~*~*~FATINY~*~*~(RN/RM FF)Ud- PAge 146--9/1/2010

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@RadhaKrishan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#851

hey,i added u in the frnd list and about the update
it was awesome....great part
The way raj say sorry was so good
no one can remain anfry after that
and RM part is also very gud

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388456

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Posted: 16 years ago

#852

HEY......i finally just caught up wid this fic....each time i used to think i will reply after reading the last update posted by u and each time you outdid me in posting a new update, earlier than i could reach the end.......hehehe......this is the first time i guess when i am replying but in all i wish to tell you that you are an amazing writer.....and reading this fic is like memory revisiting......u know the very first fic which i read on IF was " A strange feeling called love...."...at that time i wasn't a member, therefore i couldn't comment so plz accept my late appreciations for that as well.....hehe....i know thada jyada late ho gaya.....par i promise i would try to leave a comment or press on the like button for the next time onwards.........And this update was extra uhum uhum extra special......*wink*.........clap clap..... I liked RM romance though i don't really watch DMG.....And guess what...i am in love wid rajveer all over again.....hehe

Tc....Bye....

Edited by sweet.dreamz - 16 years ago

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#853

the update was very nice..

Raj cannot stop his emotions everytime he sees naina...he falls in love with her all over again...his emotions get the best of him and he loses control. He feels guilty...but feels better to see that naina is not upset with him

The RM phone conversation was very nice. And also the talk that muskan and alekh share.

it is sweet to see muskaan trying to bring Meghna and Alekh together,,,

continue soon

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#854

Hi Dear How r u???

Update was full of romance...

Raj is at complete loss of word after seeing Naina..

He truely adores her..But he is becoming very naughty indeed..Way he teased Naina made me blush too.😉😉😉

Rahul n Muskaan r cute couple..Even Rahul was in a very naughty mood..Muskaan was surprised at his changed attitude...😉😉

Alekh n Meghna were too uncomfotable during their encounter..😆😆😆

Muskaan was wathching all this..I think she is trying to bring them together...

I am waiting for the party update..Raj is already bowled over by Naina...😛😛

But then its not anything new...Who is Huda's date????

Do update soon

Bye

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sania_58

@sania_58

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Posted: 16 years ago

#855

awsome update

very nice

plz continue soon

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#856

Good, romantic n cute update. 👏 👏 👏
This was truly wonderful after so much ups n downs in their lives. Raj was romancing with Naina n the thing which happened b/w them was obvious, how can someone control himself when he has such a beautiful, lovely n s**y girlfriend with him in a silent room. But Raj did that which i even didn't expect with him.
Muskaan n Rahul r getting more n more romantic now. Specially Rahul. I really liked the way he flirted with Muskaan. DMG me us ka character bahut bakwaas hai but here this is really nice. Muskaan went to meet Rahul for only 5 minutes but it take her long. Their scenes were romantic n passionate.
I know some would happen b/w Alekh n Megha. Good that Huda found his date for the Party n Muskaan is going with Alekh. Interesting precap.
waiting 4 Saturday.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#857

that was really sweet and romantic too

plz continue soon

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Rituka

@rituka7

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Posted: 16 years ago

#858

when will u update
waiting for the update

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sweet.melody

@sweet.melody

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Posted: 16 years ago

#859

Please update soon Tina.. when you get a chance to!!! 😃

- Shilpa

Edited by ibdt2004 - 16 years ago

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Tina

@-Tina-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#860

Muskaan cleared her throat..

Muskaan-Khana acha hain Megha..

Megha-Umm thanx!!..

Muskaan gave Megha an evil smile !!..

They continued to eat...

Rahul-Muskaan....woh raj ek party plan kar raha tha na weekend ke liye...uss main please megha ko bhi add kar dena....aur haan mujhe bhi...hum dono yahan akele hain...humein bhi happening loggon ke saath rehna hain...

Muskaan smiled..

Muskaan-Sure!!

Rahul-Muskaan...tujhse kuch aur baat bhi karni thi..

Muskaan-Haan bol..

Rahul-Woh mere aur megha ke baarey main..

For a second muskaan was like what????

Rahul-Muskaan...dont give me that look....bada ganda dimag hain tera..

Muskaan-Mera dimag ganda hain..us din phone par toh tu.................................

Rahul smiled...

He made an innocent face..

Rahul-Main kya??

Muskaan gave him an angry glare....he smiled..

Rahul-Acha ab sun na..

Muskaan-Haaan haan bol..

Rahul-Dekh...KMA ko thoda happening banatey hain.....dekh main aur megha apni zindagi se ekdum bored hain..

Muskaan gave him a questioning look..

Rahul-I mean..umm...humarey professional life se bahut bored hain....you see meri personal life toh rocking hain..

Megha laughed...joru ka gulam !!

Rahul-Muskaan hum kya KMA main timepass ke liye guest lectures de saktey hain....

Muskaan-What??

Rahul-Haan...crazy idea hain lekin...dekh...megha ne bahut padai kar rakhi hain...personality skills and all that....communication and all that.....i mean KMA ke cadets ko ek behtar insaan bananey ke liye...personality development skills....you know they'l make better cadets...aur cadets ko regular life se break bhi mil jayega....atleast haftey main ek baar..

Muskaan-Idea bura nahi hain...main apneey seniors se baat karke dekhti hoon..

Rahul smiled...How KMAish !!

Muskaan-Aur tum kya karogey???

Rahul-Well ...main cadets ko pyaar ke kahani suna sakta hoon...

They all laughed..

Rahul-Umm on a serious note...main unhey painting ya music ke baarey main koi idea de sakta hoon...main unhey apne padhai se kuch waqt ke liye durr akh sakta hoon....

entertainment ke liye...actually aggar mera kuch nahi bhi hoon toh forget it...megha ki baat zaroor karna..

Muskaan smiled...Rahul made an awesome friend !!..

Muskaan-Main baat karkey dekhongi !!..

Rahul-Thanx baby !!

Megha raised her eyebrows..

Rahul-ummm thnx muskaan..

She smiled..

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Back at KMA muskaan narrated everything to Raj and he decided to speak to BC about it..

Convincing BC was not a tough job since he was already in a very good modd....he readily agreed for Megha's guest lecture.....

Raj informed muskaan about it..

Muskaan-Aur rahul ?

Raj-Rahul ki baat abhi tak nahi ki hain....we need a valid reason na...of what he can do...

Muskaan-Sahi hain...aggar aadmi itna bekar hain toh koi kya karega..

Raj laughed..

Raj-Aur BC se ek hi din main kitney cheezein....lekin tu tension mat le...rahul ko bhi entry dilwa dengey...

Muskaan smiled..

Raj-Which reminds me Megha ka mock class hain ....is saturday ko....cadets ka feedback liya jayega...aur aggar unhey pasand aaya toh she'l be fixed for once a month or once a week...ussey bol dena..

Muskaan-Kool...thanx a lot bhai...I love you !!

And she gave him a hug !!..

Raj- Megha deserves this yaar !!.... I feel so bad for her !!

Muskaan smiles !!

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Cut to the the party in the night !!...

At the party...When Raj saw naina come out he was mesmerized...she looked drop dead gorgeous in her golden netted saree....showing her perfect curves..

A smile played on her lips....Her hair open light make-up simple jewellery...just the way Raj liked it....

He smiled and moved towards her..

Raj-Naina !!.... God !!... I just missed an heartbeat seeing you !!..

Naina smiled..

Raj-Youre looking really nice !!

Naina-Thanx....youre looking good yourself too !!..

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The party began in full swing..

Aalekh and Muskaan choose to sit down and chat for a while..

Muskaan-Kya baat hain Aalekh?...Khoya hua lagta hain?

Aalekh-Nahi toh..aisa kuch nahi..

Muskaan-Pakaa?

Aalekh-Haan baba...main theekh hoon..

Muskaan smiled...did he even know he was speaking shudh hindi even at the academy when megha wasnt around..

The lights turned on and Tanvi stood there..

Tanvi- Ladied and Gentle man....may i have ur attention please....

They all silenced and turned to hear her..

Tanvi-this party is kept in honor of Captain Rajveer singh Shekhwat...The best captain of KMA...On behalf of my batch I would like to say that Sir we are totally proud to be called ur cadets...and we are very thankful that we assisted you in the most important mission of your life...

Sir as a medium of our love and respect for you...we would like to present in front of you all a small presentation made by none other than our tech savy and my hot date for tonight Cadet. Yadhuvansh sahani..

There was a big applause..

There was a voice over with stills on the Over head projector..First pics from his training days...

Sameera gave the dub from behind..

Sameera- Cadet Rajveer Singh Shekhwat...An ordinary cadet with extraordinary capabilities....Who has proved this during his training period at KMA...

Every person who knows him will vouch for his patriotism and his dedication...He was an excellent cadet who came out with great colours..

Things in his life changed when his best friend Captain Navin Singh Ahluwaliya was declared a traitor...The only mission of his life was to prove him innocent...which he indeed was....

We cadets are proud that we were a part of the most important mission of his life ....his mission to Prove Captain Navin singh innocent.....

Presentations stops...lights come back

Sameera- -- Sir today on this joyous occasion we proudly present to you proof that would prove your friend innocent...We have the oral confession of Aditi who has accepted to everything...all her wrong doings in the past....everything....she also had given links which prove Captain Navin Singh absoluetly innocent.....

Raj was teary-eyed...what did he just hear??....

BC steps in..

BC-Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhwat ...please forgive me ...Navin is absolutely innocent....we will give him the same respect as we do to the other MARTYRS OF OUR COUNTRY !!..

Naina looked up...there were tears in her eyes too !!..

She felt a hand on her shoulders...she dint look back..

"I told you Naina...one day they will call Navin Singh a martyr.."

She turned around to face the person...She was shocked...She manged to smile after....

Naina-Aap yahan?

Sameer-Kyun nahi aa sakta??

Naina - Not like that..i mean..

Sameer-Shh !!... Listen to BC...yeh sab baad main..

Bc-Kal subah hum captain navin singh ke tasveer wall of fame par lagayengey....Captain Rajveer Singh aap yeh khud karengey..Aapkey saath Captain Navin singh Ahluwaliya ki behen Naina singh Ahluwaliya bhi uss tasveer ko apni jagaha lagayegi..

Naina looked up shocked...how did he know????

BC-abhi ke liye....enjoy the party !!...

BC left...

Raj turned to Naina..

It was the happiest moment of their life....

They both had satisified smiles on their faces..

At the same time there were tears in their eyes...Raj was so proud of his cadets....but how did they manage all this ?.. He decided to find out all that later...

Sameer turned to Raj

Sameer-Captain !!

Raj-Sameer...tum yahan...kaisey hoon??

Sameer-Theekh hoon....

Raj-Sheetal kahan hain ??

Sameer moved to show him sheetal enter...she looked gorgeous in a transparent light blue saree...looking stunning!!

He went up to her and hugged her..

Raj-your looking hot !!

She smiled..

Sheetal-Stop flirting with me...

Raj smiled...

Raj-Lekin tum yahan kaisey?..I mean i dint even tell u anything..

Sheetal- Jaisey bhi aayi...jaaney doon na..

She spoke looking elsewhere..

Raj was wondering why she dint look at him in the eye...

Raj-Khair...ab chalo...lets enjoy the party..

She nodded...

The lights were dimmed and the music began....it was time to dance...

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Ok so this is the next part...sorry for the delay....i almos posted the ud yesterday late night....but then again there was a power cut....too many power cuts out here...soo irritatin...lol !... nyway....thanx for all ur comments on the previous ud !!..... nd hope u njoy this one too !!...

luv

tina!