Mini AR - Trace your dreams (completed) - Page 37

loved the last part... very cute ending

Hey, had started your FF just like that and the seemingly weird plot made me read further. I have got weirder habits, so I guess I understand Riddhima and her habit well 😉. I must say it is a beautifully penned story. You ended it at a correct point.

The best written part in the entire FF, according to me, is Riddhima and her thoughts in the rest room after knowing about Armaan and Nikita. If you are planning to writer anything else, I am eager to read.

hey harika,

hey harika...

thanx for writin such a lovely ff... loved each and every bit..
come up with your next one soon and do remember to let me know abt it

Archana

aww hehe such a cute part!! it was kind of a fast forward, but then as u said its a short FF, so it makes sense to do that..

awwwww...cute part...its sad uve ended it ..but ended it nicely...lovely work

reserve chaiyyala?

oho yar ye kya kiya
ok u have to gimme time to come back with loads of comments now
i can't believe u ended it
i cud actually hear the echo of the ravana laugh


re edit:

hey Haru
I'm finally here
right so lets start wid the comments
told u i loved the last line of the previous update ,
just loved the way u made i all clear
him asking the coffee shop guy about the opening hours had me awwing
its just fantastic ,the way u weaved the whole story yar
loved the bit when they think of reasons to tell the parents of her night spend
all the coffees on the menu haha,
and it all going down well with Nikita was even nicer
wow the proposal but not really was cute
then the dropping back home ,the confession
awesome!
she kisse him ,cool
loved the part when u said they met every 2-3 days after that and they had their share
of agreements and fights,keeping it all real😆
and the parents not objecting ,fantastic👏
getting married in 8 months hmmm
why do i sense a deja vu from all this😆
are wah,two kids as well ,shriya and shaurya nice names,
so now i know whats been cooking in your head madam
u know i watched hyderabad blues 1 and 2 yest ,duno wat had got into me
so made me miss u and Ria
ok back to topic

lemme read again to re-re edit

niks settling wid abhi ,wish it were the same in the real DMG
the dream about the guy in the register office was hilarious
tracing her dreams she found her soulmate,so sweet yar
and the M 's in her life god!

Absolutely loved this brilliant short fic from u Haru
it gave me a great friend and a reason to believe and trace my own dreams
it was great anticipating the updates on sundays
i know u mite not be starting anew one until you're back
but me will be waiting ,do so as soon as u can
can't handle the gloom on sundays 😆
ok jokes done
it was truly amazing hun
your updates always made me smile
thoroughly enjoyed every part of this fic
c u very soon with a new one
i'm sure it'll be as crazy as this one,dont mind if its an intense
have fun
and miss me😆
lots of love
Hina

Originally posted by: hinanaziri

reserve chaiyyala?

cheskondi madam 😃

Originally posted by: ashluvdmg

reserved

edited!!

awww mann!!dis ws reli cute n sweet part...

ohh nooo!!fic ends huh!!chay!!

bt de bst ending eva....

till de end u jst sticked 2 de name"tracing ur dreams"...

totally commendable......hats offf dear!

luvd every bit of dis ff....

dnt eva stop riting ff s!!u r sureli one of de gem of riters!!

so do temme wn u rite ny ff..

wil b waiting 4 ur ff...

luv u lts

crazy ashu

thanks ashu 😊 will def pm u for nxt ff

Originally posted by: bollywoodqueen5

loved the last part... very cute ending

thank you😊

Originally posted by: noe23

Hey, had started your FF just like that and the seemingly weird plot made me read further. I have got weirder habits, so I guess I understand Riddhima and her habit well 😉. I must say it is a beautifully penned story. You ended it at a correct point.

The best written part in the entire FF, according to me, is Riddhima and her thoughts in the rest room after knowing about Armaan and Nikita. If you are planning to writer anything else, I am eager to read.

thank you😊 ya, i wanted to end here without dragging. i like that part of ff too, will write a new ff after a break of 2-3months...if i get a writing attack i may write sooner, not sure...thanks for the interest dear

Originally posted by: arvanu

hey harika,

it was a very beautiful ending!!!!!!!!!great job,dear!!!!!!!loved the dialogues u wrote in......it was just perfect!!waiting for ur next FF soon.....

-surbhi😊

thanks surbhi😊 thanks for ur interest dear