'Ankahey Rishtey' - AR FF(The End pg113) 11/07/09 - Page 15

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey rucha
i had not read this ff of urs
belive me i did a mistake seriously
n when u sent me the pm i read it from the begingin
n enjoyed it a lot
its just full of fun n masti along with the emotional touch its beautiful dear
keep pmin me
update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

UPDATE SOON.....

WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART TO COME...

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey,
Really nice update....👏...sorry for commenting late but i was busy with my exams...thanks for the pm and continue soon....

love,
sameera😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 9

RECAP: AFTER THE WHOLE MENTAL TURMOIL RDAHIKA DECIDES TO TELL KARAN THAT SHE LOVES HIM...

Next day

AR's room.. Ridhhima got up to get Ridhaan ready for his play school nd asked Armaan to get ready too.. After a few minutes Armaan shouted her name..

A: Ridhhimaaaaaaa…. Mere kapde……….
R: wahin bed pe rakhe hain armaan.. (she replies back)
A: nahi hain aake do na plzzz…….
R: coming…. (to Ridhaan) shonu you finish your milk mama abhi aati hai okk….

She entered the room to find him fully dressed nd ready to go..

R: tumhe to kapde nai mil rahe thhe na.. to phir ab kya pehna hai..
A: (holding her by waist) arre main bahana nai banata to tum aati kya..?(making a puppy face)
R: nahi.. aur ab main ja rahi hoon.. tumhe subah shaam sirf romance hi soojhta hai..
A: (naughtily holding her back) arre ab aagayi ho to ek kiss to de jao..
R: nahi armaan.. koi aajayega.. chodo..
A: nope.. pehle kiss..

She was trying hard to free herself nd suddenly she started to tickle him he was laughing like anything , grabbing the opprtunity she tried to run out of the room but Armaan held her arm.. he pinned her against the wall.. their bodies were pressing against eachother, he looked from her eyes to her lips nd without a word he kissed her lips.. she was caught off guard but still responded nd that small gentle kiss turned into a long passionate one.. they broke apart when they heard Radhika calling them for breakfast..

**scene change**

At Sanjeevni

Locker room

Radhika was there before time.. She was really excited that today she'll pour her heart out to Karan.. But she feared what if he says no..? Kitna ajeeb agega ek ladki ek ladke ko propose karti hai nd then the guy says NO.. She knew she'll be broken.. but yet wanted to give it a try coz she had seen AR living each second of their lives with extreme happiness just bcoz they are in love..TRUE LOVE.. She saw Adi entering in.. Her scared nd confused face did not go unnoticed by him.. nd YES he was already told by his partners that Radhika was going to spill the beans today, so he was happy..

Adi: hey Radhika.. itni tensed kyun ho..?
Rad: kuch nai Adi..ek case ke baare mein soch rahi thhi..
Adi: case ya Karan..?
Rad: (surprised) how do you know..?
Adi: (filmy style) humare jaasoos charon taraf hai jaani…
Rad: (she smiled at his statement)
Adi: achha chal ab bataa kya baat hai..
Rad: main vo..vo maina aj..main aj Karan se.. kehne waali hoon…..
Adi: kya kehne wali hai.. (acting confused)
Rad: Adi mazak matt kar yaar I'm tensed.. usne mana kiya to main toot jaungi.. pehli baar kisi se pyar hua hai..
Adi: don't worry yaar.. negative kyun soch rahi hai.. who zaroor haan hi kahega..
Rad: thanx Adi.. you've always been a gr8 friend..
Adi: Hmmm vo to main hoon… achha chal caf chalte hain.. coffee pe aur dimag thanda kar..

Whole day she first decided to talk to Karan but then her courage gave away.. she used to follow him nd ask him stupid questions to cover up for her act.. Even Karan was surprised, Radhika Verma, who was not even replying to his apologies till yesterday was now kind of following him everywhere.. Ofcourse he was loving the attention he was getting but yet was abit confused as to why is she behaving like this..

After their duties in locker room it was only Adi, Karan nd Radhika others had their night duties.. Adi purposefully left early so that Karan nd Radhika can talk..

Rad: ummm..h..hh.hi Karan..
K: Ravs hum din mein kayi baar mile hain to phir hi kyun.. (raising his eyebrows)
Rad: (timidly) Karan.. I..I..I need to speak to you..
K: so what are we doing..
Rad: umm..nahi yahan nai..
K: okk chalo cafe chalte hain..
Rad: nai Karan caf nai.. kya tum mujhe 5 min. baad parking lot mein miloge plz..
K: sure.. tum chalo.. main bas Dr.Rahul ko yeh file dekar ayaa..
Rad: okk..

She went towards his car nd stopped.. "kaise kahungi uss se yeh sab..?" she thought.. she kept murmuring to herself "Kitna stupid hai.. dekh nai sakta ki main uss se pyar karti hoon.. khud akar pehle nai keh sakta.. kya karun bohot darr lag raha hai.."
As she completed she felt a hand on her shoulder..

K: kis se darr lag raha hai tumhe..(pause abit) kahin meri uss din ki harkat ki wajah se to nai.. (when Armaan punched him) see I'm sorry for that day..
Rad: (kicked herself mentally for making him feel so guilty) Its okk Karan..
K: so what is it..? tumne kya baat karni hai..?
Rad: ummm.. Karan v..vo..vo...main..main..
K: arre yeh main kya laga rakha hai bolo bhi..
Rad: (she closed her eyes nd blurte out in one go..) I Love You..

She opened her eyes to find him standing in utter shock.. He stood there like a statue as if still recollecting what happened just know nd midst of all this only word he could say was "NO"… she was scared now..

K: NO..yeh nai ho sakta..
Rad: kya matlab yeh nai ho sakta..
K: main tumse pyaar NAI kar SAKTA…
Rad: nai kar sakta ka kya matlab Karan.. (she was in tears now) you have sumone else in your life..?
K: nai.. but I can't love you..
Rad: why (it was only a whisper)
K: kyunki main yeh nai kar sakta.. Ajj tum mujhse pyar karti ho.. ho sakta hai kal na karo..
Rad: kya keh rahe ho tum jante bhi ho.. If you don't love then tell me clearly.. STOP giving me those lame excuses..
K: excuses…? I'm doing this for you only.. main tumhare sath sath apni zindagi ek bar phir kharaab nai kar sakta..
Rad: ek baar phir..? kya matlab Karan..
K: kuch nai Radhika.. Its just mujhse dur raho..
Rad: par kyun..
K: main reason dena zaroori nai samajhta..
Rad: yeh meri zindagi ka sawal hai.. I need a reason got damit..
K: enough.. (he said looking down with teary eyes) main tumse pyar nai karta.. bas yahi sunnna thha na tumhe..
Rad: yahi sab mujhse nazrein milake kaho Mr. Karan Shergill…
K: (he looks at her) main...main tumse..main tumse pyar.. plz Ravs just let go off it ok..
Rad: see you can't say that.. coz you were lying.. YOU LOVE ME.. nd now I know that..
K: plz Ravs kyun apni aur meri life complicate karna chati ho.. you know nothing about me or my family or my PAST..
Rad: mujhe kuh janna bhi nai Karan.. all I want you to say is YOU LOVE ME OR NOT..?
K: (pleading now) please Radhka.. drop this thing here.. lets be frnds pehle ki tarah..
Rad: (sarcastically) pehle ki tarah… ab kuch pehle ki tarah nai ho sakta.. tum mujhse jhoot bol rahe ho that you don't love me.. nd I promise I'll make you confess one day..

Saying so she left for home.. today she didn't go to AR's place she went to her own house where she used to stay alone at the time before she met Armaan.. she cried all night nd didn't allow Armaan, Ridhhima or Adi to come in.. she kept herself locked in that house for three days nd cried her eyes out.. She didn't let anyone to even talk to her but she knew that one day or the other she has to go back to Sanjeevni nd HER FAMILY so she decided to join in again..

After four days as she walked the locker room she found Jai nd Aash questionig her about her health.. Ridhhima has informed everyone that Radhika is not well that's why she is not coming but Adi nd Karan knew the reason.. Adi wanted to talk to her but stopped as he saw her eyes.. Her big beautiful brown eyes were swollen nd red.. he knew she needed time to be herself again nd was all prepared to help her in that.. As karan started to approach her, he stopped as Adi shot a piercing look at him..

At the nurse station

Ridhhima was giving the duties.. she gave Adi nd Radhika duties tgthr.. Jai nd Aash thgthr nd Karan alone in ICU..

R: Dr.Aditya aapki patoent Mrs.Singh ka case kaafi critical hota jaa raha hai so from now on Dr.Rahul will be working on it nd you'll be assissting him coz you have all the case history..

As all of them started to go..

R: Dr.Radhika.. report to Dr.Armaan's cabin right now..
Rad: but mam meri duties..?(she tried avoiding any convo with Armaan nd Ridhhima on Karan)
R: tab tak Dr.Aditya aapki duties dekhenge.. nd do as I say NOW.. (she said firmly)

Armaan's cabin

Rad: may I come in sir..?
A: come in please..
Rad: sir aapne bulaya thha..
A: baitho Radhika.. (she sat opposite armaan nd next to Ridhhima) ab kaisi ho tum...
Rad: I'm fine..
R: (placing her hand on hers) Radhika plz... hum tumhare apne hain..nd we do have a right o know ki kya hua..
Rad: yes bhabhi you do have that authority.. par abhi nai plz ..
A: see radhika tum sachai se nai bhaag sakti.. face it.. nd I PROMISE to help you all through it..
Rad: ......she told everything in between her sobs..
Rad: vo mujhse.. main kya karun bhabhi.. mujhe pata hai he's lying..
A:........was fuming with rage.. Woh hota kaun hai tujhe reject karne wala..
R: armaan... calm down.. humein khud ko radhika ko dono ko sambhalna hai..

Ridhhima gave Radhika a tight hug nd asked her to promise 'Never ever to lock herself all alone as she did a few days ago..

THIS WAS THE CONFESSION..I KNOW IT WAS COMPLETELY OPPOSITE OF WHAT YOU GUYS HAD EXPECTED BUT THATS THE WAY I'VE PLANNED THIS FF TO GO.. MY OTHER FF IS ALL HAPPY ND LOVING BUT THIS WILL BE ABOUT CHANGING RELATIONS ND TRUE LOVE..
PLZ DO COMMENT ND POINT OUT MY MISTAKES IF I'VE DISAPPOINTED YOU IN ANY WAY..

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Posted: 16 years ago
waoh👍🏼 its really awesome one⭐️ superb😛😉 so totally change😳 in story😃 why karan say no to her😕😲 plz continue it soon😛 and thanks for the pm😉

"Kuch Iss Tarah Se Hum Tere Nazdek Aa Chuke,
Khud KO Tere Wajood Ka Hissa Bana Chuke,
Ab To Hamare Dard KI Koi Dua Kero,
Hum To Tumhe APna Mashia Bana Chuke."




Edited by kvn1983 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
👏
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ....AR scene toh ☺️
nd wht that karan rejected radhika😕
anywy continue soooooooooooooon dear
eagerly waiting for next part
Love ya🤗
Neha......

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Posted: 16 years ago

hey rucha...awesome n fabulous part yaar👏

karan rad ko reject kiya...wts the reason
is it abt tina..who is she...reveal the mystery yaar
hope AR help rads
thx for pming me
cont soon
Edited by riddhima1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: riddhima1

hey nidha...awesome n fabulous part yaar👏

karan rad ko reject kiya...wts the reason
is it abt tina..who is she...reveal the mystery yaar
hope AR help rads
thx for pming me
cont soon



Hey u made a mistake in my name..
I'm RUCHA not NIDHA.....

MYSTERY IS YET TO REVEALED I'VE NOT YET PLANNED HOW TO REVEAL 'TINA' AS A CHARACTER...
SO STAY TUNED..

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey rucha
i have read your both ff they are going really well dear keep up the gud work.
karan ki dewani mithila
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyy rucha di!!! amazing part!!!👏....omg that is so sad!!! karan rejected radhika?!?! why???? he loves her!!!!! plzzz reveal is past quickly!! can't wait to see them together!!!! plzz cont soon and thanx fr the PM!!!

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