Maslow's hierarchy of needs (AR FF) Pt 23 pg 153

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aravi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1151

SAM now this one was simply a wonderful wonderful part frm ur side!!!!!!! am so looking forward to their date but more than that i was wanting o read about angie's situation and wowoieee u handles that so wonderfully well(oops am using the word a lot hehe usually am short of praises n words for u but this time am short of time tooo)goodness a hell lot of things happened out here !!!!!! ankit now the guy has got it bad wat will tis lead to???? but the armaan was brilliant thrghout can't stop admiring him but then i feel clear words spoken help more then still going along with presumptions but tehn it's difficult to hurt someone u care for so much somehow i feel deep inside he has a notion of wat angie actually feels for him well dunno maybe am wrong!!! still i love the no -nonsense guy here and riddhiam is a sweet angel!!!!

but u got back with RM aww i was missing them ya!!! both are so much fun i enjoyed the quotelike anything seems like u like quoting mark twain right !!!!! well this is something dat happens to me most of the time but then my teachers also know me very well so then that's it n am in for a big lecture well i thot of writing a few words n ended up with this where i myself cant make amy head or tale out of it shucks!!!!!still i see some heart breaks coming up too but then

"For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it." .....

love ya

RV

Edited by aravi - 16 years ago

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Pragati

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1152

-reserved-
will come back later and comment after reading!!

P.S.thanks for the PM!

Edited by ksgaddict - 16 years ago

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Qwerty123rty

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1153

SAMMMMMMMMM!!!!! forgive me for the delayed comment but i simply loved the update and dude am soooo very glad that Armaan is finally clearing out whatever misunderstandings Anjali might be harbouring regarding their relationship...so very glad and uh oh Riddz refused for the trip around Bandra and the way he reacted...i liked it i think...he was justified in reacting like that but she did finally make up her mind to go back and do take up the offer for the trip planned by armi whose aim if i remeber correctly was to spend some more time with Riddz and figure out his feelings for her...which i m sure will be very interesting to read...

U doing a great job with the fic and am enjoying every bit of the updates...and is he going to take her to the same restaurent Atul takes Anjali to..if that happens...it wud be superb and there'll def be some fireworks..hehe..

and omg Ankit soooo in love...u know i can imagine Anjali stepping aside after realising that armi does feel for riddz and nothing at all for her...except friendship of course...but ankit...i smell some rea trouble there...lets see what you have in store for us...and love Atul coz he the most sorted person here...i like that...and Rahul and Muski...awww they both so cute...the classroom scene was wonderful...hehehe...loved that one...

am waiting desperately for the next part...do update soon...tommorow might be a busy day for me with tests and all lined up but will definietly check for an update...

Thanks so much for the PM sam...i really appreciate your doing that as i understand how tough it is to send out pms and with the countless readers u have..it surely is even more ardous for u....so thanks for doing it anyways....

thanks so much

great update!!!!!!

krati

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priya..

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1154

sam!!

Awesome part. I loved your characterizations..Anjali really does have a lot of guts to apologise in front of everyone!! and armaan finally did tell her the status of their relationship!..good for him..i guess he would still have to make it clear by saying the words...

Atul is very sharp..good thinker..absolutely loved Rahul's and Muskaan's part of the story..they make a cute couple!!!

Thanks for the PM and Can't wait for the bandra tour!!!

Priya

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Avanti

@forevercharmed

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1155

omg! first when ridz said no i was like noooo!!! but she finally agreed!! im so excited to read the next part!! this part was rocking! please continue soon!

Avanti

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Nidha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1156

waoh🤗 its really awesome on⭐️ mind blowing dear😍 so armaan ask her to out😳😳 but she said no😭 but when she agree its so cute one😍 plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉

"Har khamoshi ka matlab inkaar nahi hota,
Har nakamyabi ka matlab haar nahi hota.
Toh kya huwa agar hum tume na pasake,
Sirf paane ka matlab pyar nahi hota."

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madhsar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1157

reseved......

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hey sam.....how r u??? my hearfelt apologies for d inordinate delay...as i m in grade 11.... d past week was a whirl wind for me wid d farewell party n d investiture ceremony....but finally its all over....nyways now as d xams r approaching...its all hectic agn....nyways thanx awfully for d pms.....n abt d list of books......my u really have a long long list list of favourites....ill try to read dem after d exams...thanx a lot agn........

just managed to catch up wid ur ff...read all d last three parts at one go n i must say dat dey were exceptionally well written...luved d whole date bw armaan n ridz....especially d part where armaan gets angry at her n she apologises to him.n also d whole convo betn dem abt his childhood n his parents luv story.......abt d earlier parts..d interaction btn muski n rahul was vry cute...n ankit....romanticising abt smebdy was so funny....luvd atul's point of view here....n hpe anji finds her special smeone soon.....n knwing u ....it would happen soon too...it was vry brave of her 2 apologise like dat in front of everybdy....well waiting for d nxt update....do cont soon.....

luv

madhurima😛

Edited by madhsar - 16 years ago

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Suvarna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1158

Comments updated

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@bernard shaw

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1159

Originally posted by: hinanaziri
hey Sam

fab update hun
well stuff that u covered in this part made up for the missing date
and since we know its coming soon,i dont mind at all
now the part i loved as always coz
the characters are so real like people from our everyday lives
Anjali is one character i find the closest to reality ,all her emotions are so real yet special in her own way,the situation she is in is a regular one but the way u've made her and Armaan deal with it made it awesome! I must say ,i do get inspired with a few fics here,u'rs and nj's top the list,coz u make it believable

absolutely loved Muskaan in here,another strong ,full of life character
all her feelings i can so relate to
Atul always is a star,nj is actually debating over the Atul from my fic and yours,i can so see u'r Atul beating mine lolz
anyways

Ankit,for some reason i thot wud be with Anjie,i do find him selfish ,or may be i'm comparing him too much with Atul

Armaan's talk with Anjie,was just so needed and well done for covering all and still leaving that slight hope,it will sure make the story interesting

and finally Riddhima,her change of mind,haha,she certainly is great with her transparent emotions,Armaan's reply to her in the end was cute

i might have missed a lot i had to say,but thats it for now
will save it for the next time

oh yeh Anjali's public apology,very well written

ok me done i think
do update soon if u can
take care and hope work treats u better soon
love
Hina

Hi Hina, thank you for those wonderful words especially if you think the characters are believable, then I am really, really happy….I can empathize and identify with Anjali cos she is a strong character with all the flaws that go with one…and unfortunately she is in for some hurt…..I am glad you liked her public apology…Its is in keeping with her characterisation or so I believe…..

Yup Atul is a sweetheart, like I said; I thought it only fair that he should, at least in a fic, get his due!

Ankit is a lot different from the other two in as much he is lot more ambitious and focused though that does not necessarily make him a bad friend. its just that he is seeing things from his own perspective, which a lot of us are guilty of at some point in time……though I guess he comes a poor second to Atul in comparison….

Hey, I have read the short fic of yours but which fic is this that you are talking about? Please send me the link so that I can read it…I am piling up a whole load of them to read, lol, but shall hopefully get to read all of them this week once my deal is out of the way!

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@bernard shaw

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1160

Originally posted by: sanayq18
awww...sam...what a comeback yaar...i srsly loved this part...have been waiting for u to update for soo long...was caught up with tests and God knows what not..and today i got 4 updates which is like a realllllllllllllllllllllyy big treat...two from kiran one from u and one from nj...srsly..u guys should join some writerz community which is very prestigious ofcourse and im so sure uu guys are going to make it REALLY big :)...hehehe ok enough of my babbling....now here goes the detailed analysis of what i really liked about this part of ur ff

anjali was realllly really brave to apologize in front of everyone...but i sumwhere feel that she is still insecure about riddhima...i guess its high time armaan tells her how he really feels about her....this misconception should be cleared....muskaan is also very sensible to sort things over mentally before jumping into a relationship with rahul...even though i want that to happen real soon ;).hehehe lol...riddhima...well...she was wise to to go with armaan..after all hez being the ultimate gentleman here...dealing with anjaliz tantrums and riddhimaz mood swings and still exhibiting so much of endurance...hehehe...srsly...this guy has some unreal patience...very very understanding too...ohh...n i loved the part where muskaan saves rahul from the professorz scolding session...the way he caught her off guard...staring at her...made me go all awwwwwwww....hehehe...well...overall..it was a complete entertainment package...from apologies...to tantrums to laughs...tears...and a great ending ...it rocked...

Sana

Young Sana, thank you for the wonderful words! Am so glad that you liked the part…I must admit was a little worried whether it would be liked since it was essentially emotions and conversations and the general expectation was the date! Thank you for the kind words about making it big, made my day, though the other two you mentioned, in my opinion are far most creative and brilliant writers!

Oh Anjali is insecure about Ridhima alright cos while she will not admit it, she can see the writing on the wall! Too early for Armaan to confess to Anjali how he feels about Ridhima when he is struggling to admit it to himself, but he has specifically told Anjali that he has a bond with Ridhima that has been formed instinctively without a conscious effort on his part…as they say "samajhne wale ko ishara hi kafi hota hai"

Yup, Muskaan just saved Rahul's skin…one more reason for the guy to be in love with her!