them called her.

'Leave me alone' she replied sharply

'You got the guts lady!'

Kripa turned to get away but one of the men held her arms and pushed her towards the car. The men came closer to her and was about to kiss her, when Kripa kicked him in his ***.

The man immediately pulled away but came again on her telling the others to hold on her.Kripa struggled to get away but nothing helped as they were holding tight on her. The men came close to her kissed her cheeks, forcedly on her lips. Kripa cried for her help but no one came. Suddenly the other man put their hands on her mouth tried to lower her top.

Kripa tried to move since the grip was too tight, she could do nothing. She sobbed silently.

The men then ripped her sleeves. They were about to kiss her when someone grabbed his hand. They looked to find Angad starring at them with fierce eyes. He bashed all the men and hugged Kripa.

Kripa was in shock, she hugged him back. Tears rolled down her cheeks. Angad looked at her in miserable state, he felt a knife stabbed his heart. He felt his cheeks getting wet because of his own tears. He hugged Kripa again. He unbuttoned his shirt and put it on Kripa.

He picked her, seated her in the passenger seat. Kripa was numb. Angad is angry, furious on those people who made the state of her. He wanted to go and kill them right now.

They drove on the rainy roads. The rain was still heavy, lightening and thunder occurred.

On the other hand we see the same drunken men going towards the stranger. He took out cash of notes and threw at them and left in his car. 'Angad if you are out of the picture then Neal is nothing.' He laughed evilly… 'you just wait and watch how I make her mine'.

His cell rings, 'Oh… interesting. Just keep me updated!' With that he put the cell phone aside and smiled evilly to himself. 'Start counting your days Angad khanna!'

The preview:

What has the stranger planned for Angad khanna? Whatever it is I assure you that it is the main twist of the story! BIG SUSPENSE! Who is stranger actually?

Coming up: Angad and Kripa alone.

Good news: I will start to update my Fanfics a lot during next week or so. Look I promised you that after when I arrive from my trip frm Paris I will update it and now I did it!

I have not double checked the part; I have just typed in what came into my mind. I apologize for my mistakes. If you have any questions please do ask and I will be happy to answer, Anyway It's not like I am writing an essay or report so It's OKAY right!

I will now try to continue soldier and someone closed the topic! I am going to post all again so don't worry!

Love you all

sanya

Edited by shahidlover24 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
kool prt sanya!!!!....i wonder who the stranger it???...prithvi????.......i dont want neal and kripa together 😭 i ant neal and make some grl appear as nikki!!!! 😃 ...lol neways cont sooon!!!! 😊

xoxoxo- Hawa
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: hawoo

kool prt sanya!!!!....i wonder who the stranger it???...prithvi????.......i dont want neal and kripa together 😭 i ant neal and make some grl appear as nikki!!!! 😃 ...lol neways cont sooon!!!! 😊

xoxoxo- Hawa

Neal and Nikki? hmmm... I'll think about it.

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