Kaise Kahe Hum(RN fic)'The Concluding Part' pg. 99 - Page 76

Originally posted by: rituka7

very hot and romantic part
too good
i loved it
update soon

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Dear

How r u???

Wat can I say abt the update..I was speechless ..It was really very romantic

Bye

Do update soon

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was really good
plz cont soon

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

a very romantic update... finally after such a long time..naina and raj's relationship has become complete...they have accepted wholly and completely...

waiting to read your next part...continue soon

Originally posted by: nihatri

hot yaar

Originally posted by: pinka28

@MAHAK
i am really sorry
mujhe lagta hai mera kha tumhe bura laga and as result tumne apni update change keri

FIRST main khan chahungi mera irda tmhara dil dukhane ka ya tum apni update change kero aisa bilkul nahin tha

main bas kahn chahti ki ye IF ka rules....that content should be put on IF considering all age group ....mera nahin
maine kahin ye nahin kha ki mujhe aisa lagta hai .... and plz agar kisi ne bhi koi report ki about fic to yaar vo maine nahin ki ( ho sake to man lena )
yaar aisa ho chuka hai ki update ki content ki vjha se fic ban ho gayi thats why i just tried to draw you attention towards that "Mere Jeevan Saathi.." bhi ek fic thi usko mods ne ban ker diya just for the same reason
main nahin chati ki aisa is fic ke sang ho
and as frnd and fan of this fic main chati thi age k liye tumhe ye baat pata ho

age tume chahe jo bhi kerti vo mujhe acha hi lagta ....chahe jo bhi....
kyonki writer ka full apna decision or mind vo kaise fic likhe kyonki ek fic uski apni creation or imagination
vaise bhi tum itna acha likhti i can't suggest you anything in your fic to main tumhari fic ko change kerne ki baat to kabhi nahin kah sakti

plz tum apni fic ko vapis pahle jaisi ker do [jais ki mujhe pata chala hai kitumne use change ki hai meri vjha se]

as great frnd and fan of this FIC SHAINA did tried to realize my mistake
thanx SHAINA mujhe btane k liye that i did a mistake, not by saying all that becoz i am still saying maine vi badlne k liye nahin likha tha sirf btane k liye likha tha ...
BUT i am saying sorry by hurting all of you

SORRY TO ALL AND MAHAK AND SHAINA

tc
pinka

Originally posted by: vvdn

Hii Vertika,

update is awesome...it's most awaited update n way toooooooo romantic to say anything😳
update sooooon.

Originally posted by: varshita

Oho sorry yaar, mai yahan kitne dino se nahi thi aur na jaane kaafi kuch choot gaya na is fic ka, mai read hi nahi kar paayi ki last updates me kya hua hai.

But don't worry asap mai read kar k reply de doongi.

Hi Vertika

How r u????😊

It was indeed one of your finest fictions….👏👏👏

I really loved the way u expressed this story..It was not a fairy tale romance but a mature love story…😊

Alekh was the most intelligent character in this story..

Way he bridged the gap between Raj n Naina was commendable..It was bcoz of him dat both Raj n Naina found their lost love…😛

Raj was too guilty coz he always blamed himself for Vaishali's death ..He didn't accepted Naina's love coz he was not able to forget the injustice done to Vaishali…

Unknowingly he has become the reason for her tragic death…

Naina was guilty too ..She hated herself for not believing in her love..

Ritu misguided her n she believed her more dan Raj whom she loved dearly..

Raj n Naina dono hi ek dusre se opyaar to karte the par who ek dusre pe trust nahin klar sake jiski wajah se yeh sab problems hui…

Kisi ne sach hi kaha hai pyaar karma to aasan hain but usko nibhana utna hi mushkil…Vishwas ke bina pyaar ka koi matlab nahin hota…

Apu was a real support of Naina ….

Raj ne Vaishali se shadi to ki par usko apna nahin paya..Woh chahkar bhi Naina ko bhool nahin paya…Vaishali mein usko Naina dikhti thi..

Vaishali ka bhi isme koi dosh nahin hai..Woh bechari to kuch janti hi nahin thi…Agar usko pata hota to who Raj n Naina ke beech kabhi nahin aati..

Ritu jaisi na jane kitni girls hai jo pyaar ko badnaam karti hai..Ritu Raj se pyaar nahin karti thi… Ritu ke liye Raj ek junoon tha jisko who har hal mein pana chahti thi …

Pyaar to khushi deta hai gham nahin..

Finally end mein saari problems solve ho gayi…Raj ko sach pata chala n who kitna shocked tha …Ritu ki dosti ne uska sab kuch chhen liya…

Raj n Naina ke beech ki sab problems door ho gayi n dey were happy now…

End mein sirf itna kehna hai….

" Pyar koi bol nahi, pyar aawaz nahi
Ek khamoshi hai sunti hai kaha karti hai
Na ye bujhtee hai, na rukti hai, na thahri hai kahin
Noor ki boond hai sadiyon se baha karti hai
Sirf ehsaas hai ye rooh se mehsoos karo
Pyar ko pyar hi rehne do koi naam na do
Muskarahat si khili rehti aankhon mein kahin
Aur palkon pe ujaale se jhuke rehte hain
Honth kuch kehte nahi kaanpte hothon pe magar
Kitne khaamsoh se afsaane ruke rehte hain
Sirf ehsaas hai ye rooh se mehsoos karo
Pyar ko pyar hi rehne do koi naam na do"

U r a brilliant writer Vertika n koi kuch bhi kahe hamesha likhti rehna..Bahut kam log hote hain jo shabdon ko kahaniyon mein piro pate hain..😊😊

Bye

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Vertika

How r u????😊

It was indeed one of your finest fictions'.👏👏👏

I really loved the way u expressed this story..It was not a fairy tale romance but a mature love story'😊

Alekh was the most intelligent character in this story..

Way he bridged the gap between Raj n Naina was commendable..It was bcoz of him dat both Raj n Naina found their lost love'😛

Raj was too guilty coz he always blamed himself for Vaishali's death ..He didn't accepted Naina's love coz he was not able to forget the injustice done to Vaishali'

Unknowingly he has become the reason for her tragic death'

Naina was guilty too ..She hated herself for not believing in her love..

Ritu misguided her n she believed her more dan Raj whom she loved dearly..

Raj n Naina dono hi ek dusre se opyaar to karte the par who ek dusre pe trust nahin klar sake jiski wajah se yeh sab problems hui'

Kisi ne sach hi kaha hai pyaar karma to aasan hain but usko nibhana utna hi mushkil'Vishwas ke bina pyaar ka koi matlab nahin hota'

Apu was a real support of Naina '.

Raj ne Vaishali se shadi to ki par usko apna nahin paya..Woh chahkar bhi Naina ko bhool nahin paya'Vaishali mein usko Naina dikhti thi..

Vaishali ka bhi isme koi dosh nahin hai..Woh bechari to kuch janti hi nahin thi'Agar usko pata hota to who Raj n Naina ke beech kabhi nahin aati..

Ritu jaisi na jane kitni girls hai jo pyaar ko badnaam karti hai..Ritu Raj se pyaar nahin karti thi' Ritu ke liye Raj ek junoon tha jisko who har hal mein pana chahti thi '

Pyaar to khushi deta hai gham nahin..

Finally end mein saari problems solve ho gayi'Raj ko sach pata chala n who kitna shocked tha 'Ritu ki dosti ne uska sab kuch chhen liya'

Raj n Naina ke beech ki sab problems door ho gayi n dey were happy now'

End mein sirf itna kehna hai'.

" Pyar koi bol nahi, pyar aawaz nahi
Ek khamoshi hai sunti hai kaha karti hai
Na ye bujhtee hai, na rukti hai, na thahri hai kahin
Noor ki boond hai sadiyon se baha karti hai
Sirf ehsaas hai ye rooh se mehsoos karo
Pyar ko pyar hi rehne do koi naam na do
Muskarahat si khili rehti aankhon mein kahin
Aur palkon pe ujaale se jhuke rehte hain
Honth kuch kehte nahi kaanpte hothon pe magar
Kitne khaamsoh se afsaane ruke rehte hain
Sirf ehsaas hai ye rooh se mehsoos karo
Pyar ko pyar hi rehne do koi naam na do"

U r a brilliant writer Vertika n koi kuch bhi kahe hamesha likhti rehna..Bahut kam log hote hain jo shabdon ko kahaniyon mein piro pate hain..😊😊

Bye

hey thats true..Suhana is right kam log likh pate hai...n most r like me😆ye sab jo Suhana ne comment mein likha hai i just feel the same way par likh nahi payi😆but thanku Suhana..for writing on my behalf😉😆

anyways always keep writing Vertika.....😊